Possession!! MG PLEASE READ NOTE pg1 n link

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

res 6

interesting...
part 1
wow Maan is obsessed with Geet and has married her too...
Geet doesnt like Maan...
her parents trust and have faith on Maan too much...
cont soon dear...

Edited by spvd - 13 years ago

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chubzy

@chubzy

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#32

Oh lord! Its realy shockin to find someone else other than d 1 u expected on ur wedding nite, m realy scared bt very intriguing concept.

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danav

@danav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

its awesome
add me ur pm list n
update it soon dear

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noaccount

@noaccount

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

i don't know about other readers but i am seriously loving this ff of yours!!!!!...PLZ CONT SOON!!!!...i wish u could update today!!!!...i read the update like two times already🤣!!!!...once again!!!...plz cont soon!!!... even though i know u'll update tomorrow i kept checking this link (m pretty sure its my 30 time already)

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Zubi

@misssmily

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

Wow really nice concept ! Really enjoyed the first part !

From what u described, it will b a dark story just the way i like them 😈, and am expecting lots of analyses about the characters' states of mind, actually with the charcter sketch you put the level really high, because after reading it i have lots of expectations, especially concerning maan's character, his behavior and actions... 😊

Am eager to see how this story will progress, as for now, i want to say that is a really nice beginning, Maan is indeed possessed , ( and am loving his evilness ^^ ) you clearly let us understand that maan had something to do with dev's desappearance, it will be interesing to see geet reaction when she will know that, hope you don't plan to disclose it that soon , actually i was thinking that it would do a really great twist if disclosed when geet will start to feel something for maan, when she will be in dilemma... but for now i want to see an evil, rude maan😈... As you said maan feels he owns her, and if i didn't guess wrong, for him she is not a "human" she is his pssession, his treasure, something priceless he can lock in his safe, there is no question of her likes and dislikes, or her feelings, it's a fact : she is made for him, It's not just that being with him is the purpose of her life, it is more stronger than that, rather it is the reason of her existence !

With that said, me eargerly waiting for the next part 😳,want to see what happen on the SR ☺️... will try to analyse each part and give my piece of critic as well !

With my love and support !
Zubi 😊

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noaccount

@noaccount

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

hun...wait me confuse!!!

agar yaha 27 hai(in US)...tab India main to aaj 28 hoo ge na?????...

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Zubi

@misssmily

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: backy
hun...wait me confuse!!!

agar yaha 27 hai(in US)...tab India main to aaj 28 hoo ge na?????...

you are so desparate girl, mera haal b kuch aisa hai 😆 , let me clear ur doubt, as am in france and here it is 28 ( nearly 1 am ^^ ) it means in India it should be something like 5 in the morning... let her sleep a bit more yaar ^^

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sumaiya

@RishbalaAsyaMG

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Dude l live in UK not india...I live next to heathrow airport lol

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noaccount

@noaccount

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: misssmily

you are so desparate girl, mera haal b kuch aisa hai 😆 , let me clear ur doubt, as am in france and here it is 28 ( nearly 1 am ^^ ) it means in India it should be something like 5 in the morning... let her sleep a bit more yaar ^^

yeah i AM really deaprete though i blame S.sumaiya😆!!!

actually i got so bored of reading those typical stories / FF...n when i read this one i was so excited ...i loved it!!!...actually i love dark stories...so far in IF my fav ff is i hate u for loving me(dark story)...n now this one!!!😳

BTW thanks haan!!!!...i always get confuse in PAK n india timing!!!

@sweetsumaya...not fair haan!!!...yaha main koi 40 dafa aa chuke hoo aur waha tum maze se soor ahe hoo!!!!...so not fair

Edited by backy - 13 years ago