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Posted: 13 years ago
comment did the video do justification please

Part 57

Geet was shocked to see Brij, she was trembling with fear, as the guards dragged him out of her sight, she almost collapsed and Maan was quick to hold her before she hit the ground, as he picked her up he heard Brij shouting

B: she is worse then a wh**e, all women deserve to rot in hell, she is his keep, she will sell herself for anything even prostitutes are better then her '.

He would have continued but Maan punched him hard , as he was abusing Geet
he fumed in anger and gently placed her unconscious form on the sofa and
punched Brij hard to make his nose bleed

Maan had first thought of just throwing him out of Km but now things were different he signaled the guards to leave him and as soon as Brij was free he pounced on Maan, but Maan was ready and he held his fist, Brij tried hard but was not able to free his hand from his grip so he tried to punch him with his free had but that too got held in another grip he struggled to free him way to go maan

way to go Maan

But Maan turned him and clasped his neck and kicked him from back, Brij tried hard to free himself but failed

Meanwhile DM dialed a number, calling commissioner in charge of HSPur and asked him certain things when it was over she went near Maan

DM: Maan leave him.. nahi daadi this was just a trailor

M: ji

But he did not leave him but held him more tightly

DM: Maan let him go

M: ???

DM: trust me

M: ji

And he left him kicking him out of KM

Nakul came with a wet towel and he wiped his sweat and the blood and turned and went to Geet and lifted her up and went to her room, DM followed and indicated Nakul

As he placed her on bed he said

M: DM what were those papers

DM: sorry Maan I did not tell you but

M: but

DM: I knew that someday these people will come to take her and I did not have in my heart to let her go

M: but DM marriage

DM: it was to safe guard her

M: I don't want her to know about it

DM: why?

M: Brij is right this paper marriage can't prove anything, and I don't want Geet to be forced in any relationship

DM: but you love her Maan

M: yes I do, but

DM: she too loves you

M: she thinks that she loves me

DM: pardon

M: DM she has not known any men other then her family and our family, so you never know she would find someone someday

DM: but

M: please DM I don't want another forced relationship, I am at good terms with Sameera but look what happened when we married, please DM

DM: ok Maan but what if she too wants to be your wife

M: we will see to it in future

DM: as you wish

Just then Nakul came in

DM: Maan freshen up I'll be waiting for you for tea

M: ji

Geet did not wake up for dinner and no one woke her up, Angle was taken care of by Maan and when she slept he placed her beside her Maa and went to the outhouse asking Lata to see if Geet wakes up.

He went to the outhouse and tried to sleep, but the fact that he has been legally married to her was not letting him sleep, he was feeling very restless, so he thought about doing some workout and went to the gym

Geet is chased by Brij's men, she sees Maan driving and calls out to him; Maan looks back to see who screamed, and almost collides into a tree; when Maan did not see her she runs but gets Brij slashes her back; she collapses and Brij moves to cut her head when a hand stops his sword...

Maan prevents the sword from cutting Geet. Brij asks Maan what he's doing here, and for him to get lost - "O Khurane get lost"

M: once I stepped forward, I never learnt to step back - what he came here to do, he will do it.

And with that, he punches Brij!
Maan has the sword in his hand, fights Brij's men, and then proceeds to beat up Brij. He watches Brij collapse, and then rushes over to Geet, who is in immense pain. He moves to pick her up, when Brij kicks him from behind. Brij manages to cut Maan a bit, but Maan gets the better hand, and somehow grabs the sword, holds it at Brij's neck

M: back off all of you else I will slash his neck.

Brij's men do so, and

M: run before I change my mind.

Brij scampers off.
The fight being over, he rushes back to Geet, and tries to wake her up. He pushes a strand of hair off her forehead, and she wakes up.

she hugs him and he hugs her back

Suddenly Brij is back with a sword he raises the sword and Geet sees it and screams MAAN!

{Imagine or see episode aired on 1st/2nd June 2010 here is the link http://videos.oneindia.in/watch/43318/geet-hui-sabse-parayi-episode-43-clip-1-6.html}

oh..sapna tha..main tho dar hi gayen thi..

she suddenly woke at about 11pm, Oh it was a nightmare, she wondered where was she, then she remembered that she had fainted, at present she was sweating because of that bad dream, she looked at Angle who was sleeping peacefully by her side, she covered her with a spread and placed her in a crib and went out of the room closing the door behind,
once outside she ran down the steps and out of the Mansion,
Lata who was going to her quarter after finishing the cleaning saw her entering the outhouse, Lata slowly went to her room and ans settled beside Angle

meanwhile in the outhouse she hurried to his room, he was not there, she panicked and searched for him
she heard a swish swish sound coming from the gym, she ran and found him practicing Tia-chi
she sighed and her legs gave up and she rested her back on the wall and slowly sat down

he heard her anklets and though the was imaging again, but when he heard a thump sound he turned to find her sitting there with her eyes closed

he slowly went near her and touched her shoulder as he sat beside her
she opened her eyes and hugged him

how could u stop at this point
plz update


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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update dear
brij got what he deserves
maan said geet thinks that she loves him...but he is also right at his thinking
but when will he come to know that geet loves him truly...
uff...y loves stories are this complicated
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: muskanp



hey u made up for not commenting yet
I am flat red I mean flattered

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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved it
maan is so confusing first he says i love u n now he is like let her meet other guys n then if in future she wants to marry with him then they will uff maan babu decide karlo jaldi se
n waiting for more plzzz update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
i LOVED it
hopefully Geet confesses to him !
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Posted: 13 years ago



yeh meri taraf se brij k liye




dear

waiting for next
shalini_s thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
finally a nightmare gave us a hug.. waiting for Geet to know her marital status now..
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Posted: 13 years ago
verynice thanku waiting for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update... I think maan is right at his point of view... Some where i m glad he didn't burden her wid a relation...
But i m sure that geet really love him ... Not because its a story maan nd geet has too be together...
But its abt d way u develop their relation...

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