~The Incomplete Love Story~Pg76 10/3 End - Page 35

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Posted: 19 years ago
wonderful prt plz cont soon 😭 😭
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hey is it like zaib is angad but pretendin not to be then y would he do that? or maybe zaib is not angad n he will help kripa with aryan gettin better thinkin its his dad n kripa n zaib will fall in luv i guess n i think somehow my prediction will come true is it?
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! just way 2222222 good!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: bhumishah

hey is it like zaib is angad but pretendin not to be then y would he do that? or maybe zaib is not angad n he will help kripa with aryan gettin better thinkin its his dad n kripa n zaib will fall in luv i guess n i think somehow my prediction will come true is it?

im glad your thinking, but I don't want to give anything away, so keep reading!

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Posted: 19 years ago
amazing part i wish zaib is angad
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~The Incomplete Love Story~

Kripa got in the cab. She was impatient to go to Prithvi's house. Kripa paid the cab driver and went to the door. Priya opened it.
K- Hey, thanks
P- Don't worry, Prithvi told me what happened
K- I hope they weren't too much trouble
P- Come on Kripa, don't be silly

Kripa went inside and took Esha in her arms.
K- Hey Esha, how are you bacha?
Priya took Esha in her arms when Kripa went over to Aryan.
K- Hey Aryan, how are you?
Ary----------
K- I'm sorry I didn't come back yesterday, but I'm back now and I'll never leave you again, okay?
P- They just ate Kripa, but are you hungry?
K- No, but thanks, we'll go now

Diya came over.
D- Can Aryan stay longer, we're going to watch The Simpsons next
Kripa smiled.
K- He'll come back another day, okay?
D- Okay Kripa aunty
Diya kissed Esha's cheek.
Priya drove them home.

Kripa made a call for someone to bring her car back from La Rochelle. An hour later a driver brought it back.

K- Okay Aryan now we can go see the movie I owe you
Kripa got Aryan and Esha ready, along with herself and went to the movies.
They saw a good movie( I don't know which one, some kids movie). Esha smiled throughout it. Afterwards Kripa took them to lunch and got them kid's meals. Later they went home.

Kripa put Esha to sleep and went to Aryan's bedroom.
K- Did you have fun?....Good.....
Aryan closed his eyes.
K- Your tired, okay then let me help you in bed. Kripa put him in bed and he instantly went to sleep.

Kripa sat down and made herself a cup of coffee. She was tired herself. She was tired since the last 2 years. She thought about Angad and then Zaib ran through her mind. He was probably in London now. Aryan's 10th birthday was coming up in 3 days, Kripa wanted him to have the best birthday. She didn't know what to do to give him that, what could she give him? If only Angad could come back. Then it hit her, maybe Zaib could temporarily be her Angad. Maybe Zaib could bring the light needed to better Aryan's present and future. But why would Zaib do this for her? He was a international rock star and she would be asking him to be the father of her child, temporarily. She knew how stupid it sounded, but she was willing to do anything for Aryan.

Kripa got on the computer and searched for Zaib's phone number. She couldn't get his direct number but she got one of his managers'. She dialed the number.
K- Hello, is this Mr. Gujral?
MG- Yes
K- Hello I have an offer to make with Mr. Zaib, its an 100 million dollar offer if your interested
MG- What! Wow! Of coarse we are... I mean---
K- Actually I wanted to talk to Mr. Zaib b4 I confirm it
MG- No problem let me give you his number
K- Thank you
MG- 546-4837
K- Thanks, we'll be in touch shortly

Kripa quickly hung up and dialed his number.
Z- Hello
K- Hello Zaib

Zaib instantly recognized that voice. It was voice that echoed in his ears ever since he returned to London. It was the voice of the woman that had taken over his heart and mind.

Z- Kripa?
K- Yeah, hi
Z- Hey, how are you?
K- Good, I have a favor to ask you
Z- Anything...but what?
K- Okay listen carefully on what I'm about to tell you
Z- I'm listening
K- The day Aryan heard the Angad's death's confirmation, Aryan got paralyzed, he doesn't talk or walk. The doctors told me he didn't have the will after Angad left. It's been two years later and Aryan is still the same, he hasn't said one word since.
Z- I'm sorry
K- His 10th birthday is coming up in three days, I want to give him the perfect present: his life, his dad.
Z- But---
K- I know what your thinking, Angad's dead. Zaib I want you to be our Angad, I want you to bring back the happiness in my house, I want you to bring Aryan back the way he used to be. If he finds out your alive then I'm sure it won't take him long to get better and have the will to live again.
Z- Kripa but what happens after he gets better
K- I know he'll be crushed to find out your not Angad, but he'll have to accept it, after he gets better I promise to tell him your Zaib, I promise to let you live your rock star life again.
Zaib would give anything to be near Kripa. But even more he wanted to meet Aryan and help him.
Z- Kripa I'll do it
K- Thanks Zaib, I'll give you anything in return for what your giving me!
Z- I'll tell you what I want after I complete my mission.
K- Thanks, your not Angad, but your the angel that brought back the happiness and light in my family.
Z- His birthday is in three days, i'll leave back for America tonight, I'll be there tomorrow afternoon.
K- I'll pick you up, but you'll only come in front of Aryan on his birthday, so you have to stay in a hotel until then
Z- No problem
K- Your my hero Zaib, thanks
Z- Kripa, more than your hero I want to be your friend, so what do you say, Friends?
K- Friends, bye
Z- Bye

I hope you liked it. Most of you guessed right that Zaib would come help Aryan! Keep reading!
Edited by amneetkaur_24 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
excellent part 👏 👏 👏 ... pl. continue soon...
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Posted: 19 years ago
awesome part!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg!!!!! i knew it.. but zaib has to be angad.. please dont make it a double role!! he had an acciedent, was sent to london for treatment, had amnesia!! not htat hard.. please end it like this.!! for aryan, kripa, and me!!!!!lolzz.. well gr8 part and continue sooon
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Posted: 19 years ago
wonderful 👏
Edited by sweet honey - 19 years ago

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