NSDT#2(AR)PART 65-PG35[completed]April 26 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
Sorry for late rply dear ...
All the updates were awesome ...
Loved it ...
All AR scenes were amazing ...
Keep up the good work ...
Waiting for next ...
Update soon ...
Thnx for pm ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
awesome parts!!!!!!!
gorgeous sigs!!!!!i've never been to Malyasia. it's so beautiful.
maybe oneday, i will be able to visit this gorgeous place.
thank you so much for this beautiful surprise.
very romantic!!!!!!!!
loved the whole part, esp. engagement scene and teasing session.
finally AR got engaged.
i am so happy for them.
awesome VM!!!!
eagerly waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: crazy4KASH_AR



I'm your Chetan bhagat.
Haye ..blush Blush...☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
This new style of commenting with a pic is simply amazing Ish.
You are a ver jovial person and I love this bubbly nature of yours.
You seem to be full of energy bacha..
I'm really happy to see that you enjoy reading this ff again and again.I myself can't understand how can you love it soo much..
I love AR ffs but don't read them twice.It's a salute to you that you do read NSDT again and again..
I guess it's our love for AR which makes us love NSDT like crazy.Isn't it??
This ff has my heart,my love,all my imaginations,craziness ,love and creativeness for AR..
I myself am fond of this ff a lot.
Don't worry about the length yaar..
If u write a single sentence also then also it makes me extremely happy coz the way you express your love for NSDT makes me feel extremely delighted to have you as my friend and reader...
You are a wonderful reader jana and a great friend.
Thanks a lot again for all the appreciations sweety..
love u
Take care!!

AIYLA MERE COMMENTS SE LAMBA TOH AAPKA RPLY HAI HEHEHEHE😃😃
OHH LOVE IT PATA MAINE DMG STARTING SE NAHI DEKHA THA ISSE PAD KER MAI ISSE HI REAL SAMJH BAITHI THI
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AUR JAB MAINE PADHA THA TOH I DIDNT TELL U NA HOW MUCH I LIKE IT ISS LIYE AB JARA STYLE MAI BATA RAHI HU😎
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: ishka_virani

AIYLA MERE COMMENTS SE LAMBA TOH AAPKA RPLY HAI HEHEHEHE😃😃

OHH LOVE IT PATA MAINE DMG STARTING SE NAHI DEKHA THA ISSE PAD KER MAI ISSE HI REAL SAMJH BAITHI THI
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AUR JAB MAINE PADHA THA TOH I DIDNT TELL U NA HOW MUCH I LIKE IT ISS LIYE AB JARA STYLE MAI BATA RAHI HU😎



OMG!! U first read my ff and then watched the real DMG.
U thought my ff to be the real one..
U r really making me feel on top of the world sweety...
I love u soo much for this wonderful motivation...
I love u ,ur bubbly nature and your own unique style of doing things...
Take care!!!
muah!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
PART 61
PRESENT TRACK


