The new turn of Events!! Part 4 (ii) on page 21

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omshreejaanu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: jaswargikoinahi
Oh wow. Seriously you should have a good talk with the producers and start writing for the show!!!! I have goosebumps still. It was awesome. Can't wait for part 4!!!! Thanx for sharing!!!!

Thank you for liking this part too😊 I was skeptic to post this part. But ur words have really lifted my mood.😳 Will update soon. I'm on a writing spree these days😳😉

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omshreejaanu

@omshreejaanu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: pri12
niceee...plzzz pm me whn u updte next part...it iz amazing..

Hey Pri (can i call u that?)😊
Thanks n i accepted ur buddy request too. Will defo pm u.😛

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meenaluma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

superb update pls continue soon

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sweetygirl28

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Posted: 13 years ago

#84

Aww that was really good.. when he held her in his arms my hearbeat was like acidity of khushi 🤣

but why did it had to end like this? i want u to write the next part now 😆

just joking!! thanks for the pm.. would want to see what has shyam messed up with khushi's life..

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archanamanav

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

very nice jaanu..😎..keep up the good work han....there is a saying han..whatever a woman says has a different meaning ..yes means a no and no means a yes..if she says she wants more that means she doesn't really want more..and if she says enough..that means she really wants more😉..so khushi wants more han..when she said enough😉..
nicely done again han..very impressed🤗

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smileyhug7679

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

wow kushi turned down arnav
OMG
reallly i cant believe it

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lara3110

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Posted: 13 years ago

#87

Good update. Thanks

Waiting for the next update.

Please OM me.

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tinsel

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Posted: 13 years ago

#88

Great update,continue soon and Thanks for the PM👏

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mimi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#89

loved it!!!!

bt hope khushi tells the truth to arnav soon!!!!

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LovePRSoham

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

OMG OMG look who is here 😲 Januuu My lovely Di 🤗... Loved loved reading all the 3... Oops I know m little late but only your shadow got to know about this and me ur Jr as always confused and lost 😆 never knew until your shadow Ms. RS 😉 informed me 😆...

Di you are doing a great job.. Awesome dawsome 😛... Since I did not comment on each part.. Will do it now on all 3 parts... 😃