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LovePRSoham

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Part 1 - You have described Arnav's condition so well. He was indeed very very disturbed seeing Khushi in that state... 👏

La and ASR's convo - Di thats what almost happened in the show.. Looks like CV's copied you 😉... Very similar one 😛...

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LovePRSoham

@LovePRSoham

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Part 2 - Loved Mamiji's dialogue on Ms Phati Saree and Ms Tip Top 😆

OMG Khushi said all that to ASR 😲😲... Loved the part Esp the line This poor girl was not waiting for you just like the "Ameer" ASR was not treasuring my anklet and waiting for me. 👏👏

I really felt bad for her on Diwali Day.. Felt she was being used by ASR... But your SS dealt it the way I wanted 😉 I wanted ASR to realise what his anger can do esp about Ameer and Gaarib

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LovePRSoham

@LovePRSoham

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

Part # 3 - Bechari KKG.. Hamesha ASR will pin her to the wall either in the serial or in SS 😆 Again very well written 😛..

Khushi trying to save ASR from Shyam by hurting ASR 😭

Loved this line though "her heart goes dhak dhak not to forget her acidity" 😆😆 humour in such a serious situation 😲😆

m eagerly waiting for the fourth part and Di I want you to add me to your PM list asap 😃

Even I feel like singing a song like your Ms. Shadowa (Mami ishtyle 😆)

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lollipop4u

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

Dude...this is so addicting. I cant wait for the next part. :D

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LovePRSoham

@LovePRSoham

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

Oops I ended up spamming this thread with my posts 😛

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monkeydog18

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

Hey this is really good. Can u send me a pm next time. I sent u a buddy request

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dazzzling

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Hello dear writer😊 Delightful part 3. I read it but had a power cut just before i post. You keep it up ok. I like the way you put down emotions in all your stories. I guess you are a pretty senti and romantic person😉.

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: LovePRSoham
Part # 3 - Bechari KKG.. Hamesha ASR will pin her to the wall either in the serial or in SS 😆 Again very well written 😛..

Khushi trying to save ASR from Shyam by hurting ASR 😭

Loved this line though "her heart goes dhak dhak not to forget her acidity" 😆😆 humour in such a serious situation 😲😆

m eagerly waiting for the fourth part and Di I want you to add me to your PM list asap 😃

Even I feel like singing a song like your Ms. Shadowa (Mami ishtyle 😆)

Racchu!!😲😃🤗
Thanks a lot yaar. Yeah i'm in love with ASR😳😆 Usha will kill me now😆😆😆
Do u have to ask me to b in my pm list babe? Of course i'll tell u. May b tomorrow if i have enough time to jot part 4 today.😳
Let me write my comments for u in one single post😳
Ok my part 1 is my favourite. I like La so wanted a decent exite for her.
My second part is my revenge😆😆😆 Just like u i was livid the way ASR played with Khushi's feelings on Divali not to forget that he was using La in his foolish ego. The third is just some spicing up😉😆
I'm scratching my mind still about the 4th part😆
Take care lil sis. Will pm u later

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: archanamanav
very nice jaanu..😎..keep up the good work han....there is a saying han..whatever a woman says has a different meaning ..yes means a no and no means a yes..if she says she wants more that means she doesn't really want more..and if she says enough..that means she really wants more😉..so khushi wants more han..when she said enough😉..
nicely done again han..very impressed🤗

Oh cant disagree with u here!! No always means yes n enough means more😉😆
Thanks soul mate for liking it😃