Obsession : A Collection of OS' [NOTE PG 28] !!! - Page 17

Originally posted by: CutePrincess

U left me Speechless dear :) it's ROCKING :D good job

Originally posted by: moksha89

aah thank you so much! you're always there liking and commenting whenever i bring something new & its really motivating! 😃 i'm aiming to update late tonight or tomorrow for sure, was running errands today so i have a little more to write to complete the piece 😉

Originally posted by: _SuMmEr_LoVe_

you are such a brilliant writer

i love the way you pin Udayveer ;)

i really hope the CVs have a look at you OS

or maybe we should just mail it to them :D

thanks for the amazing update :)

Originally posted by: tvlover92

Aww! I know, I am sweet, right? 😆

Jokes apart...

My Review of the OS:

Really, the aptitude by which his father maneuvered within the most heightened power game of royalty was amazing. - True. Giriraj is one hell of a character on TV and here. He is what I would say a true calculating character.

Poor Komal... Getting empathy from Manyata is enough rather then daughterly love. 😔

Finally! Finally! The whacking Manyata requires!! You go Udayveer (or moksha89 as Udayveer... weird 😆)!

This OS is definitely what every frustrated DEK forum or fan not aware of IF is feeling, "I tell you!" (Vijaybhai style lol). So... 👏👏👏 This was a great update. I loved it from the beginning till the end. Completely. This UV-M scene is a necessity for the show. Could you like email this part to them or something? 😃

Anyways, looking forward to the next update!

TC.

Originally posted by: hp07

wow.. brilliant. You are a mindblowing writer. Finally an OS about something really important and different. Until Manyata accept her new family, she wont accpt uday either. she is stuck in her old life and this was a brilliant way to give her a wake up call. awesome, i hope they actually do it this way in the show.

👏👏

U deserve a standing ovation for this OS, it was written so beautifully. (standing and 👏)