I'VE WRITTEN THIS PART..
Armaan saw Ridz n was mortified by her luk
RI: hmm toh tum mere alawa kisi aur ladki ko aankh utha k nahin dekh ahey they
AR: Riddhima woh toh bas ghalti se nazar pad gayi
RI: galti se my foot.go 2 hell Armaan
She stampered her foot n began 2 walk away 4m him.
Armaan ran behind her
AR: arey riddhima suno toh
She noddede her head in no
RI: jao un hot girls ko hi sunana
AR: Riddhima plz yaar.
He rushed 2 her n stud in front of her blocking her path
AR: meri baat toh suno
RI: mujhey kuch nahin sunna
She moved leftwards 2 walk forth but he also moved sideways again cumin in her way.She moved right n he did the same
RI: kya hai yeh Armaan
AR: jab tak tum maan nahin jati main tumhain nahin janey doonga.
She gave him a deadly luk
AR: pata hai jab tum aisey gussa hokar apni badi badi aankhon ko aur bada kar leti ho aur gussay se tumhara chehra laal ho jata hai aur jab tum yeh ajeeb ajeeb se faces banati ho na.
By this time her face was exactly the same as he mentioned.
AR: dekho bilkul aisey hi.
He immediately captured the image in his mobile n showed it 2 her.
She viewed her image n broke into laughter seeing the expressions on her face similar 2 his description.
She smiled at her image n he was lost in him.
Wen she saw him n found him gazing at her luvingly all her anger vanished n she blushed slighlty
AR: oye hoye aapki inhi adaon k hum deewaney hain
RI: acha jhootey kahin k
AR: tumhay mera pyaar jhoota lagta hai.
He was serious now
RI: mazak kar rahi thi baba hamarey pyaar se bada sach aur kuch nahin hai i luv u my baby.
They smiled.
They were close 2 the water.
Just then a splash of water made them wet a bit.
Armaan lukd at her with intense luv.they were very close 2 each other.Reading his mind she pushed him a little n started 2 run.
He ran behind her .
she turned back n called him 2 catch her by swaying her hands.

During this chase they went 2 a bit lonely place of the shore where there were very less people they had left the crowd behind
Instigating him she again began 2 run but Armaan being stronger caught her n they both fell in the water completely drenched they rolled on the land n the next moment Armaan was on top of ridz.
Their hearts were thudding due 2 the chase n now thier eyes were burning wid passion.
He placed his lips on hers n kissed her passionately 4 abt 10 min.They broke wen they became breathless.He lukd at her shy face dat drew him more crazy .
He buried his head inside her neck n sucked the water droplets.He lowered her dupatta a bit .She closed her eyes n slid his hand griping his back tightly.
He showered kisses on her wet neck,he kissed her hairs n then again kissed her lips,her beauty bone nagain her face .
She ame back 4m the trance n realised wat they were doin publically.
She slowly removed her hands 4m his back unwantedly n he was a bit surprised .
He lukd at her as if he askd wat happened.
She just roled her eyes n he understud wat she meant.
Words were nt imp in their relationship.Many a times they wud convey things just thru thier eyes or by a slight gesture.
He slowly rolled of after kissing her cheek n gave her his hand 2 stand up,
She was beetroot red n buried her face in his chest.
He smiled at his lady .

RI: ARmaan hamein chalna chahiye is tarah bachon ko akela nahin chodna chahiye tha
AR: relax Riddhima unkey chehrey ki khush dekhi thi jab hamney bachon ko unkey paas choda tha shayad unkey khud k betey ne unhein kabhi unkey grandkids se khelney ka mauqa nahin diya hoga isliye aaj hamein dekh kar woh ek aas liye chaley aaye tum bekar pareshan ho rahi ho ur mere abhi janey ka koi mood nahi hai abhi toh humney pani main bhi nahin khela
RI: Armaan tum theek keh rahey ho lekin pani wani main koi khel nahin khelna hum bas aisey hi walk karengey
AR: o ya
RI: Armaaan!!!!
The next moment she found her foot free 4m the ground .Armaan has lifted her up in the air n was heading 2wards the water
RI: Armaan no mujhey neechey utaro sab dekh rahey hain
AR: toh dekhney do tum meri biwi ho aur mujhey poora haq hai tumhain apni bahon main uthaney ka doosron ko jalan ho rahi hai toh honey do
RI: tum na plz paani main nahin plz
She hotted him playfully on his chest while he smiled n finally made her stand in water they were half under the water
RI: zabardasti le aaye ho mera bheegney ka koi mood nahin tha
AR: for ur kind information Mrs. Malik aap already bheeg chuki hain if u remember abhi kuch der pehley hum pani main gir gaye they aur
She blushed badly n he enjoyed her state.He came a bit closer.She sensed his closeness.
As he lud into her deep eyes wid so much luv n passion she smiled n then

AR: Riddhima I don't want to leave u right now.
He said completely dazed in her beauty...
Armaan bend down to kiss her cheek but she splashed water on his face n started running in the water.
He chased her n finally grabbing her by her waist they both fell in the water.-completely drenched.As they were now half under water in each others arms they kissed again and this time neither of them broke the kiss till it was necessary to remain alive.The heat between them was building up slowly and they after breaking up they knew that they had to control themselves till they reach home.Armaan put the strand of Ridz's hair behind her ear n kissed her cheek.She was deep red.
He smiled seeing her blushing like a newly wed bride once again..

