Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
#51
awww tht was sooooo cute...the date and everything...plzz continue soon...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#52
when r u gonna continue? plzzzzz i want to read more of it. i know its hard to make up one but can u plz continue soon. 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#53
awesome part plezzz continue soon!!!!!!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
fab part..

please cont soon 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 6

it was in the morning and kripa was still sleeping...and then her cell rang
K: hey mishti
M: hey Omg How was it??
K: it was so much fun
M: omg Give me all the details
K: ok well he picked me up and he said I was looking nice....
M: oooooo...
K: then i felt like seeing shaadi se pehle instead of being cyrus but ssp was starting half an hour l8r so we had sumthing to eat at McD's
M: so u jus changed yur mind like tht and angad said ok?
K: well he wasnt too willing at first...but then he said ok
M: uh...yur sucha brat
K: (laughs) so then we finally saw the movie...angad fell asleep most of the time
M: im not surprise
K: haha...and then when he dropped me off....I kissed him on the cheek and his kissed me on the cheek
M: awww....how cute
K: (giggles) omg...he likes mallika sherwat...how sick is tht
M: eeeewww....i no....
K: ew...shes so gross. If I knew angad liked her I wudnt have chosen tht movie
M: sum1 is getting a bit possessive...
K: shut up
M: (laughs) jk jk...but I no...mallika sherawat is gross...she's not even pretty
K: i no...why do guys even like her?
M: ugh Its so annoying
And then M and K had this whole convo abt how they h8 MS. Lol

College:
K: hey angad
A: hey
they both hugged eachother
J: yo angad whts up?...o hey kripa
K: hi josh...where's prithvi?
A: who cares?
K: angad Isnt prithvi yur friend?
A: yea I guess but he's weird
K: uh...he is so sweet
J: sweet?
K: yea
J: prithvi is so different frm me and angad
K: uh..whtever
A: lets go kripa
J: hey wht abt me?
A&K: who cares?
J: losers
Then this random girl comes upto josh
G: hey josh
J: hey gorgeous
J was flirting with her and all and mishti saw this. She got upset and went to find kripa.
M: Kripa
K: mishti? U ok?
M: yea
A: u sure? U look rilly upset? Did ne1 saw nething to u?
M: no angad..im fine thanks
the bell rang. K and M went to their class...and A went to his..
K and M took their seats and class
K: wht happend?
M: josh
K: wht?
M: i luv him too much tht it hurts
K: oh im sry....but luv always hurts...remember...
M: i no But this is different josh is sucha flirt. He is always doing stuff w/ girls and makes me feel like im nothing
K: mishti. Thts not true. Ur so gr8. Yur so beatiful and yur sucha nice person. jus talk to josh. im sure he will understand yur feelings...even tho he is clueless idiot...I no he has a big heart
M: big heart?
K: well, yea
M: (laughs) thanks kripa...not jus for this...but being sucha gr8 friend
K: o come on....u dun have to thank me...ill always be here for u no matter wht
They both hugged.

Break Time:
K was siting reading a book.
A was playing with her hair
A: Kripa, yur hair smells good, infact u smell good overall
K: ummm....thanks.....here's a tip- nxt time u shower, actually use some shampoo and soap
A: haha very funny...wait...do I rilly smell tht bad?
K: omg angad No I was jus kidding...now stop disturbing me...im reading my book...im at the good part....
A: u like books?
K: love them
A: oh...
K: lemme guess- u h8 em
A: yep
K: why am I not surprised
A: (thinking to himself: we're so different frm eachtother-)
K: (thinking to herself: -yet we still like eachtother)
A: (thinking to himself: whatever)
A gets annoyed with kripa and snatches the book away frm her
K: hey
A: what? Im bored...talk to me...otherwise im leaving
K: angad Ugh Yur so mean
A: yur so mean
K: no u r
A: no u r
K: stop it (hits him playfully)
A: (laughs) I luv messing around with u
K: loser ugh..im so mad now
A: kripa?
K: what
A: u wanna go out for dinner Saturday nite?
K looked at angad and smiled
K: im so happy now!
they both laughed and hugged


sorry...i took a while for updating!! im so sorry!!
but tommorow i will post a much more exciting! plz tell me how u like it!

~*Pari*~
Edited by pari786 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56
that was sooooooooo cute !!! amazing job n cont. soon!!! hope mr. clueless ( that's josh's nick from now on,hope u don't mind!!) realizes that misthi is way better than all those other gals he flirts with.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57
hey
great part
llike usual
cant really wait for hte next part
plz oh plz
continue soon!!


~~~Mahak~~~


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Posted: 19 years ago
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great part continue soon!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i am very very happy that u continued, thanks a lot for that. it really wonderful. i want to read more of it, so continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60
hey taht was brilliant..continue soon 😊

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