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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part 17

He just thinks that to himself!

Next Morning

Priya calls people

And makes up all this crap about Disha

And how she cant take care of her son

And what not!!

And she's not a good mother and what not!!!!…..

And she laughs!!!!

Cuz she enjoys this!

Someone knocks on Disha's door

She goes and opens it

There are some people there

Disha is like yes?!

Who are you?

They tell her

They are from special services and what not

Disha; Special services??

Guy: Yes!!!

Disha is like wat are they doing here!!!!

Adi comes out

He cries….

And says he spilled some milk on his shirt

Disha is like that's okay.. I will come and change it!!!

They tell Disha

That what kind of home do you live in?

Disha is like what??

They start going on and on

How she cant take care of her son

Disha is like who are you to tell me that?

Everything is okay!!!

They make their way

And look at the house

And see everything!

They talk to amongst themselves

And say that Adi cant live in a house like this!!!

And that you as his mother….

Don't know how to take care of him!!!

Disha is shocked!

She's like what!!!!!!!!!!

The gal goes

And takes Adi

Adi is like mommy where are they taking me?

Disha yells

And fights

Saying that they cant do this

She's saying no!!!!!!!!!!

They don't listen

Adi is crying for Disha!!!!

Disha trying to go to him

They don't let her

And they take him

Disha is like no!!!

She is yelling

She's like where are you taking my son??

She's crying!!!!!!!!!!

Priya's in her car

And sees all this

She smiles

And she drives off!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha is totally shattered!!!!!!!!!!!!

She falls on her knees!!!!!!!!!

Adi is crying

And says he wants his mom!

The gal says

He will get a new mommy

And that she will love you soo much

And she will take good care of u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Adi is like no!

He wont calm down!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62
Part 18

Meanwhile

Disha keeps saying my child!!

My child!!!!!

That's all she says!

She goes to people

And says give me my kid

They think she has gone nuts!!!

Dk looks at his clock

And is thinking why hasn't Disha come yet!

He calls the house

No answer!!!

He's worried now!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ved's in his office

He comes to know about Disha

He is totally shocked!!!!

He's like oh my god!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ved goes to Dk's cabin….

Ved; Brother!!!!!…………

Dk looks at him

Dk senses something isnt right!!!

Ved: Disha…..

Once he says that

Dk stands up

And is like what happened to her!!

Ved is like come w/ me!!!

Dk and Ved leave the office!!!!…….

Disha's by her house…

She's out

And is like my kid!!!

She's crying

And if you see her

Oh man..

Its bad!

Dk and Ved arrive

DK sees Disha!!!

Dk goes to her

Disha is crying!!!!

Dk: Disha???

Disha cries!!!

Dk: Disha whats wrong??

Disha doesn't care at this point

Disha; My child!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MY CHILD IS GONE!!!!

Dk is like WHAT????????

Ved is like oh man!!

Ved is like please god!!!!

Don't let anything bad happen!!!!!!

Disha: My child!!!! Do u have my child!!!!!!??????

Dk is looking at her!!!

Dk: Child????

Disha breaks down by his legs

She's saying my child!!

Dk is looking at her condition!!!!

Ved: Brother!! U have to know something….

DK is looking at Ved!

Ved tells her

About that Disha has a kid!!!!!

Whatever Disha had told him

Ved tells Dk!!!!

Dk is completely shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: U knew this??

Ved: Yes!!! She didn't want me to tell u…..

Dk looks at her!!!!

He comes down to her

Dk: Disha!

Holds her face!!

Disha: My child!! They took my child from me!!!

Dk looks at her home

He's like I have come here before!!!!

And then it clicks!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
Part 19

DK: Adi is ur son??????

Disha looks at him

Disha; Where's my Adi?????????

Disha grabs his collar

And asks him….

Disha goes crazy

And asks him

Where is he??

Do you have him???

Dk: Disha.. calm down please!!!

Disha doesn't!!!

Dk takes her in the car

They take her to Saigal House…..

Disha isnt paying attention to anything!!!!!

Dk calms her down!!

Dk is like nothing will happen!!!!

Dk gets up…….

He goes to the people!!!!!

He sees other kids………

Now those kids they have problems!!

They either have no parents

Or they are treated badly!!!!

Dk goes to the people

And say he is looking for kid named Adi…

The gal looks at him

Dk: Where is he??

Gal: In here!!!!!

She takes him…..

Dk goes inside

Adi is crying in the corner

He's talking to himself…

And saying he wants his mommy!!!!

Dk sees him…….

He's thinking of Disha

And him!!!

Dk is asking her…

Why is he here????

Gal: Becuz… his mom wasn't taking care of him!!

Dk: How do you know that??

the people… who had brought him

They come

Dk is like who are you?

They say

They took him!!!!

Dk: Why did you do this?????????????

Guy: Becuz we got a complaint…… from someone… saying that his mother wasn't taking care of him properly!!!!

Dk: from who????

Guy: We cant give names

Dk is getting irritated!!!

Dk: U better tell me who did this.. I am capable of doing anything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Guy: I am sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!……

Dk: U see that boy………….. He's my son!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

They are shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

When he says that!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: So u better tell me…. Who did this!!

Guy: Her name was Priya Saigal!!!

Dk is like shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk is furious now!!!!!

