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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow

such an amazing update

i mean d 1st part having all cute n romantic scenes...amazed me i thought u would nt update dat way bt thankx to u for it

n d last part was really funny n nice too

loved it as usual

do update soon

byeee

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Posted: 13 years ago

#122

wow

such an amazing update

i mean d 1st part having all cute n romantic scenes...amazed me i thought u would nt update dat way bt thankx to u for it

n d last part was really funny n nice too

loved it as usual

do update soon

byeee

wait before i say bye let me tell u i m shashwati

from india

now bye

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sharneil92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#123

Replies 1:

Originally posted by: tina_1234
verrryyy nyc part...loved it sooo much!!

THANK YOU!

Originally posted by: preethi12345
soo nce.. wow ! tx 4 pm

THANK YOU! and u r welcome!

Originally posted by: X.Sisi94
Amazing Update
They finally getting married
Cant wait too read the next part!

THANK YOU! i shall update soon!

Originally posted by: reyabear
Gaaahhh I want to know what was in that letter!!
Great update Shalu!

THANK YOU! and not yet reyabear! 😉 😆

Originally posted by: magi11
wow so much in a single update..just loved it.. cant wait for the next part...

THANK YOU! i shall update soon!

Originally posted by: dumas
ok i need to know whats in that letter love it awesome update nani is so sweet loved it arnav and his lips thanks for the update

not yet babe! and THANK YOU! 😳

Originally posted by: moon_mine
awesome!!!!
simply superb!!!!
jst loved it!!!!!

THANK YOU!

Originally posted by: srahs
fab loved it

THANK YOU!

Originally posted by: pinkpearlz
Shalu you are amazing! 'Are you a swimmer?' Rofl. raizada's teasing khushi was cute.

HAHAHA! THANK YOU! 😆

Originally posted by: asumi0350
ADORABLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THANK YOU!

Originally posted by: monkeydog18
Great update!! But I also wanna know what was in the letter??! Please!!

THANK YOU! not yet sweety! 😆 HAVE PATIENCE! 😆

Originally posted by: bookadict303
Continue soon :) :)

i shall!

Originally posted by: LyssaPie
WOW AMAZING UPDATE LOVED IT! TOO CUTE!

and oh my both of them are beastly romantic 😳

THANK YOU! and yes, they are! 😆

Originally posted by: bmtdluver
Amazing ss! I can't believe arnav is so romantic! Hmm, i wonder what mamiji had written in the note

THANK YOU! yes, arnie is super awesome! and the note, you'll know when the time is right! 😆

Originally posted by: loveydovey
so so good 😃 loved the teasing of the whole raizada family 😆

and i really want to know what was in the letter😊 thanks for the pm

THANK YOU! and not yet dearie! 😆 have patience! 😛

Originally posted by: Arhi-Sarun
hahaha three Indian hens🤣...

loved the update...waiting for the next part...

thanks so much for the pm

THANK YOU! i shall update soon!

Originally posted by: raii
nyc!!!

THANK YOU!

Originally posted by: littlemoi
hahahahah.. are you are swimmer?! then you must be monster!! loved tht part and the update!! but really really wanna find out wht was in tht letter tht mami sent to arnav!! plzz continue soon!!

i shall! but not yet! 😆 have patience... and i'll update soon enough! 😆

Originally posted by: shybabe
aww shalu...that was so lovely...bravo👏

THANK YOU SHY!

Originally posted by: thecraze92
It was good, but idk why i have a feeling that next one will be more interesting :)

THANK YOU! 😉

Originally posted by: MsCeylon
I enjoyed reading the naughty Arnav 😈
Likes the prank the family played on Khushi 😆

THANK YOU! yes.. i was chuckling myself! 😆

Originally posted by: DilMaaneet
i just loved it...
thanks 4 pm ..
btw, my name is also Shallu !!!
plzzz send me links of ur other writing works as well ...

hey shalu! 😳 or is it shallu? 😕

well, THANK YOU! and i'll PM you the links! 😳

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

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Posted: 13 years ago

#124

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Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
Three Indian hens.. Haha. That was awesome! Arnav can be so slow sometimes. Duh, swimmers are
known for their ability to not require oxygen for extended periods of time. ( Wow, that
sounded smart) 😆 Hmm.. I still wanna know what's in that chit! I demand to know! Pretty please with Arnav in top ;)

