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Posted: 13 years ago

Ye Kaisi Mohabbat Hai

After a awesome trip they were drove back towards home,Dia was tired so she had been slept in Nupur's lap peacefully, the content, happiness in Dia's eyes Nupur had seen today she never seen before..

"Thanks Mayank"

Finally Nupur broke the silence almost with her whispering tone and Mayank who was silently driving the car turned to look at her.

"Nupur I want to see you happy and I will do anything for that" he stared in her eyes for a moment to convey his feelings and then again turned to staring straight to watch out the road..

Love was evident in his words which she could felt ,she hold her breath to control her raising her beat, the new feeling, emotions which were raising in her heart for Mayank was making her restless. The pain, loneliness she always had felt in his words now she was feeling in her heart..

Again silence had been prevailing between them but she was kept looking at him with the corner of her eyes, He seemed so far away from the world despite the fact that he was still living in it. She wasn't sure how to talk to him anymore. She used to be able to tell him so many things and now just making small talk was looking a difficult task. She did not know why? But she had started considering herself the reason of his loneliness, his pain though still she did not know the truth.

But really something was missing in his life, he was not the same Mayank who used to tease her, the way his eyes used to sparkles with dreams, nothing was the same except the fact he was the Same Mayank,her Best friend who could do anything for her just one smile..

She thought and felt her eyes pockets getting wet, she hurriedly wiped of her tears..

"I wish Mayank I could bring happiness in your life as I too want to see you happy"she muttered under her breath keep looking at him..

Mayank stopped the car and turned to looked at Nupur who was now trying to wake up Dia "Dia..wake up'."she was shrugging her shoulder when Mayank interrupted her..

"Let her sleep.."

Mayank said and come out of the car and opened the door for Nupur..he leaned to pick up Dia and Nupur leaned back her head to give him some space as Mayank raised his hands towards Dia,his hands brushed with her and their skins came into touch and the current passed through in their bodies, they looked up and their eyes met, her heart was pumping fast to feel his face closed to her and Mayank could hear heart beat, the strange happiness engulfed him to realized it was the effect of his closeness on her, her flipping eyes with nervousness, the slight blushed which had appeared on her face enhancing her beauty and he could not help but admiring her more and more with each passing moment..

Nupur who was aware of his intense gazes lowered her eyes to avoid the eye contact again.Mayank composed himself as he felt her uncomfortable. he took Dia in his arms and walked inside the house while Nupur closing the door of car had followed him..

Mayank laid down Dia on bed and Nupur adjusted pillow under her head and gave her comforter. Mayank kissed Dia on her forehead lovingly caressing her cheek. Trying to avoid any eye contact Nupur moved away from bed and about to take step towards cupboard when her foot tripped and she was about to fall When Mayank held her by her waist but could not stable his balance and they both landed on bed.

Getting some consciousness Nupur opened her eyes which were closed due to fear and found herself underneath him. He was almost lying on her; she raised her eyes bit only to look in those deep brown eyes which were glued on her face. he blinked his eyes for confirmation as it was not his dream, she was so closed to her, so closed even he wanted he could feel her, he could kiss her, their faces were just few inches away from each other, their breathes were mingling with each other, their hearts were pumping fast against their chests which they could hear,

you can restrict yourself from anything but how can someone control his heart to beat for that person whom he loved deeply, an only person whom he prayed to get..

Nupur gasped air to feel his warmth deep breath closed to her face and shyly lowered her eye lashes.Mayank touched her face with his fingers and her heart skipped and she closed her eyes as she had not courage to looked into his eyes, stroking her hair he traced seductively his finger on her face and she held her breath and tightly clutched the sheet in her fist..Mayank tucked the stray of her hair behind her ear and leaning over her he softly placed his lips on her forehead feeling her skin and she tightly closed her eyes, he lingered his lips for a moment and then moved his face a bit back only to see her face which had been turned crimson red due to blush, he smiled slightly caressing her cheeks with the tip on her finger, she shuddered under his touch he leaned again and kissed her cheek, she raised her hand and clutched his shirt. he raised his face and inhaled her scent inside her, all desired which was he hiding inside his heart for so long finally came out and he lost his control on his heart. He traced his finger near her lips and Nupur opened her eyes with jerk breathing deep and stared into his eyes, she was shivered to see passion, intensity in his eyes, his scanning eyes, his warmth breath making her forget everything except him,she did not know why but she was liking their intimacy she wanted him close to her, his touch was effecting her like drug, his every touch was making her feel bless, she jerked her thoughts to realize what was she thinking.

Suddenly his cell phone rang and brought them back to reality..getting conciousnes Mayank got up hurriedly not meeting his eyes with her'

"How could I do that?"he was shocked at himself for doing that while stabling her breath Nupur too got up, she was hell embarrassed to look at him.

"How could I loosed control on my heart"he coldly scolded himself for spending that moment with her and turned back to look at her who was sitting on bed embarrassedly looking down..

Again his cell phone rang and the name on screen had took him back to reality..

"Raj!!!"he muttered under his breath looking blankly at screen with wetting eyes and received the call..

"I hope you did not forget your promise"

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Precap...

"Mayank loves me"a paper slipped down from her hand..

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here is next part...i hope u ll liked it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey m 1st one to comment😃
hey really beautiful update😊
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mindblowing update
romantic and amazingly written
loved it,,,
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow...what a beautiful update
beautifully written
Mayur moments were awesom
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
so nice and romantic update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update SIS...
i loved it lodsss...
Beautifully written as usual...
loved it to d core...
uff!!! hw can dis man love her to dis extend...
i love him lodsss...
it was heavenly part...
i loved der closeness...
bt i hate dar Raj hw cud he ruin dis moment...arhhh
so now he hv called him to get d divorce..😡
hoping Nupur will kick him hard soon...😡
waotong eagerly for d next part as d precap seemed to b revealing d Truth...😳
loved it...
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Fabulous update

Precap sounds good😊


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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing update
u wrote it beautifully
i loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesumesttt update..
aww mayank lost his control over his feelingss...
i hope everything will become ri8...
thanks 4 the pm
may god bless u
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG OMG this ws so beautiful sis...😍
The part in the car and then in room ws beautifully written...I ws wishing to keep reading it...but it got end...😔..Loved it loads..
And uff that raj...kya timing hai...And OMG the precap...she's gonna know everything...cant wait now...
Update soon...

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