Saarrthi 4 Suraj~Manasvi & Arjun~Bhoomi!! - Page 14

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Posted: 19 years ago
👏 plz do continue soon..gud going..😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow... too too too good.... 👏 👏 👏
i hope yuv doesnt succeed in doing something evil..
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Posted: 19 years ago
Very very nice.Post the next part soon.
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Posted: 19 years ago
heyi.. i'm waiting shirl.. where's more..
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow....ur back wid ur awesome ff 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
ok..ppl..updating episode 31 😃
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Episode 31

(The next day...the alarm clock rings 8:00am...Manasvi is still asleep...and hears the alarm clock)

maansvi(drowsy): uff..subha..subha..disturb karta hai clock..(turns it off): much better...

(manasvi puts her hand across the bed to feel suraj....but feels nothing...she wakes up..and sits up in bed...and sees suraj dressed up in a black suit wid dark blue shirt..and is just doing his tie)

manasvi: suraj..itne subha ko kaha jaa rahe ho?
suraj: manasvi...pata hai...ki early subha mein mere phone phar call aaya tha..ki mujhe office jaana parega...arjun ko bhi jaana parega...iss liye...
manasvi: tho phir mujhe bula diya hota...main tumhare tie karte thi...jaise hamesha karte aaye hoo... 😛
suraj: haan voh tho hai....lekhen main tumhe disturb nahin karna chahta tha... 😳
manasvi: erm..ok...main nashta lao..?
suraj: erm..nahin..maan nahin kar raha hai...main aur arjun office mein lunch kar lenge...vaise kaam buhut hai..ki nahsta ki time bhi nahin hai...
manasvi: lekhen...
suraj: manasvi...relax...main theek ho...acha..khushi ready hogaye hai...hum dono time phar utti thi...aur main usse drop kar tha hoo...
manasvi: nahin...agar aaj buhut important din hai kaam ki liye...tho phir tum aur arjun abhi isse waqt jao..main khushi ko drop kar dethi hoo...
suraj: r u sure?
manasvi: yeah...
suraj: ok then..(kisses her forehead...and hugs her tightly): i luv u..
manasvi: i luv u too...
(suraj goes down....and leaves HH 4 work...menawhile Manasvi gets Khushi some breakfast)

(arjun is getting ready...and bhoomi is still asleep..)

arjun(luking 4 waller): mera wallet kaha gaya?(sees the wallet on bed...and tries to get it widout disturbing bhoomi...): almost there..(tries to reach out...bhoomi suddnely wakes up)
arjun(seeing bhoomi waking up): oops...
bhoomi: kya hua....arjun?
arjun: hey hunny...main hoo...sorry..tumhe disturb kiya tha..main..haina?
bhoomi: nahin...vaise acha hua..ki main jaa gaye hoo...varna pata nahin kitne dhir ki liye sui rehte...
arjun: erm...bhavri?
bhoomi: haan?
arjun: mujhe aur bhaiyya ko achanak office jaana parega...tho..
bhoomi: acha..phir jao...
arjun: haan...lekhen...aise halat mein?
bhoomi: tum mere fikahr maath karo..ghar mein manasvi bhabhi..aur shefali bhabhi hai...ma-ji..aur baisa bhi hai...tho fikahr kis baat ki?
arjun: haan bhavri...lekhen main nahin karonga phir kaun karega...jitna main tumse pyar karta hoo...uthna koi aur kar nahin sakta...
bhoomi: arjun...dekho..main honge...mujhe aaj koi shopping karne thi...
arjun: kiss ki liye?
bhoomi: bas aise...aur thori se..(blushes: baby ki liye kuch karne thi...
arjun: oh...main saath chalo..
bhoomi: excuse me..mister...aapko office jaana tha..haina?
arjun: haan..lekhen...
bhoomi: lekhen kuch nahin...main maansvi bhabhi ki saath chale jaonge...ok?
arjun: ok...main chaltha hoo...(kisses her on the forehead): i luv u..
bhoomi: i luv u too...

