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Posted: 19 years ago
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just read the fanfic n it rocks!!! wow, kripa-bad girl!!!it's rly nice!!! do cont. soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#12
just read the ff
amazing start
cont soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#13
simply superb great fanfiction star 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#14
wicked part!!!!

i love ure fanfic 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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After few hours later kripa comes back home. She opens the door and was about to turn on the tight when she notice angad was fast a sleep. She walk in the dark and unlocks her closet. She takes out a small blanket and pillow then locks it back. Kripa puts the blanket on the corner of the room and lays down looking at ceiling, soon she falls a sleep to after thinking a lot. It was middle of the night and kripa had a nightmare again. She kept moving her head and sweating. Angad walks up and sees her. He gets up from the bed and goes close to her. After seeing her condition he shakes her.
A: hey…ur having a nightmare….hey get up

Kripa kept moving and all of sudden she jerks up from her dream and seats up sweating and breathing hard. Angad puts his hand on her shoulder
A: are u ok
K: jerks up)
A: are u ok?
K: wipes her face and forehead) yea im ok…sorry about that…what are u doing here
A: oh I heard u..I knew u where having nightmare so I tried to walk u up…
K: oh…thanks…go back to sleep…
A: u ok
K: yea im fine…go now
A: ok ( stand up and lays down on the bed. Angad looks at kripa who was lost in her thoughts and was in same passion. After few seconds later kripa get up and was about to get out of the house angad calls behind her
A: where are u going
K: work
A: looks in his watch) u work this time
K: small shift…I will be back in few mints (leaves)

Angad falls back to sleep and get up after few hours later. He looks at his watch and sees its 9 am. The same time kripa comes inside the house and sees angad stretching his arms.
A: see her) good morning
K: doesn't answer him and walks toward the bathroom) there is a towel if u want to take a shower and there is a new sop under the sink.
A: thanks
K: whatever
A: can I get a cup of coffee
K: im not ur servant
A: I know….but ur boss said that u will serve me.
K: low voice) ****
A: excuse me did u say some thing…
K: no…
A: by the way did u come back right now after u left in middle of the night
K: yea…
A: where did u go
K: none of ur business
A: fine ( get up and goes to bathroom to take shower)
Angad come out after half and hour with only a towel around him. Same time kripa come down from kitchen and see angad. She quickly turns away facing the wall
K: excuse me…
A: yea…
K: angry) ur breakfast if ready upstairs
A: thanks
K: do u need anything else
A: no im just looking for what to wear …..hey witch one should I wear (pulls some cloths up showing her)
K: I don't care sir…
A: oh call me angad
K: I don't care angad…
A: why are u facing the wall turn around
K: ur not dressed…
A: so..I have towel around me….so tell me what should I wear
K: the one on the left
A: ur not even looking which one u picked
K: its ok…the one on the left will look good on u
A: ok..hey u don't mind if I dress here
K: shocked) what?
A: u don't mind if I dress here
K: yes I would….plez dress in the bathroom.
A: ok (leaves to the bathroom)
K: thinking) what kind of guy did raja put me up with


Moderator's Note:
Edited to remove inappropriate language.

Edited by shahidlover24 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was rly nice!!! do cont. soon n keep up the good work!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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After few mints angad comes out of the bathroom and kripa was looking thru her cabinet. As she hears the door open she quickly locks her cabinet.
A: how do I look
He was wearing blue jeans and white shirt with his jacket on top
K: ok
A: just ok or handsome
K: whatever…eat ur break fast I will be back in few mints
A: where are u going
K: work
A: can u stay with me plez for few mints
K:I cant
A: plez
K: fine…what do u want
A: have breakfast with me
K: im not hungry
A: did u eat
K: yes
A: its ok..eat again with me

Angad goes up and kripa fallows him. When angad reaches up he looks around. There was a sink and oven next to it. It was the same size as the room the downstairs. He looked at the table in the corner and breakfast was ready.
A: smells good
K: whatever
A: sits and starts eating
Kripa was looking around chewing gum and getting annoyed.
A: so what's ur name..u never told me ur name
K: kripa
A: krips
K: kripa
A: same thing
K: whatever
A: so what do u work
K: stupid question ..I guide people
A: were?
K: whats with stupid questions
A: just answer it
K: I guide people to where they want to go and who they want to see…like they want to see some drug dealers I lead them to their place
A: why are u doing this work
K: its none of ur business
A: fine sorry for asking
K: u should be…
A: so is that all u do…now u have to take me where I want right
K: yea..so
A: so when I was in home where did u go to work for
K: what the u mean?
A: what do u work at night
K: thinks and lies) I seal my self
A: looks at her and doesn't say anything)

After few mints of silence angad speaks
A: today I want to see around town
K: why?
A: becz I want to see the town
K: get to ur point man…I just want to lead u to ur people and im of this case…
A: no not yet…I will go to my target later but now I want u to show my around
K: listen I don't have time for this…
A: I will pay u…
K: ok sir…where do u want to go
A: smiles to her)

Kripa goes to her car.
A: hey how about if we walk instead
K: fine with me

They walk around some stores
K: ok here u could get any kind of food u want (whisper) there is a hole under this place..that's were they hide their drugs
A: oh…how about that store (points at a store)
K: oh that's a kids toys place (whisper) when they load toys..they puts some drugs inside the toys and that's how they transport it to other people
A: oh ok

Kripa shows him more places and tells him everything about every drug places she knows
A: can I ask u a question
K: yea what is it
A: how do u know all this
K: smiles to him and continues her talking about each stores but doesn't answer his question

The sun was sitting and they were walking by some places. Kripa was eating an apple in her hand when she stopped. Few guys came in front of them smiling to kripa.
G1: hand us what u got
K: yea yea..move out of my way ( she tries to walk when they block her pate)
K: move I said
G1: I said hand over what u got
K: or what?

One guy rises his fist and tries to punch her when kripa caught his fist with her right hand and still taking bite of her apple that is on her left hand
G3: why u ?
The guy 3 tries to hit kripa when angad holds his fist.
A: woooow…is that how u guys deal with lady's
G4: who the hell are u?
A: smiles to them) friend
G5: friend my ***…beat him

The guys attacks angad and angad falls on the ground. Kripa looks at him and smiles. She sees a small wall place and sits her self there watching angad get beat up. The guys starts punching angad. Every time angad gets punched kripa takes bite of her apple and laughs at him. Angad get up and wipes edge of his mouth that was bleeding then smiles to the guys. Angad takes of his jacket and throws it on the ground and starts beating all the guys up. He kicks and punches till none of them could get up to fight back again. When he stops he looks around him the guys laying. Kripa starts clapping
K: nice shot dude. Wow
A: goes and picks his jacket up. He hits his jacket few times till the dust comes off.) ur welcome
K: I never asked for u to fight for me
A: they would have killed u
K: first of all they cant even lay hand on me then how can they kill me…
A: rises his eye brow) are u strong…
K: laughs under her breath) u don't know me yet
A: u say something
K: no lets go and party…
A: where
K: its time for me to sing…
A: ok lets go


Moderator's Note:
Edited to remove inappropriate language.
Edited by shahidlover24 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#18
WOW!!!! yaar, i am super impressed!!! that part was sooo good!!!!cont. soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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OMG that part was INCREDIBLE! IT was super cool!!! I cant describe it in enough words, well great job! Cont soon plz!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#20
i can soo see angad doin tat seen 👏 cont soon
himani 😃

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