AR: ab chalein
RI: hmm
She nodded without looking into his eyes.
As they walked back hand in hand b4 reaching the place Armaan paused n kissed her hand.
AR: I luv u so much Riddhima.
RI: I luv u 2.
she placed her palm on his cheek.
Armaan was lukin so hot in his wet shirt n jeans n so was Riddhima her suit was stuck 2 her skin n all her hairs were wet.
They went back 2 the kids n found the 2 playing cheerfully wid the old couple
MAN: so u guys came back. ur kids r really so charming.they made us laugh so much after a long time.thank u so much 4 bringing smile on my wife's face
AR: all pleasure was ours.since u were here v cud get sumtime 4 us.v shud better thank u
WOMAN: oh cum'on stop this thanks giving session.It was so nice 2 meet u.v had so much fun with emaan n Arnav.
EM: papa grandy achi
AR: haan beta bahut achi
he lifted her up.
ARNAV: papa
AR: awe mera beta aaja tu bhi aaja.
he tuk both his kids in both his arms n smiled n the photo was captured by Ridz in the video-camera
OLD MAN: v had recorded the whole fum v had made.ur kids r very intelligent.they did all sort of mischiefs
RI: I hope they didn't trouble u much
WOMAN: trouble !!they r 2 sweet little angels.by the way v didn't have any introduction yet
RI: haan i'm Riddhima Malik.- a doctor at Sanjeevani-Mumbai
AR: hmm n i'm Armaan me 2 a doctor at Sanjeevani
MAN: I'm Peter n I'm an industrialist n my wife Jenny housewife.
The old man placed his arms on the shoulder of his wife.
JENNY: so u r here for what?
AR: just tuk sum time 2 spend sumtime with the family u know v doctors don't get enough time 4 leisure.
MAN: ya u r correct.U luv ur wife a lot haan.u both r the most beautiful couple I've ever seen in my life.
Ridz blushed at his statement
WOMAN: u luk so pretty wid red cheeks
AR: ya she does.
He smiled n ridz just smiled.
PE: well this is my card u may visist us anytime u want any kind of assistance in Malaysia.
AR: thank u so much
JE: so where r u guys gonaa now
RI: I think v'll return 2 Kuala Lumpur.
JE: ddi u see the Temple
AR: weat sort of temple??
JE: Well its a Chinese temple a very magnificient one n v know dat u indians r very devoted so why don't u pay a visit there.
AR: I wished v cud but it will get late.Its already 7.
He lukd at ridz whose face lowered which hurted him.He knew she wwnted 2 visit the temple
PE: wats the big deal stay one night here
AR: but v have 2 get a hotel n i don'tknow if v'll b able 2 get rooms
JE: oh cum'on wen v r here why do u say like dat.
She lukd at Peter who nodded his head.
PE: see u have made our eve a memorable one plz allow us 2 do sumthing 4 u
RI: no thanx I mean how can v
JE: v r the age of ur parents n v think dat in India youngsters obey their elders
AR:ya but
PE: no v won't listen anything.take this card this is our house here in Penang .u can stay there as long as u want
AR: oh no plz thanx a lot but v can manage in a hotel
JE: if u don't agree v'll feel bad
Armaan lukd at riddhima n she conveyed the msg thru her eyes by blinking it oce
AR: ok thanx a lot .i don't have words 2 express my gratitude
PE: sons don't have 2 thank their fathers na .plz no need of this formality.
AR: alright den
PE: ok my manager wil b there 4 u.u guys have fum ok.
RI: thanx.
PE: ok den v shud leave as v need 2 go abck 2 Kuala Lumpur.
AR: ya u r right.
PE: well i must say Armaan ur wife is very sweet n really very beautiful
AR: I know but aunty is even more pretty.
both women blushed.ARmaan kissed Jenny's hand n den they left 4 their destinations.
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They reached the house.
It was a marvelous house with a swimming pool.



