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i love your story, continue soon. 😊
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GREAT PART!!!

omg i love ure new twist 👏 👏
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grrrreat part plzzzz con asap..
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Kripa went back home after her work was done. She opened the door and went straight to her room. She pulled the curtains and turned off the lights. The room was dark then she laid down on her bed. She closed her eyes will some tears starts rolling down her cheek. She got a flash back of angad. As she remembered his face again she got up quickly and wiped her tears.

After few mints later sasha came home. She made dinner for him but made excuse that she already ate…. later sasha went to sleep. Kripa stood by her window waiting for the moon to get out. Today was carwachut. She still fasted even though she hated angad. She wanted to hate him a lot but still in some corner of her heart she loved him a lot. For passed 5 years she always fasted for anagd but no one new and some time when some one gives her food to try she tells them she cant eat it or makes and excuse.


On other hand u see a big house were everyone is running around and the womens yelling the moon came out. All the women's go up to the chat and does their poja. The only person that was in his room who had tears was angad. He took out kripas picture and just stair at her. He missed her a lot. After kripa left home…angad became really mean to his family…the only person who he talked to was his mom and dadaji. Angad stood up and went by the window looking at the moon. He got flash back of kripa when she fasted for him then when he saw her throwing the food away. He smiled to him self remembering her always fighting with him….he laughed when he remembered the funny things that happened….all off sudden his smile disappear when he remembered her crying and leaving the house. He just stared at the moon.
A: I miss u kripa….were are u…plez come back…I really love u..plez kripa

Kripa locked her door and did her poja. After when she was done, she went to the kitchen and eat something…since she was really hungry. Sasha woke up and came to the kitech and saw kripa eating
S: mom
K: sasha….what happen beta…ur not sleep
S: im not sleepy…..why are u eating now…I thought u were full
K: I was…im hungry now
S: don't eat to much…u wont be able to sleep
K: ok dad I wont
S: brush ur teeth to when u sleep
K: yes dad….now my turn…go to sleep
S: im not sleep…(sits next to her in the chair) mom
K: yes beta
S: vo….vo
K: what is it?
S: mom…were is my dad….
K: -----
S: mom do I have a dad…everyone at school has dad but how come I don't….i always see kids playing dad…I wish I had one too
K: u have a mom who some time acts just like ur dad….u don't need dad do u…u have me
S: yea but dad is different
K: im sorry jaan….
S: mom….u said dad died in car accident right
K: nodes her head) yea
S: are u going to marry again
K: was eating when starts choking) what?
S: are u going to marry again mom
K: do I have to?
S: if u don't want to no
K: I don't want to marry again…
S: why not?
K: will look now if I marry right…ur dad might become bad dad…u don't want a bad dad right…
S: no I don't
K: and what if he hates me later….
S: he cant hate u…I will beat his *** up
K: laughs) ur going to hate ur dad
S: he is not my dad if he doesn't love u
K: kiss her cheek) thank you jaan
S: mom
K: yea
S: im sorry
K: for what?
S: for telling u to marry again
K: its ok jaan….ur my son right…u have the rights to ask me or tell me something u want…remember never hid something form me ok….no matter what it is…just tell me I will not get mad even if its bad…I might a little but…its not good to hid things from me right
S: yes mom…..i always tell u….i promise I wont be bad son….
K: looks at him and smiles) really
S: I mean im not bad right now to…will maybe a little shaitan but I still love u
K: laughs) ok
S: mom…lets watch movie
K: its late at night
S: so…tomorrow I don't have school and im not sleepy…plez mom
K: ok lets go

They both sit down on the couch and puts on a movie….they start craking up and making fun of the people on the movie….soon both of them fall a sleep. Sasha was on the couch and kripa fall a sleep down on the floor since they were really tired.



