Making of Shyam: The Aftermath Updated Part 6 p 14

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: reyabear
Wow, that was intense! I'm glad his dad put him in his place though, he needed that!

Hi Shreya,

Hope you are feeling better. Glad you liked part 4 of the Making of Shyam: Aftermath. Thanks for reading and commenting.

Good Health,

KF

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom
Interesting! Continue Soon!

Hi areeba,

Thanks for your comments and taking the time to read. Glad you liked part 4 of the Aftermath. Yeah, I will try to continue soon.

Take Care,

KF

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

wow...shyam is just so screwed up

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: dumas
that was intense he did not care she was his mother the woman who gave him life he treated her like she was the cat thank god she escaped him thank god she told his dad but that did not change him he just got smarter awesome update thanks for the pm

Hi dumas,

Great comments as always. Glad you liked part 4 of this story. Thanks for reading and putting down your thoughts on part 4. Like the pic of Shyam very menacing;) Sort of fits in with the story. You are most welcome for the PM.

Take Care,

KF

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: Chocoangel
amazin update...😉

Hi Chocoangel,

Thanks for your kind words on the Aftermath Part 4. Thanks for reading and taking the time to post your comments. Appreciate it kindly.

Take Care,

KF

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: beautiful1
WOW !
i must Say you're an amazing writer !
that was just GREAT !
thanks for the PM :)

Hi beautiful,

Thanks for your kind words on my writing. Glad you like Part 4 of the Aftermath. Thanks for reading and leaving your kind comments. BTW I love your writing too. Thanks for the PMs you send me. Love reading your ff. You are most welcome for the PM.

Regards,

KF

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Mr.TalentScout

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Posted: 13 years ago

#77

Again, you stand far apart from your peers...powerful writing.

Unique and original ideas.

We love it.

I would strongly advise the creators of this show to look at your writing and ideas.

My assistants had a few episodes interpreted to them, we have a wonderful lady from India who works in our writing team in a senior capacity, and it seems like a comedy, when it should be a drama, judging from the title.

Her name is Shweta and she agrees. BTW she is also a big fan of your work.

Regarding this Indian sitcom: "What name should I give to this love story?"...Seems pretty odd. Their writing is off.

Just my opinion as I've worked in the cable and sitcom industry here in LA for decades. We look for talent everywhere...

We could use more writers like you.

Your talent should not go unnoticed, Ms. Armin.

And be aware that your work may be stolen, as you never claim it, you'll find many people taking your ideas and pretending they are their own.

Pity you can't copyright your work here.

But hey, you will have a much larger audience waiting for you in the future.

Great work, and our Director Nathan says hello.

Josh

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: littlemoi
Amazing update!!

Hi littlemoi,

Thanks for your kind feedback on part 4 of the Aftermath. Appreciate you reading it and leaving your feedback. Glad you liked it.

Take Care,

KF

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: malluangel
wow...shyam is just so screwed up

Hi malluangel,

So he is. Thanks for reading and posting your comments on part 4 of the Aftermath. Appreciate it greatly.

Take Care,

KF

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Writer42

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Posted: 13 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: Mr.TalentScout
Again, you stand far apart from your peers...powerful writing.

Unique and original ideas.

We love it.

I would strongly advise the creators of this show to look at your writing and ideas.

My assistants had a few episodes interpreted to them, we have a wonderful lady from India who works in our writing team in a senior capacity, and it seems like a comedy, when it should be a drama, judging from the title.

Her name is Shweta and she agrees. BTW she is also a big fan of your work.

Regarding this Indian sitcom: "What name should I give to this love story?"...Seems pretty odd. Their writing is off.

Just my opinion as I've worked in the cable and sitcom industry here in LA for decades. We look for talent everywhere...

We could use more writers like you.

Your talent should not go unnoticed, Ms. Armin.

And be aware that your work may be stolen, as you never claim it, you'll find many people taking your ideas and pretending they are their own.

Pity you can't copyright your work here.

But hey, you will have a much larger audience waiting for you in the future.

Great work, and our Director Nathan says hello.

Josh

Hi Josh,

Hope you got my email. So glad you like my writing, I never get tired of hearing your praises. Just kidding:) I am honored to receive all your kind words on my writing style. Shweta is right the show has many comedic moments. Too many IMO. Do thank her for me. Yes, I guess sometimes their writing is a bit off.

Yeah, on this forum, I can't expect copyright protection of my original ideas because

A. the characters in Khushi is Kidnapped are not originally created by me. But I have changed them to a large extent so that they are nothing like the characters of the same name on the show.

B. The story Khushi is Kidnapped is an original concept as are some of the supporting characters in it. Like the stranger, the inmate, the 2 inspectors, the doctors, the lawyer etc.

As for the other 2 stories I am writing are completely original stories with original characters except for the 2 lead characters the stories are named after, but there too the characters have been changed radically. But in those 2 stories there are new characters added which are strictly my own creations.

But unfortunately, I have seen some of my ideas lifted on this forum. Though I will tell you I have never entertained any sense of ownership of this writing. On a public forum anyone can borrow from anyone else's story or just ideas here and there. I have had that happen with regard to my work. But that is to be expected.

I have no illusions that my story concept ideas won't be lifted on this forum. But that's just the nature of a public forum. Anyway say hi to Nathan for me. Thank you for all your help. My novel is still in the final editing stages. So I am excited about that process and hope to see it completed.

Appreciate you taking the time to comment about this story. It is not to everyone's taste but then again I write because i enjoy writing not for any other reason. Creativity is what drives my mystery genre stories.

Thanks as Always,

Armin/KF

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