Can't wait for four calling birds! Ooh, we're getting close to the FIVE GOLDEN RINGS!! Haha, I'm excited

Thank you! 😳 Yes, remember, Arnav was in the "Khushi Kumari Gupta Haze"? Because of his "important" work!? 😆

and about the chit, HAVE PATIENCE, DEAREST! 😉 😆 I wont reveal until after AT LEAST A WEEK! 🤣

yes! next chappie will be.. interesting. 😉 and five golden rings is NOT what you think beta! 😆

Originally posted by: mademoiselle927
RES! :D

LOL! Nani is too cool! :P

'Are you a swimmer?', hahahaha 🤣

But seriously, what was in that letter? I want to know!

Oooh, and I'm impressed, you aren't late at all today! 🤗

nani is a rockstar. PERIOD. 😆

the letter. NOT YET! 😆 "Patience is a virtue!" 😉 THAT'S WHAT YOU SAID TO ME NAH?

MUAHAHAHA! 😈 🤣BACK ATCHA! 😆

LOL. thanks for announcing my lazy fact to everyone! 😡 😆 😳 LOVE YOU! 🤗

Originally posted by: sparklystarstud
wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!
shaaaliii...awesome n humorous update...
HAWTIE HAWT starting...
CUTIE CUTE ending...

She was now going to be related to three very important females in her life, and all thanks to him. Her Laad Governor. And she smiled her Khushi Kumari Gupta Smile at him.

nani mami n anji di just for her from nw on...soooper cool...
n shaaaliii...
pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls pls...
tell us wat was written by MAMIJI nah!!!!!!!
pls little one...

"That's for me to know, and you to NEVER find out," said a smirking Arnav as he forcefully ushered her out of his room before she could question him any further.

this was just for kushi nah...nt for us...
so pretty pls tell us shaaaliii...
n love u for ur update on almost promised time...
nw waiting for the nxt update ...

