Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 - Page 3

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its gr8! u r so creative. plzzzz continue soon
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gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!gr888888 8888888888888888!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....story awesum.....mindblowin.....omGGGGGGGGGGGG.....i fall lov wid ur story n dreamin of it......awesum...darlin...keep it up...n continue plzzzzzzzzz......hurry...my stoamch is painnin... 😉 😆 😆 2 read more 😳 😆 yap lil sweetz i agree wid u.....ekta shuld learn from her 😉
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plz plz plz continue today..plz......
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Originally posted by: farahrabbi

gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!gr8!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!gr8888 88 8888888888888888!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.....story awesum.....min dblowin.....omGGGGGGGGGGGG.....i fall lov wid ur story n dreamin of it......awesum...darlin...keep it up...n continue plzzzzzzzzz......hurry...my stoamch is painnin... 😉 😆 😆 2 read more 😳 😆 yap lil sweetz i agree wid u.....ekta shuld learn from her 😉



omg! thank you so much! tht was sucha sweet comment...while i was in enlish class today...i wrote the nxt part in my notebook....english class is so boring lol...but then i forgot to take my notebook home! ugh...im so dumb! but ill bring it tomorrow...and ill update tomorrow too! thank you for yur commment
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😳 cute part!! continue soon plz!!
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we should learn from u.wow! what a gr8 story
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dis fan fic is really nyc!!!plz cont.soon
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Hey parii ur story was just too goood....cant wait to read the next part...keep it up. 😆 😆
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really good
cant wait 4 the next paart
continue soon 😊
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Part 5
K: Mishti! Omg guess wht happend last nite?
M: wht?
K: angad asked me to go to the movies with him!
M: wht...like on a date?!
K: yess!!
M: AHH! Yur like the luckiest girl in the college now!
K: i know
M: so wht movie are u seeing?
K: being cyrus
M: o tht seems interesting..wait..wht...being cyrus? Hindi movie?
K: yep
M: but angad hates hindi films. He cant stand them and he wud nvr watch one
K: i know..but he said if it makes me happy he'll watch it!
M: awww...how sweet
K: i no rite
M: (laughs) you 2 do make sucha cute couple...you do know tht all the girls are gonna h8 u now...
K: mishti!
M: its so true
K: well yea...i know...but those girls are the loser plastic crazy ones
M: and yur not crazy?
K: shut up!
M: haha
Mishti opened her locker and Kripa sees a pic of angad and takes it
M: hey thts mine!
K: and now its mine!
Kripa sticks the pic in her locker
M: kripa! U are so crazy...youve only been here for a week ad yur already in luv with a guy yu dun know!
K: ok- first off this is not love love...and second I so know angad
his name is angad khanna...his parents are big business tycoons..he love homemade indian food...he hates hindi movies...he loves me!
M: o God! U mad girl!
K: im jus kidding..I know he rily doesnt luv me...I mean we jus met...he just like likes me
M: and wht abt u?
K: umm...i dunno..ive had several crushes before...but this one is just so different frm all the other ones..angad! Hes so sweet, cute, nice,...I dunno theres jus sumthing abt him tht makes me wana like him so much
M: yea...
K: Mishti, now be honest with me....hav u ever like liked him
M: um...
K: um wht?
M: u want me to be honest?
K: yea....
M: ok...but plz dun get mad....
K: ok...
M: sure u wont...
K: yes
M: the truth is.....
K:...
M: i nvr like liked angad! (Laughs)
K: huh? Mishti! You scared me! U were all serious n all and then I thought u were gona say yes and tht u liked angad...ugh!
M: (laughs) whtever...kripa I told u tht angad is like my bro- I've known him forever
K: youve known josh 4ever and u dun consider him yur bro
M: shut up!
K: haha
M: kripa ok come on lets go to class- were getting late
K: o crap!
They both run to class
The guys are hanging out during their breaktime
Josh stand on the table and gets every1s attention. The girls blow kisses @ josh
J: ladies and gentlemen...o wht the heck!...angad had finally chosen a girl to go out with!
Guys are cheering
Girls are all shocked...and each one of them is hoping tht its them
J: angad khanna and kripa sharma are going to the movies Friday nite
guys cheer. Lol
girls are jealous
josh looks at the girls
J: sweethearts, i know yur upset but im always here (winks)
girls giggle
josh jumps off the table and starts talking to angad and prithvi
P: so u and kripa..cool
A: yea
P: wht movie u seeing?
A: this one hindi movie..4get the name...saif ali khan is in it
P: being cyrus?
A: yea I think
P: but angad, u h8 hindi movies!
J: but he luvs the girl who luvs the hindi movies!
P: r u serious abt kripa?
A: not serious serious..but I do like her more than a friend..we'll go out Friday nite and then well see how it goes..and yea.....u get wht im saying?
J: nope
A: josh u nvr get wht im saying
P: haha... well i get wht yur saying....well best of luck with u and kripa
A: thanks

to be continued!
ok tht was part 4! hope you liked it!
nxt part is angad and kripas date!
plz comment!
~*Pari*~

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