D3 ff..kaisa yeh ishq hai p 12 pg 50 - Page 3

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Amazing update! I loved it but I had a question which is does Kriya know that Raj and Rey are brothers? But very nice! 😃 Can you plzzz pm me next time when you update. 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow!! awesome concept.do pm me..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
awesome start!! plz update soon!! pm me!!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
OMG!! this is really awesome!!
cant wait to read on
update soon!! and plz pm me :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superbbb
plz pm me nxt time

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Posted: 13 years ago
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just read all parts they r awesome pls update soon and pm me
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey guys thxx very much..ur commetnts meanse alto 2 mee..😊
part 2
toronto..
11:pm
Trin trin kria picked up her mobile and received d call and said
Kria-hello kaun hai jo mujhe subha subha pareshan kar raha hai.
Raj- Happy birthday 2 u my love..
Kria- raj tumhe yaad tha? Aww I love u .
Raj- ok fast get ready mai tumhe pick up karne aaraha hu 2 day is a special day..see ya in 10 min.
Kria- bt raj.. uff phone kat diya.bt uski kya galti hai usse to nahi pata dat aaj ke din kisi ne mujhe dokha diya tha..(wid irritated mood) uffu kria tumhe koi hak nahi hai usko yaad karne ka jisne tumhe use kiya..:(
1:00 PM
Kria- God yeh raj kahan reh gaya? Bol raha tha 10 min mai aaraha hu 1 hr ho gaya..chalo jaa ke juice hi bana leti hu..
Kria- yeh ladke bhi naa kabhi time pe nahii aate..
Raj- im so sry kia actually mai thoda late ho gaya..kria?
Kria-ohh agaye tum atlast.
Raj-aww kria tum gussa ho?
Kria 'nahii mai to bohut kush hu..
Raj-gud achi baat hai..
Kria 'kya? Mai bohut gussa hu..
Raj-tum girls hoti hi aisi hai koi baat ka sahi answer nahi deti..ok fine ab gussa chodo aur mere saath chalo..
Kria-no mai nahii arahi ..
Raj-plzzz *puppy face*
Kria-ok chalo..
Raj-wait a min aise nahi eyes pe blindfold bandho pehle
Kria-kya kar rahe ho raj tum..
Raj-plzz..
Kria-ok..kria in her mind plzz plzz karke sara kaam karvata hai..
Raj-ok ab lets go..
After half an hour
Kria-raj kitni door hai mai andhi ho jaongi..
Raj-bas hum aagaye'chalo I will open ur blindfold..
When he opened her blindfold kria was surprised.
Kria-woww..raj its soo awesum..aww I love u..
She hugged him thightly.he hugged her back
Raj-u liked it ?
Kria-I loved it
It was a gardern and path covered with arched rose arbours..

