ArHi SS: Vertigo - Completed [Sequel link on Page 1]

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#371

just read all 13 chapters of your SS in 1 go

absolutely fabulous

totally new concept with them working together and understanding each other so well

I loved how he is able to "talk" to his parents and they can give him advice, even though

they are not alive.

Both realising they love each other and confessing to each other.

Now he wants to meet her parents,

can't wait for your next update

PLEASE PM me when you update, thanks

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varshini karthik

@.vrshn.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#372

They are Destined to be together!

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Nazibah

@nazibah

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#373

Why do I have a feeling something bad is going to happen?Everything was perfect but...it's possibly my imagination running wild...Sweet update! Thanks for the PM!!

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desisweetheart9

@desisweetheart9

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#374

Thanks for the PM. Lovely. Nice details about each day.

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mystique_girl

@mystique_girl

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#375

This story has been short and sweet ... no extra words, no extra space for characters, no lengthening of plot and emotions - exactly to-the-point, fast and very satisfactory. Believe me, if I had to write this story I can imagine myself wasting pages after pages explaining one emotion.

Your try at romance has been very fruitful, I must say. The story has turned out beautifully.

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#376

Honestly, when Khushi said "She must be a very nice person" I thought she was talking about Lavanya. :P

So fianlly they are together.

I liked the way you wrote by describing each day.

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Deepa

@spvd

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#377

part 13
awesome...
so interesting...
cont soon dear...

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LoLo

@LoLo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#378

Just found this story. It is sensible and beautiful. I like the simplicity with which they fell in love. I hope Khushi's dreams do come true for her and Arnav. Her family seems very cruel to her. Can't wait for more.