IPKKND SS: Holding On and Letting Go, Parts 1-5 :)

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ChocoBloc_12

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Posted: 13 years ago

#391

I Love the last sentence ... its so beautiful... your SS was amazing :) thanks for all of the wonderful updates :)

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Divya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#392

very beautifully written!!👏👏😍 and thanks for the PM!😊

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sweetygirl28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#393

It was fantastic hayley..

starting with anji and everyone else leaving home was a good thing coz these two could spend some quality time together and he confessed making her forget all worries was awesome..

he ll now make her every wish in her list come true.. and he is not the one who will let go of her so i will take it as he had taken her abroad and underwent some treatments and they lived happily ever after :)

coz i dont want to see them worried be it fiction.. i love them so much u see :) :)

loved the whole SS..thanks a ton for writing it..

waiting for more from u :) :).. thanks for ur pms!!!!!

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asumi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#394

"To get married" ... "you can check that off too" that was THE most heart warming thing! 😊

"the memories of what only seemed like fleeting moments, were all he was going to have left one day !!" that was like bitter sweet!! the fact that he decided he will cherish every second was sweet.. but the reality behind the words was bitter!! B-E-A-U-TifUL!!

You left the ending on open - that was good too 😊
Amazing amazing !! loved reading the whole thing..

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Alice

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Posted: 13 years ago

#395

Fantabulous!!!!

I loved this beautifully crafted story of yours...

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dramebaaz.af

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Posted: 13 years ago

#396

OMG!! that was fantastic!!

and loved that you left it open ended, i know this girl, Julia in my neighbour hood and she got cured from the lekumia!

awesome work!

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#397

Hayley..i realy appreciate u 4 takin up dis concept n making it very realistic..n m very emotional abt cancer..since i hv lst my luvd ones 2 it.
Bt i must say u carried off excellently..thou 2nd last chap ws too muc to take in.

As 4 suggestn 4 nxt..i wud say y dnt u write sumthing cheerful n luvly on Arhi.
Wud b lookin 4wd 2 ur wrk.
Tanx 4 pm..realy luvd ur SS.