AR: wow yaar this is so beautiful hai na
RI: hmm its really very gud.
DRIVER: sir u may plz go ahead i'll bring the luggage in a few seconds.

Riddhima had prepared a small bag for them coz she knew dat goin on the beach means kapdon ki shamat aana.so she put extra clothes for all of them.
MANAGER: Welcum sir .Peter sir called me half an hour b4 n told abt u.
plz cm inside.
they went inside n were mesmerised by the beauty of the house.The interiors were splendid.
after a short convo manager gave sum instructions 2 the servants of the house n left.

The first thing whcih ridzy didwas that she put Emaan n Arnav 2 a bath n made them get fresh.She asked the made 2 bring their food n the kids being so tired slept quietly.

Armaan got changed n was waiting 4 Ridz.he was much hungry.

Wen ridzcame he 4got 2 blink his eyes as se had a towel in her hand wiping her hairs n she headed 2 the bag 2 take out the gown.
She put the gown on the bed n lukd at Armaan who was observing her 4m top 2 bottom.Her suit was cluntched 2 her body her whole wet body aroused him.She understud his mind n immediately tuk the gown 2 go 2 the washroom but he held her hand n pined her off 2 the wall throwing the gown on the bed once more.

RI: Armaan plz chodo i need 2 get fresh plz.
AR: silent.
he just gazed in her eyes wid utmost luv.
RI: Armaan
she lukd in hsi eyes n finding him lost in her she tuk the advantage n pushed him slighlty sch dat he fell on the couch.She rushed 2 take the gown n went slashed the washroom door.
AR: this is cheating .
RI: acha
AR: ek baar bahar aajao Mrs. Malik phir batata hoon.
RIdz came out after 15 min.
She was lukin so hot in her sleeveless violet gown.
she found Armaan standing at the window lukin at the stars.
She hugged him 4m behind placing her hands on his chest n kissed his earlobe
RI: I luv u
AR: oye hoye abhi kab mera romance ka mood tha tab toh bhaag gayi aur ab romance soojh raha hai
RI: ji nahin main toh bas pney roothey huey hubby ko mananey ki koshish ar rahi ti
He moved back 2 face her
AR: toh tumhain kya lagta hai main is choti si kiss se maan jaunga
RI: bilkul nahin lekin agar issey achi wali chaiye toh pehley khana kha lo phir jo chahogey wahi hoga
AR: pakka
RI: haan baba ab chalo
They ate the delicious Malaysian food.
AR: yaar riddhima I really like this food tum bhi banana seekh lo
RI: ok main Saniya ki mom se seekh lugi ok
AR: u r such a darling
he kissed her cheek.
RI: kya din ka ek bhi pal aisa hota hai jab tumhain romance nahin soojhta
AR: hota hai na
RI: acha kab
RI: jab raat ko tum mujhpey meherbaan hokar mujhey pyaar karti ho tab.
He grinned naughtily n she blushed badly.She lukd down a bit nervous
AR: oye hoye aapki yeh sahrmo haya kab khatam hogi hamari shaadi ko teen saal ho chukey hain .par ek baat kahoon jab bhi tum mere naam par is tarah se sharma jati ho aur apni palkein utha k wpas gira leti ho tumhari in jheel si aankhon main dil karta hai kho jaun hamesha k liye .tumhain bas aisey hi dekhta rahoon tumhain pyaar karta rahoon.
she lukd at him luvingly feeling touched by his words.She knew verey well wat she meant 2 him n her their luv as most dear 2 both of them.
AR: Toh madam kahan toh ho gaya ab meri wish
RI: one sec khana toh hata doon
AR: kyun tum kyun hataogi main maid se keh deta hoon
RIar
AR: par war kuch nahin.
he immediately k/a the maid who was in her room n asked her 2 clean the table 4 them.
The maid smiled n nodded.
they den retired 2 theirroom.