Dk gives them a mean look!!!!

He's like no way!!!!!!

Dk sees Adi!!!

Dk: Adi!!!!

Adi slowly looks up……….

Sees Dk!!!

Dk comes closer………

Adi gets up

And he runs to him!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He's crying

And is asking for his mom!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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#64
Part 20

Dk: Don't worry….. u will come to her very soon!!!!!!!!!

Dk takes him!!!

Dk looks at them

And has that look…..

U shouldn't have done this!!!

Dk takes Adi………

Adi is crying!

Dk is like don't cry!!!!……

Before even going back home….

Dk stops at Suraj's house….

He comes in

And he's yelling

Sum is shocked!!!!!

Aryan sees Adi!

He's happy

Priya who hears yelling

She's like what the…..

She comes out

And is shocked to see Adi!!!!

Dk is looking at her!!!!!!!!!!!!

Priya comes down!!!

Dk is giving her a mean look………

Dk points at her…..

Dk: U!!!!!!!!!!!!

Priya is looking at him

Dk: How dare you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sum is confused!

Suraj walks in…

He's like whats going on

DK turns around

Looks at him

Dk don't care

And he looks back at Priya

He comes to her……

Dk: Why are you soo shocked to see him???? Huh??

Priya: I am not!

DK: Don't play games w/ me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

He yells all of this!!!

DK: WHAT KIND OF WOMAN ARE YOU???? SEPARATING HIM FROM HIS MOTHER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Suraj and Sum are like what??

Dk tells them what she did!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk is furious!!!!

Priya is thinking why is she so concerned for him?

Sum: Priya??

Priya: For that middle class girl….. u are yelling at me!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: Middle class????? IF I DON'T SEE HER AS A MIDDLE CLASS HOW COME YOU DO???

Priya looks at him!!!

Dk: huh??? Answer me!!!…..She's not middle class!! I know her very well……

Sum: How??

DK: Becuz I love Disha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sum is shocked!!!!

So is the other three!!!

Dk: And I just found out that She has a son!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sum: U mean Disha….

Dk: Yes!! Disha is the girl!!!!……..

Now Sum knows about Disha…..

That Dk likes her

And that she is Adi's mother!!

Sum is like omg!!!

Dk: Middle class??? Middle class that's what u said???? Well guess wat…. I will marry her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Says that straight in Priya's face!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk: U will pay for this!!!!!!!

Dk leaves w/ Adi!!!!!!!!!!

Sum is speechless!!!

Dk goes home…..

Brings Adi

Disha is sitting… keeps saying my child……………..

Adi: mommy!!

Disha looks… sees Adi!!!
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#65
Part 21

She is shocked!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

She stands up!!!

Adi runs and hugs her!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Disha is crying!!!!

Both hug each other tite!

Ved is looking on happily!!!!!!!!!!!!

Adi is crying!

Disha is like no!!!!

Don't cry!!

She kisses him

And hugs him again!

Dk is looking at them!!

Ved is like what happened??

Dk tells him

That it was Priya

Ved is like what??

He's shocked!!!!!

Dk: I hate that woman!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ved does too!!!!!

Disha looks at Dk!!!!

She's like the cat is out of the bag!!!!!!!!

Disha stands up

Looks at Dk!!!!!

Dk is looking at her!!!

Dk walks to her!!!!!!!!

Disha isnt looking!!

Before DK could say anything

She falls on her knees

In front of him!!

Dk is like what are you doing?????

He makes her stand up!

Disha says sorry to Dk!!

For not telling him about Adi!!!

She keeps saying sorry

And is like I understand…. If never want to talk to me again!!!!

And she's crying!!!

Dk keeps looking at her!!!!

Dk: Ur going to do all the talking??? Ur not gonna let me talk!!

Disha wipes her tears!!!

Dk: Disha… I love you a lot!! I really do! And I now know everything about u!! And I still love u! U didn't tell me about Adi…. And yet I still love you!!!!!! I know ur past….. and I still love you!! And that will never change!!

Disha is shocked!!!!!!

She looks at him!

Dk is like yes!!!!

Ved is like Alright!

GO Brother!!!

Dk: Disha…… I want u to be happy!! Always!!!! I want you and Adi to be really happy!!!!!!!……… And I want to be happy as well…… but for that.. ur gonna have to do something for me…

Disha looks at him

Disha: What???

Dk: Marry me!!!

Disha is shocked!!!

She's like omg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dk goes down on one knee

And proposes to her

Saying will you marry me??

Disha is speechless

Ved is like say yes!!!!!

Disha; But….

Dk: No buts!! Yes or no……..

Dk slowly gets up…

And looks at her

She looks at him

Disha is looking down

Then she looks at Adi!

Dk looks at Adi….

Dk: IF ur thinking about Adi….. I wouldn't mind.. being his father!!!….

DK is waiting for an answer!!!!

Disha looks all around!!!

Closes her eyes!!!!!

Ved is like say yes!!!

Dk is like please say yes!!!!

And finally…….. Disha comes out and says it…

Disha; YES I WILL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!…………………….


The End!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wonderful parts
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was brilliant parts as usual
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 whooo
fab fab fab 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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whoooooooooooo
All part was Fab. Finally DK know the truth.Contiune Soon.
I really love ur fanfic.
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Aww thanks!!!!


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