loads of luv
~~~~~~~~sam

HAHAHA! thank you sammy! ❤️

about the chit. NOPE. NOT YET! 😉 😆

hehe. THANKS UH. you and Naz, AKA MADEMOISELLE927 are gonna be the death of me.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR ANNOUNCING MY PROCRASTINATING AND LAZY FACTS! 😡 😆

and i love you moreee!!! 🤗

Originally posted by: -_-harsh42
res...

*EDITED*

SWIMMER??!!! Really Shalu??!!! 🤣
That was a total :

And their snogging session??? I was all. . .

Thanks for the PM, Shalu!! Luv u!! ❤️

HEHEHEHE!!! thank you!!! 😳 I LOVE YOU TOO HARSHITI! ❤️

Originally posted by: Pearl_mystic
That was amazing...

Are you a swimmer? Then you must be a monster! LOL... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

And Nani teasing Arnav being headstrong... Too good, too good...!

Loved the update...!!! 😊

THANK YOU!!! 😳

Originally posted by: AquaBluez17
That was so cute Shalu!! Im sorry I didn't comment on the 2nd part but that was awesome!! they r getting married!! n she got 3 indian hens as moms lol!!

awesome work and yay!! you are doing it! 3 days in a row!

thank you!!! nah, it's okay! 😳 yes, i'm on a roll these days! 🤣 poor me... this is gonna go on until 8 more days! 😭

Originally posted by: -sia-
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Lovely update!! 👍🏼 Poor Khushi she must have been so terrified looking at those faces 😆. They are gonna marry..that's great!!! Khushi got 3 Indian hens...that cracked me gurl LOL!!!
Awaiting the next part,

P.S forgot to tell u earlier, the titles of each chap are amazing and I love it especially when you give the meaning/significance of it!!!

thank you!!! 😃 yes, the significance is very important because only then you'll get the hang of what msg i'm trying to send across! 😳 and my SS is pretty much based on the metaphorical importance of the poem! 😳

Originally posted by: ..-Sanzz-..
Chemical Locha Line Cracked Me Up 😆 Hahaa, ArHi Are Getting Naughtier 😳 I Want To Read About Their First Night : P ☺️ Awww, Nani Was Kidding . Waiting For Part 4 ;) 🤗

hehehe.. THANK YOU! okay. about their first night. AHEM. i'm innocent here please! 😆 i can't stand too much explicit descriptive writing! 🤢 or else, i'll die of heart-attack. until 7th grade, i pretty much thought that babies grew in stomach after you get married. as in marriage lead to the baby growing in the stomach. was even confused as to how the mummies did not vomit them out? and then i realised it was important for the baby to say inside cos it needed to eat. 😳

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani
Shalu! Fab SS!!

Just caught up with entire updates!! Oh Man, I should not have missed that!

Firstly, what was mamij's letter?? I'm scratching my head so much**Still I couldn't find one good guess** and I blame you for any loss of hair!😆 reveal it soon yaaar!

With Arnav's proposal part..! Sanchari jewellers..! 😃! And the proposal was perfect!😳

Another thing!! Kushi's presence of mind - "Are you a swimmer"🤣! I loved that part!

Naniji is perfect! Allowed Kushi to ramble then said Yes..! I loved that part!!

Thanks for the PM dear!😊

thank you! 😳 heheh.. about the chit. NOT YET! 😛 khushi's presence of mind = MY PRESENCE OF MIND. I'M AWESOME. *takes a bow*

yea.. THE RAMBLE IS GONNA HAVE INTERESTING AFTER-EFFECTS IN CHAPPIE 4! 😳

Originally posted by: minimuffin86
AWWW SHALU!!!

just put Eesa to bed and came to read this. *sigh* mayre jaan! this was sooo funny. hahahah he cant swim! hahaha the great Arnav Singh Raizada cant swim nor cn he change a tyre! sahi main Laad Governer he hai!

hahaha and the three Indian hens is just crack my sides with mirth worthy!

have i ever told you how amazing u are?

SAHAR! 😃 hehehe..

you don't need to tell me that babe.

YOU'RE AWESOME.

I'M AWESOME.

WE'RE AWESOME.

MUNCHING ON COTTON BOOKS iBBARNEY!!! 😳

Originally posted by: Harshiti4Lyf
Shalu this is amazing!!! Just complete Wow!!!
Love the way you use symbolism in your work!!!
Naughty naughty Arnav!! Cant wait for the next update!!

thank you!!! 😃 heheh.. next update's gonna be soon! 😳

Originally posted by: roshnidiya
wow
such an amazing update
i mean d 1st part having all cute n romantic scenes...amazed me i thought u would nt update dat way bt thankx to u for it
n d last part was really funny n nice too
loved it as usual
do update soon
byeee

HEY SHASHWATI! 😳 glad to meet you! 😳

thank you! glad you loved it! 😃

and i;m shalu. originally from India but now FROM HONG KONG! 😃 😆

Edited by sharneil92 - 13 years ago

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sharme

@sparklystarstud

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#125

"So you loved me back then, even when I used be cruel to you with my callous words."

"And you have been devoted to me all this while."

"And you think that I am your Prince Charming who would come in a white Arabian horse, sweep you off your feet and take you to our palace of love."

She opened her eyes as she gasped, and then blushed at remembering AGAIN what he did to her after that.

poor kushi...arnav's taking a toll on her...

just like u shaaaliii...tormenting me by telling abt 5th day n making me wait...

AWE!!!! short update...bt LOVED it none the less hun...

and love u sooo much for the promised looonnnggg update tomoro...

n it btr be on time little one...

WOW!!!! u've done it...4 days continuously ...AWESOME!!!!

still 8 more days...WAY TO GO little miss muffet

a huge hug frm

sam...luv u

Edited by sparklystarstud - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

#126

aww this is adorably cute. loved the arhi convo

xxx

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Posted: 13 years ago

#127

OMG ekkk! god the ending was tooo good. arnav proposing like that and khushi reacting so boldly, wow! always amazing work from you

xxx

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nyxx

@nyxx

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#128

The 4th day was wonderful Shalu!

and i could completely imagine Khushi waiting like that and then, falling right into her bhatiji's arms..oh wait, patiji's arms LOOL!😆

Im in love with these twoo..and the ending was even sweet, pleasee do continue soon with the 5th day😃

Edited by nyxx - 13 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#129

awesome update loved it thanks for the pm so sweet anytime she falls he is there to catch her

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#130

really nyc but u need to tell abt 2 things

wat did mamiji wrote in d letter nd wat did arnav did to khushi aftr prince charmin conversation ;) ;)

plzzz mention it in next..pretty plzzz

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