(arjun and suraj both go 2 office...meanwhile manasvi is about to drop off khushi at school)

manasvi: chalo..khushi....school ka time hogaya hai..
khushi: ok mummy..
bhoomi: manasvi bhabhi..?
manasvi: haan bhoomi..kya hua?
bhoomi: bhabhi...mujhe kuch shopping karne thi...aur kya aap mere saath jaa skate hai..?
manasvi: haan kyun nahin...pehle hum dono khushi ko drop karte hai..phir shopping chalte hai...ok?
bhoomi: ok...

(the three leave in the car...and reach khushi's school)

khushi: bye mummy..
manasvi: bye beta...gud girl rehna ok?
khushi: ok mummy....bye bye..bhoomi aunty..
bhoomi(hugs her): bye beta...(khushi goes inside)
maanasvi: acha...phir chalti hai..shopping ki liye..
bhoomi: ok..(both get in the car..)

(manasvi is driving the car..and bhoomi is sitting besides her..suddenly out of nowhere...another car is coming towards them..manasvi tires to press the brakes..)

bhoomi: OMG...bhabhi...brakes...brakes...
manasvi(presses on them): voh kaam nahin kar rahe hai...(the brakes have failed): brakes fail hogaye hai...

(maansvi's car crashes into the other one...and turns over...bhoomi and manasvi r both unconscious...and are bleeding all over their arms...and face...manasvi is trapped inside..and bhoomi fell out of the car...a man passing by helps them)

man(helping bhoomi): arre...yeh kya hogaya...koi hai...koi ambulance ko bulao...come on!!!!
(another man calls the ambulance)
bhoomi(murmuring arjun's name): arjun....arjun....arjun..
man: arjun? yeh arjun kaun hai?(sees bhoomi's mobile..and takes it and tries 2 find arjun's number..in the address book..he finds it..and calls him..)
man 2: saab..ek aur aurat hai....(pulls out manasvi..): doosri aurat...hai....OMG...
manasvi(murmuring suraj's name): suraj...kaha ho tum...suraj..?

(the man holding bhoomi's phone..talks 2 arjun)

arjun: haan bhoomi...speak up
man: saab...main bhoomi nahin...erm...aap arjun ho kya?
arjun: jee...lekhen aap kaun hai..aur mere patni ka mobile apki saath kaise hai?
man: saab...aapki patni aur ek doosri aurat ka accident hogaya hai...
arjun: WHAT??!!!!! jhuth....plz....voh kaha hai...erm...tell me..
man: ambulance aa gaye hai..aur hum un dono ko Mumbai Memorial Hospital lekhar jaa rahe hai...
arjun: ok...main abhi aaya...aur doosri aurat kaun thi?
man: erm..pata nahin sab..lekhen voh kisi suraj ka naam lee rahe hai..
arjun(shocked): manasvi..bhabhi...(hungs up)
suraj: kya hua..arjun..kaun tha voh?
arjun: bhaiyya..hume hospital jaana parega...
suraj: kyun? kyun? kyun?
arjun: maansvi bhabhi aur bhavri ka accident hogaya hai...
suraj(shocked): WHAT???!!!!

(both leave for the hospital)

Precap: Bhoomi & Manasvi are being operated, meanwhile Suraj~Arjun find out that the accident was a attempt of murder.

Howz dat, ppl?
Shirley thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
abhi bhi no replies? wassup..people? dont u like my ff's anymore? 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!! poor bhavri and manasvi... neways, lovely fan-fic....
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: Shirley

abhi bhi no replies? wassup..people? dont u like my ff's anymore? 😭

heyi gal... no telling such things okay !! els ..........😡

who told ya ur ff's r not liked... look at me.. still here.. every time.. to read the fab ff's... i lov them yaar.. as always...

n great episode.. 👏👏👏 but manasvi n bhoomi's accident😭😭 real bad.. i remember starting words.. suraj is unfortunate.. i hope nothing happenss...

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