ArHi SS: Vertigo - Completed [Sequel link on Page 1] - Page 32

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Posted: 12 years ago
This part was amazing! Loved the conversation he had with his parents!
I really liked the Office scene between him and Khushi !Just waiting to see what would happen to her marriage and his reaction to it
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Great update !
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was so beautiful.. The desperation of seeing each other that how much they missed each other.. Is khushi actually there? Or is he imagining her like he did once at his home..
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Posted: 12 years ago
I liked that part where he was speaking to his parents.
Interesting chapter... Off beat for you :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful. Love is.

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey!!! i came across this SS.. loved it immensely... read all the 12 chapters in one go😊 can you please PM me the further updates???
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful and not just because it was mushy. I love your stories.
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Posted: 12 years ago
heya.! sorry to say but for the next 5 minutes you have to tolerate my blabber..! i mean today you just delivered a remarkable chapter.! i mean today there were soo many phrases that i really admired and adored a lot. for instance -

"I don't know what love is. But I believe that it looks a lot like your mother,"

awww...it really touched ma heart.! ^^ then..

"He felt it then. The joy of listening to the first heartbeat of one's child, the relief felt when a fresh lungful of air after fighting lack of oxygen, the freshness when first sip of cool water after playing cricket for several hours in hot sun, happiness that warmed one's heart when an evening is spent with best friends, the trust when one readily took the hand offered to them during mountain climbing over ravines, the affection when a young girl pushes an extra straw in a bottle of coke and shares it with the guy she has a crush on and the feeling of contentment that only her company offered him."

reading these lines really made me smile.! not some aery gaery wali smile but a genuine one.!
thanks . and then the very last one which took away all the limelight -

'Love is you and I, together; us.'

😊 do continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
heya.! sorry to say but for the next 5 minutes you have to tolerate my blabber..! i mean today you just delivered a remarkable chapter.! i mean today there were soo many phrases that i really admired and adored a lot. for instance -

"I don't know what love is. But I believe that it looks a lot like your mother,"

awww...it really touched ma heart.! ^^ then..

"He felt it then. The joy of listening to the first heartbeat of one's child, the relief felt when a fresh lungful of air after fighting lack of oxygen, the freshness when first sip of cool water after playing cricket for several hours in hot sun, happiness that warmed one's heart when an evening is spent with best friends, the trust when one readily took the hand offered to them during mountain climbing over ravines, the affection when a young girl pushes an extra straw in a bottle of coke and shares it with the guy she has a crush on and the feeling of contentment that only her company offered him."

reading these lines really made me smile.! not some aery gaery wali smile but a genuine one.!
thanks . and then the very last one which took away all the limelight -

'Love is you and I, together; us.'

😊 do continue soon...

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Posted: 12 years ago
EEEPPP!!
I love your story sooo much!!
Beautifully written, I like how you've changed the settings of our favourite IPKKND characters into the office scene.
Khushi's family are a nice refreshing change, because it feels like Khushi is slowly getting out of all that my responsibility crap, and finally living her own life
Please update soon
Lots of love
Celiza xox
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Posted: 12 years ago
I actually loved this update! It was beautiful..the way it was written, the words, the description of what love is!
Khushi and Arnav, they're perfect for each other! Can't wait to read the next update!

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