Moderator's Note:
Edited to remove inappropriate language.
Edited by shahidlover24 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part i waiting when angad will meet kripa that would be awesome 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
awww very cute...cotninue soon i loved it....love KRipa and Sasha's relationship 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwwwwwwwww sooooo sweeeeeeeeeeeet
😆 cont soon cant waitttt
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Few days later.
kripa was off from work and she was at home. Sasha comes from school and inters inside. Kripa was sitting in living room looking thru bills. Kripa sees sasha come
K: hi jaan

Sasha walks straight to kripa and hugs her then starts crying. Kripa gets worried
K: what happen jaan?
Sasha continues crying. Kripas heart starts etching and she couldn't see him cry and she was more worried becz she never seen him come and cry in her arm like this. He was always laughing.
K: what happen sasha?
S: ----( hugs her more tight and keeps on crying)

Kripa gets teary and hugs him back trying to calm him down. Sasha keeps on crying in her arm for 10 mints then falls a sleep with out telling her why he was crying. Kripa carries him in her arms then lays her down on his bed. She sits next to him watching him sleep. Some tears starts rolling down her cheek. She never felt this much scared that she was today when she saw him cry.

After 3 hours later sasha wakes up and goes to the kitchen were kripa was making dinner. He sits down in the chair and keeps on staring on the floor still with sad face. Kripa sees him and walk up to him. She kneels down and puts his face up facing her then smiles.
K: wane eat something
S: shakes his head)
K: wane drink some juice
S: again shakes his head) im not hungry ( leaves to his room)

Kripa goes to his room after few seconds and sees him sitting in his bed looking at the picture that was beside his bed on the table. In the picture was sasha and karan both making faces when kripa took the picture at the mala. Kripa sits next to him and then holds his small hand on hers.
K: what happen jaan?
S: nothing mom
K: u don't want to tell me…I thought we were best friends?
S: gets teary and hugs kripa then cry's)
Kripa gets worried again
After when sasha cry's he starts to sobbing then tells kripa
S: sobbing) mom..vo…karan…
K: what about him?
S: his mom…his mom passed away
K: shocked)
S: the teacher said that since karan doesn't have any family or relative….he has to go to anatashram….then I wont ever see him again (cry's)

Kripa hugs him then soon sasha falls a sleep again. Kripa makes him lay down and leaves from the room. She sits in her room thinking.

Next day sasha leave to school with same sad face and then come back again with same sad face. He doesn't talk to anyone now. Karan is same age as sasha….they were best friends when first time they meet when they were 3 years old and could barely talk but they always talked in their own baby language and understood each other…..karans father died before he was born…and his mother had a cancer.


2 days later after sasha told kripa about karan. Today was sashas birthday. Kripa decorated the house with balloons and etc. she invited lots of his friends and classmates and wanted to give sasha surprise.

Sasha interred inside the house and everyone shouted
All: supriseeeeeee
Sasha saw everyone then smiled a little bit but then his smile disappeared. Kripa went up to him and kissed his cheek
K: happy birthday jaan
S: thanks mom
All the kids came and give him presents. Kripa saw his sad face and called him. Sasha went up to kripa.
S: yea mom
K: smiles to him) I have a surprise for u…come with me

Kripa takes his hand and walks to his room with him. When they inter his room kripa kneels by him and takes his hand on her
K: I have a surprise for u…wana see it…..look there
Sasha sees karan sitting on his bed. His smiles big and runs to him. Karan sees him and runs to him. They both do their hand shake then hugs each other.
S: really happy) when did u come?
Ka: unti brought me here few mints ago
Kripa goes up to them
S: hugs kripa) thank you mom (apart) mom can he stay for few days with us…can u tell those people so he can stay with us plezz mom
K: smiles to him) I have another surprise for u….after today on karan is ur brother
Ka,S: happy)
K: yes I adopted karan….and now he is my son
S, Ka: really….
Ka: touches her feet
K: oh…no beta u don't need to touch my feet….(hugs both of them)

Sasha and karan runs in the living room and starts enjoying.

Next day

Three of them were in the living room with lots of different pictures of beds, paints and etc in front of them.
S: mom…I want this bed
Ka: and I like this one
K: ok then what color should the room be
S,ka: we are sharing room…we don't want to be separate
K: smiles) ok
S,Ka: we want blue

Kripa orders things for their room and all three of them starts painting the room.

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Posted: 19 years ago
awwwww thattttt wassss superbbb starrrr
veryyyyyyy sweeeeet
👏 👏 😛
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesoem part...god i love kripa!! haha 😉

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