He immediately locked the door n lifted her up in his arms n placed her on the bed.
RI: tumhain chain nahin hai
AR: nahin.
he tuk of his T-shirt nseeing his hot body she melted.as he approached her she didn't knew wen er hands started pulling him more closer.he was abt 2 kiss her lips wen the Ridzy's mobile rang.
AR: arey yaar isey bhi abhi bajna tha.
RIdz picks up the phone
RI: di kaisi hain aap aur how is Atul
AN: hum toh theek hain tu bata i hope mainey ghalat waqt par call nahin kiya
Ridz blushed
RI: aisa kuch bhi nahin hai di humney bas abhi abhi dinner kya hai aur bataiye how is Singapore
AN: beautiful isa lagta hai ek alag duniya main aagaye hon.yahaan k nazaraye itney khoobsurat hain
RI: toh aap donon kafi enjoy kar rahey ho I hope Atul aapko zyada tang nahin karta hoga aisa toh nahin na ki kahin janey k bajaye all the time he makes u sit in the hotelroom
AN: RIDZY tu !! bahut badmash ho gayi hai i guess Armaan ki sangat ka asar hai
RI: jo keh lo aur batiye
Armaan cudn't take this any lonegr .he lowered the snap of her gown n kissed her shoulder.She shivered
AN: tu bata alaysia main khoob maza kar rahi hogi
RI: hmm haan di
she cudn't speak as his touch wud make her lose her thinking ability.
he kissed her neck while she held the phone.
She turned so dat her back faced him 2 skip his kisses.nut he removed the hairs n kissed he back .She cud milderly talk.
AN: ridzy kya hua acahanak tu ajeeb sa behave kyun kar rahi hai aur Armaan kahan hai
RI: di woh washroom main hai
She said this out of nervousness while he smiled n kissed her hairs.He opened the zip of her gon n slighlty lowered it down.she was tingling.
RI: acha di main aapsey baat karti hoon shayad Armaan ko kuch chahiye.
keeping the phone she hit him
RI: tumhain zara sa bhi sabr nahin hai main baat tak nahin kar p[a rahai thi
AR: toh meri kya ghalti agar Anji ne ghalaat tme pe phone kiya tha aur waisey bhi tumney hi kaha tha ki i'm fre 2 do wat ican toh ab gussa kyun ho rahi ho
RI: God Armaan tumsey koi nahin jeet sakta.
AR: absey hum sotey waqt mobile switch off kar diya karengey
RI: hmm theek hai so jatey hain.
she place her arm on her eyes naughtily
AR: mainey phone band karney ko kaha pyaar nahin.
she laughed n placed arma round his neck.RI:Iluv u
AR: I luv u 2.
He buried his face in her neck n showered kisses on her body.Slowly his kisses became frequent and is lips travelled all along her whole body.She too slowly gave into her desires and caressed his perfect abs with her soft fingers.It took no longer for them to drown into their own heavenly world of love.They made luv till they were completely exhausted n contended n then lied spent in each others embrace.
AR: I love you basket...
She placed his head on his chest and kissed it softly whispering:I love you too my jaan-mera Armaan..
AR: oye hoye
They both closed their eyes with a broad dreamy smile on their faces enjoying the memories of the few moments they had just spent together.
Very soon they slept soundly being totally tired of sight-seeing and never-ending romance..
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Next day Armaan woke up at 11 am n saw his beutiful wife sleeping besides him.He lukd at her smiling contended face the face dat wud fill his heart with wholesum happiness.He was most happy wen he found her peaceful,happy n contended as she was after cumin 2 Malaysia.This was the reason he brought her here 2 change her mind n fill her wid new energy n enjoy these holidays 2 the fullest they can.