After 5 hrs dey went 2 a have dinner in a restaurant
Raj-kria mai tumse kuch bolna chata hu
Kria-kya?
Raj-dat kal hum india jaa rahe hai..
Kria-really?
Raj-yeh..
Kria-aww ur soo good .. waise bhi I was missing mom..thx raj..
Raj-ur always welcum dear..waise kria i guess mai sirf 3 months ke liya india aa sakta hu so mai tumhari mom se shaadi ki baat karu?
Kria- raj tumhe nahi lagta we r goin 2 fast??
Raj-hum ek baar tumhari mom se baat karke dekhte hai den we will get engage shaadi baad mai karlenge ..
Kria-theek hai..i will see..ok drop me home packing karni hai..
Raj-yeh mujhe bhi kuch kaam karne hai..
India
Swayam sleeping on his bed..his servant came to tell dat he is goin
Servant-swayam sahib mai jaa raha hu..
He did nt wake up den the servant touched swayams hands and swayam pulled him closer his eyes were closed and he said
Swayam-ohh agayi tum
Servant-sahib..aa..aap kya kar rahe hai
Swayam-shh bilkul chup acha Sharon mujhe ab ek kiss de do
Servant ' sahib mai sharon madam nahi hu
Sharon heard swayams voice frm out side
Sharon-yeh swayam kisse baat karaha hai kahi dosri ladki to nahi?
Sharon opened d door and yelled swayam
Swayam opened his eyes and pushed d servant.Sharon started laughing.
Swayam-tum yaha kya kar rahe the?
Servant-sir mai to apko bolne aaya tha dat mai jaa raha hu par aapne to..
Swayam ' shutup ab jao yahan se
Sharon-ha jao kal phir aana(she started laughing)🤣
Swayam-haso aur zor se haso..
Sharon-sry..actually *laughs*🤣 mai yeh kehna tha jaldi ready ho jao we have to go
Swayam-bt where?
Sharon-rey ke ghar jana tha bhul gaye..
Swayam ' oo haan..(pushed her closer* itni bhi kya jaldi hai..
Sharon-swayam leave me..
Swayam-chodne ke liye nahi pakda..(moving towards her face)
Sharon pushed him
Sharon-tumhe nahi jaana mai jaa rahi hu
Swayam-arey! Wait..im cumin..
Sharon-jaldi mai tumhara wait kar rahi hu..
Swayam came down Sharon was staring him'when he came near she kissed him
Sharon-lets go..
Swayam-yeh rey bhi subah subah bula leta hai..
Sharon-kuch kaha tumne ne?
Swayam-nahi sweetheart chalo or we'l be late..

Toronto
Raj- *talkin on phone* hello rey
Rey-bro? kitne din baad phone kiya..
Raj-and hw r u?
Rey-im fine..and u?
Raj-mai bhi theek hu..actually rey mai tumse keh raha tha dat hum India aarahe hai..
Rey-wow dats gr8 new itne saal baad India arahe ho aap..but hum? Aapke saath aur kaun hai?
Raj-wo surprise hai..
Rey-plzz tell na
Raj-actually mai apni girlfriend ko lekar aaraha hu I love her very much so India aake hum engage ho jaye ge
Rey-dats gud atlast koi ladki to mere bhai ko pasand aaye wats her name?
Raj-who to tumhe tab hi pata chalega jab mai India aaonga..
Rey-okkk..waise dekhti kaise hai who?
Raj-she is very pretty the most gorgeous girl in d world..
Rey-naa kria se zyada nahi..
Raj-w8 a sec tumne kya kaha?
Rey-k..kya maine kuch nahi kaha
Raj-nahii tumne kuch kaha..
Rey-dude seriously mai ne kuch nahi kaha..
Raj *thinkin*to shayad ab mujhe kria ka naam saari jagah sunayi deta hai..
Raj-rey so tumhare aur Tanya ka kya hua..
Rey-bro maine khan a I dun love her mai to bas ek ladki se pyaar karta hu woh bhi maine kho di..
Raj-dude chill'u will surely meet her..rey tumha yaad hai jab hum chote the hum dono ko ek hi cheez pasand aaya karti thi? Aur hum us ko lene ke liya ladte the aur hamseha tu hi woh lekar jaata tha..
Rey-yea yaad hai mereko..
Raj-bt u knw wat jab tum meri gf ko dekho get um usmi hi kho jaoge she is so beautiful..*dreamy face*😍
Rey-dude let me tell u mujhe koi intrest nahi kisi ladki mai maine bas ek se pyaar kiya aur ussi se pyaar karunga..and I hate dat gal jisne mere bhai ko mujhse door kardiya..:😔
Raj-arey kaise baat karta hai tu..pagal mat ban..
Rey-ok sry..
Raj-mai tumse kabhi naraz nahii hua.
Rey-ok bye koi door bell baja raha hai'
Raj-byee..
Precap-flashback of hw rey n kria got seprated and swayam and sharon started dating..
guys hope u liked it plzz hit like if u want pms.😊
Edited by awesomeabshu - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
it was awsum yaar m addicted to ur ff now...
plzzz update soon...cant wait for the nxt part...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
it was superb
loved it
and really wondering how rey and kriya separated ❓
your ff is great👍🏼
loved it
please continue soon eagerly waiting for the next part
please PM me next time please 😊

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