Humko Deewana Kar Gaye UPD prt 17 pg 22 - Page 2

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continue soooon! i really like it!!! 😃
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next part soooon plzzzzzzzzzzzzz 😳 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 3
K- Mishti? Answer Me
Josh then comes
J- Hey Kripa Hey Mishti
M - shut up josh. Go away
J- Oooo...I see sum1 is in a bad mood rite now
M - I wasnt until I saw yur face...Kripa, im going to the washroom...so u can either hang out with this moron or cum with me
K- ok....u go...ill be there in just a minute
Mishti leaves
J- so kripa...u enjoying the pary?
K- yep...I see u are too
J- o yea Well I better go...the girls are waiting for me
K- (laughs) ok bye
Kripa goes to the washroom to meet Mishti. Mishti is jus fixing her hair and makeup
M - thank god u finally came...
K- (laughs) mishti If u rilly like josh so much, why don't u jus tell him
M - wht? Kripa don't talk nonsense I don't like josh
K- come on mishti. Im sure he'll understand yur feeling and all
M - whatever. Hes jus all into girls....o god...can we jus drop the subject plz.
K- ok ok sry....come on lets go
K and M leave the washroom....party some more...and K completely forgot abt asking M is Angad had a gf..

Next Day in College:
A- hey kripa
K- hey angad...whts up?
A- not to much...you?
K- same
A- so...um u wana have lunch together today?
K- um...don't I always?
A- yea...but thts with every1 else...lets have lunch...jus u and me...
K- ok...then ill see ya l8r.

Lunch Time
K- so...where do u wana have lunch?
A- where do u?
K- I dun care...
A- um...lets jus sit...underneath tht tree (lol)
A and K sit under the tree
K- btw angad...my sceduele had some changes...I now have hindi class w/ u
A- o cool..I guess....
K- (laughs) now I can see mrs. Kakkad flirt with u
A- kripa
K- (laughs) ok sry
A- (laughs
K- o gr8...my aunt packed me biryani for lunch (lol)
A- lucky...my mom packed me pasta for lunch
K-yur the lucky one...I love pasta...I dun like biryani too much
A- wht? I love biryani....I dun like pasta tht much.
K- (laughs) thts interesting....here u can have my biryani
A- and u can have my pasta
Both exchange their lunches and eat
A- so kripa..u were saying tht yur aunt packed u lunch....
K- o yea...I live with my aunt and uncle...my parents live in nainithal..I came here to mumbai for college...so I stay with my uncle and aunt who live here
A- oic...do u miss yur parents?
K- yea...I mean who wudnt....im adjusting pretty well with out them tho
A- well thts good
K and A eat the rest of their lunch and talk abt their likes, dislikes, etc.

Chemistry Class
Josh and Angad are working together on an assignment and Josh is not talking to Angad and sorta ignoring him.
A- josh? Why arnt u talking to me? Whts wrong with you?
J- (doesnt say nething)
A- o god josh. Quit acting like a girl. This is how a girl wud act when her boyfriend forgot to call her last night
J- ANGAD
A- hey it worked You said atleast sumthing
J- angad whts going on? We're best friends rite
A- yea...
J- and best friends tell eachother everything rite...
A- well important things...
J- yea..rite....and best friends tell eachother which girl they like rite....
A- yea...unless one best friend likes the other friend's gf
J- o yea Then it wud be best to keep quiet
A- (laughs) ok...josh wht are u trying to say
J- u like sum1 and yur not telling me
A- no thts not true
J- o yea sure...whts going btw u and kripa....u 2 ditched me, prithvi, and mishti and went ate lunch under a tree like love birds.
A- shut up
J- u like kripa don't u?
A- ...sorta..yea...sorta
J- then wht are u waiting for? Ask her out
A- josh...
J- come on, angad, u have to ask her today when u leave college
A- no....wht if she says no...
J- she wont...girls luv u like crazy...she'll def say yes
A- but shes not guy crazy...
J- so yur not girl crazy either...she'll prolly consider going out w/ u cuz she nos yur not going out with her for the hec of it. &nb sp; &nb sp; &nb sp;
A-hey yea...maybe yur rite...I nvr knew u were tht smart
J- hey were talking abt girls
A- (laughs) yea
J- so before u leave for home...ask kripa out
A- alrite...I will
College classes are over for the day and everyone is going home
Kripa is walking down the steps and trips
But then Angad comes and catches her
K-o angad...thanks
A- yea...u ok
K- yea..so wht else is going on?
A- uh..not much...kripa...I wanted to ask you sumthing...
K- yea...go ahead...
A- um...do you...
K-do I...wht?
A- would u...
K- would I...
A- um...(mumbles to himself) shit
K- huh?
A- nuthin
K- angad wht do u wana ask me?!
A- kripa, would you like to go out for a movie wit me Friday nite? (Says it rilly fast)
K- are u asking me out on a date?
A- um...sorta...yea
K- (laughs) ok
A- so whts yur answer?
K-...


