ArHi FF: The Unexpected: Welcome - Part 9 - Pg 37

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ItsPearl

@ItsPearl

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Awww... I loveeedd the update...! Its so nice, you portrayed my all time fav characters really well - especially the line you wrote when realization dawned upon Khushi that she was married - 'She was his wife, he was her husband now... I thought marrying Arnav will always be a dream...'... Too good... 👏...

Thanks for the pm... And don't worry, your story is not going at a slow pace...! Everyone loves it, me looovvveee it...!

Continue soon...

Edited by Pearl_mystic - 13 years ago

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Khesnee B

@..Peppermint..

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#92

its awesome
plzz add me to ur pm list

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devishree

@devishree

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#93

hey ya it is full of emotional turmoil and iam becoming weak moving to tears 😭 some cheery things plzzz

i want to see some brave scenes for anjali than thinking of that wretch 😡i think nikhil is the new hope for them is it not???😍 kill that shyam 😈 build some relationship between anjali and nikhil 😊

hope the RM doesn't provoke any anger notes of arnav in this situation they should accept her without any folly plzz⭐️

thanks for the pm dear and continue regularly plzzz

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meenaluma

@meenaluma

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#94

fabulous update pls continue soon

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Fammakhan1

@Fammakhan1

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Hei do Pm me next .. Nice FF

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tina_1234

@tina_1234

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

nyc part...loved it..thnx for d pm

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.Sandal.

@.Sandal.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#97

it was amazing loved it

continue soon plz

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Chhaya

@arhi-fan

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

The two parts were just awesome. The story is going at the rite pace. Pls update soon. Thanx for pm.

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647669

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Love how arnav waited for Khushi and took her hand and then went

nice update

loved how there were two for me to read

update soon

i may not comment much due to studies so dont take it personal ! x

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#100

Hey of course its not boring...how dare you ask such a question well creativity is your boon not mine so well no idea but then one or two thing..

First Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you Thank you so much for not making this a regular love triangle jealousy and all that and well one request is I want lots of Arhi moments and proper realization of love form both of them even if there is no actual confession of those three words...I want them to realize their love for each other

As for Shyam...I go down on my knees please don't reform him...as much as i can see this Nikhil is OK for Anajali and let their love story develop slowly and let them have a happy life together...

What to do with Shyam well let me suggest something pick some of your forum friends and introduce them as Khushi friends or rather Nikhil's friends or brother and let them beat him black and blue!!!!!

Shyam ...hope he doesn't do anything dangerous or harm the relationship of ARnav and Khushi which is into a new beginning!!!!

As of now yup i love your story do keep taking it in the track you want and ignore my comment if it seems too silly!!!!!