He lukd at the clock.it was 11.10 am

Scene changes 2 kids room where the kids are awake.
Emaan n Arnav exchange sum childish talks n they were quite hungry.they needed their mama 2 .they came out of the room toddling n tried 2 open the lock of their mom-dad's room.Arnav was successful in dat.the kids saw their dad lying down on the bed caressing the face of their mama.

EM: papa!!
She rushed 2 him n Arnav followed her.
AR: aley meley bachey uth gaye apney aap bhookh lagi hai both noddede thier heads.
Emaan then observed the bare chest of her father
EM: papa kapdey kahan hain??aap shame shame
She giggled n so did Arnav .Armaan smiled n put on his T-shirt.
He lukd at Ridz who was still sleeping.her bare shoulders were visible n 2 avoid the further query of kids he covered her wholly wid the blanket.
ARNAV: mama mama!!
He started 2 wake Ridz
AR: Arnav beta plz mama ko soney dijiye woh kafi thak gayi hain na
ARNAV: nahin mama uthao papa mama ko jagao
AR: bata jagao nahin jagayiye
ARNAV: mama
He started 2 pull ridzy's blanket
ridz murmererd in her sleep while turning 2 the other side such dat her back was facing them.
RI: kya Armaan soney do na
AR: Riddhima 11 baj rahey hain
RI: Armaan soney do na plz ek toh raat bhar jagaya ab toh soney do atleast.
ARNAV: mama
Ridz:Armaan ab tum Arnav ki awaaz bana kar mujhey jaganey ki koshish mat karo
EM: mama uthiye
RI: Emaan
she turned back n opened her eyes
RI: aley meley bachey itni jaldi uth gaye
AR: agar 11 bajey jaldi hota hai toh pata nahin der se uthna tum kisey kahogi
RI: sab tumhari wajah se hua hai
AR: acha
he lukd at her naughtily.
She blushed remembering the last night.
She now noticed her bare body n immediately covered herself 2 the neck as her cover slid down a bit
ARNAV: mama nashta
RI: haan beta bas aap papa k paas kheliye mama apke liye nashta abhi lati hain ok
She caressed the cheek of Arnav n stud up wrpping the cover around herself
She was abt 2 go wen Ammy held her hand
AR: meri morning kiss
RI: Armaan sharm karo bachey baithey hain
AR: acha bachey mujhsey pooch rahey they ki main bina shirt k kyun tha kaho toh aapke pyaar ki nishaniyan dikha doon.
he pointed 2 lipstick marks on the back of his body
RI: ARmaaa!
he put 4ward his cheek n she pecked it n rushed 2 the washroom.
he smiled
AR: oye-hoye
Armaan played wid the kids 4 sumtime n meanwhile Ridz went 2 the kitchen
The maid giggled wen she entered.
RI: pata nahin itni der tak kaisey soti reh gayi main
The maid giggled at her stmnt.
RI: kya hua muskura kyun rahi ho
MAID: no ma'am nothing i can understand the reason 4 late wakening
she blushed n started 2 give her the orders 4 the brekfast.
Afetr half an hour the whole family were eating the breakfast in a joyous mood .just den the manager entered.
MA: I'm sorry i hope i didn't disturb u
AR: oh not at all plz join us
MA: no thanx but breakfast very late
Armaan smiled n lukd at Ridz who was deep red now.manager grinned
MA: Well I can understand .anyways I've cum 2 ask u wat all placs have u decided 2 visit 2day
AR: its just the temple Peter uncle talked off.
MA: If u don't mind i wud suggest u 2 pay visit 2 it in night coz in night it luks splendid.rest time u can observe another beautiful places of this island

Armaan lukd at Ridz who blinked her eyes n he understud wat she meant.