to be continued soon...
ok tht was part 3...i hoped you like it!
plz comment!
~*Pari*~
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Posted: 19 years ago
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i've waited soo long!!!! gr8 part cont soon plzzz..oh welcum bac from..i forgot where it was..but welcum bac!😊
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Edited by Desi Pride - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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coool!! nice part!! contnue sooon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz continue &nbs p; I love A-K parts thank god they fellin love inur story they were late in Ekta's 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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this is pretty good ekta should learn from u
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Posted: 19 years ago
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awesum fan fic 👏
continue soon 😛
Edited by angelic shaz - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 4

K: yea...sure..i will
A: o...ok..cool (all happy now)
K: so i'll call u tonite...and we can talk abt wht movie to see
A: yea sure
K: ok then...bye..ttyl
A: ttyl
Kripa gives Angad a hug and angad is so happy Lol
Kripa goes home and Angad gets in his car and drives home....on the way he calls josh
J: hey bro
A: she said yes
J: ha ha...i told you she would
A: yea I cant believe you were actually rite
J: angad when its come to the ladies I am always rite
A: o god josh
J: it true
A: yea whtevr...listen I gtg go now...ttyl
J: cya
Angad reachers home to his huge mansion. There he lives with his mom, dad,.So angad's parents are big business ppl.
A: mom..im home
N: hi beta...how was yur day?
A: good - yours?
N: it was good
A: cool..where's dad? Shudn't he back frm london now?
N: o no..he jus called this morning-after you left for college. He'll have to stay there for a few more weeks.
A: wht? But why?
N: angad...you know some business problems came up...so they arranged some more meetings..and it was important for yur dad to be there
A: god damn it
N: angad
A: sry mom..well Im going to my room...call me when dinner is ready
Angad went up to his room and then kripa called
K: hey angad
A: hi
K: so wht r u upto?
A: not much..you
K: same...so wht movie do u wana see? I havnt seen any movies in a loong time..so I hav a big list....hey do u wana see tht one movie Being Cyrus? It seems interesting?
A: being cryus? Wht kinda crap movie is tht?
K: angad Its seems like a rily good movie...saif ali khan is in it
A: whoa...saif ali khan? It's a hindi movie?
K: well...yea
A: u like them??
K: i love them Why...dun u
A: not rilly...the last one I saw was with Shahrukh khan and he dies at the end and everyone in the theater was crying like mad
K: o kal ho naa ho? I luv tht movie It was so sad tho
A: ok..whtever...
K: well..at priyas party, when they ABA song played, you got all excited
A: yea...thts cuz I heard my sis play tht song on her comp. One time...and I sorta liked it...
K: o ic...so then wht movie do u wana see
A: any movie except and hindi one
K: angad yur so mean
A: im mean?
K: yes
A: ok...if it makes you happy we'll see it..
K: wht? Are u serious?
A: well..yea
K: angad..i wasnt serious when I said u were mean...I mean we can go see an english movie if u want...
A: no...its ok...we'll go see tht one movie u were talking abt
K: r u sure?
A: yea
K: o angad! Yur so sweet!
A: ya ya...whatever
K: r u mad?
A: no...no not at all
K: sure?
A: yes!
Naina comes in Angad's room...
N: Angad...come on dinner is ready
A: ok mom....listen krips, I gtg ok...ttyl
K: ok bye angad....
A: bye..
K: bye..
A: bye..
K: bye already!
A: I cant hang up until u do
K: i cant hang up until u do...
A: no u hang up first
K: no u
A: ok..on a count of 3 we both hang up...
K: ok...1
A: 2
K: 3
Angad and Kripa say this both at the same time: Bye! Love you!
And they both hang up
And they both are so happy! Lol

ok...thts part 4...i no its sorta wierd now...but i no how i want it to turn out...
btw thank u guys so much for yur sweet comments! 😊
and dun worry...i wont make any ekta twists in the story 😆 😆 😆
well plz comment
~*Pari*~
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Originally posted by: LIL sweetz

this is pretty good ekta should learn from u



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haha..thanks....ekta is rily bad..i bet anyone can teach her!

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