AR: ok den which place is woprthwhile 2 visit.well this island is really magnificient.

why don't u visit the Penang hill.
RI: THAT will b interesting. hai na Armaan
AR: as u say my princess.
She smiled at his address n manager grinned seeing this luvly couple.
MA: ok den get ready n i'll make arrangements 4 ur visit.
AR: thanx a lot.

Manager left
Ridz first got Emaan n Arnav ready wid the help of maid meanwhile Armaan also got ready.
Ridz wen came back saw her charming handsum husband who was trying 2 tie up his shoe lace.she tied it up n lukd at him luvingly.he was lukin so hot.
she caressed his face n kissed on his forehead.
AR: oye hoye bada pyaar aa raha hai.
RI: kyun pyaar karney ka haq sirf tumhey hai Mr. Malik
AR: not at all Mrs. Malik hum toh aapki meherbaniyon k intezaar main rehtey hain aaj ka din ban gaya.He held her by the waist n she put her hands on his chest.
RI: tum yeh baatein kaisey kartey ho
AR: aapkey pyaar ne sab kuch sikha diya.
both laughed.he kissed her 4head .
She rested her head on his chest wen maid came she stud at the door a bit puzzled.she coughed slighlty.
they immediately seperated.
MAID: I'm sorry 2 disturb u .the door was not locked so.sorry .actually Arnav is not wearing his shoes.
they were a bit embarassed but Armaan immediately spoke
AR: acha let me see Arnav .
he left n maid followed him.
Armaan got arnav n made him wear his shoes afetr few moments of chase n fun.
Ridz got ready.
She wore a beautiful purple coloured saree .
Armaan was callingher downstairs n wen she came out n stepped down he didn't blink his eyes.his eyes were fixed upon her.
She was lukin so hot n beautiful in dat saree.she wore a sleeveless blouse which made her luk more deadly.

RI: chalein
AR: hmmm

AR: haan
they headed out on a long ride 2 the hill.
They reached the hill after 1 hr.it was 1 pm now.
RI: Wow Armaan kitna khoobsurat nazara hai yeh wadiyan yeh fizayen kitna sukoon hai yahaan man ko ekdam thandak mehsoos ho rahi hai hai.it feels ek dum nayio duniya main aagaye hon
AR: hmm relly this place is mind soothing.



AR: thanx for the info
AR: toh ready for the cable car
RI: Armaan dar lag raha hai aur bachey unhey dar laga toh
AR: kuch nahin hoga bachon aapko rain main baith k saara nazara dekhna hain jaisey woh log dekh rahey hain.
He pointed out 2 a cable car
EM: haan haan
ARNAV: haan papa hum bhi
AR: dats like my brave kids bas yeh mama hi darpok nikal gayin
RI: ok chalo
AR: main hoon na
RI: isiliye toh chal rahi hoon


They tuk the cable car n sat in it n viewed the whole Penang island thru it.they also viewed all the becutiful locations of this luvly island.they captured many pics in the video camera.they had made many videos of this journey as per Karan's instructions.they enjoyed the whole journey of the Penag island thru the cable car.

They had lots of fun n shared sum romantic moments too.
The kids made lot of fum wid thier mom dad.
The trip was full of recreation for them..
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I hope you guys enjoyed the part.
I'll send the pms tomorrow.It's quite late right now..
Waiting for ur views.
love
Asma

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Posted: 13 years ago
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resd
edit aftr 10 jan
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Asma!!!!!!
This was a lovely part!! 👏
At the right time too!
Was really missing DMG because of star one ending all shows.
But AR romance was so cute!!
Can't get enough!
And this part was so long! Your hard work really shows. 😊
The children are so cute!
And Armaan... just no words. ❤️
The photos created a great effect.
Amazing update and thanks for pm!!!!!!!!!
Hoping for more soon! 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing part ...loved AR moments and the pictures just add gr8 effect ..waiting to read more !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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enjoying honeymoon to core...😳
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gr8 part di <3<3
Edited by dhruvikaluvsKSG - 13 years ago

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