*Mayur SS/OS Gallary#4* NTL on pg 151 - Page 14

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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing one
Mayank loves Nupur so much,i hope she will understand his love
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Amazing SS
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome updt
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey Maria this is one of the best SS in all SS of yours 😃
let see how will Nupur realize Mayank feeling for her 😳
waiting eagerly for next part cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Writer Note

Thank u so much everyone for ur beautiful responce and comments🤗🤗means a lot to me🤗🤗
🤗i hope u ll liked the coming parts.
Maria...remember me in ur prayers🤗

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Ye kaisi Mohabbat hai

Mayank and Dia were in car was waiting for Nupur when they saw her coming towards their car'

"wow mama is looking gorgeous"Diya exclaimed happily looking at her mother while Mayank eyes got freeze at her, wearing light blue silk sari with open silky hair,light pink make up was enhancing her beauty ,she was looking breathtaking one could loose his senses to see such a beauty in front of his eyes. Mayank could not control his heart that wanted to capture her face in his heart. His heart was skipping with her each step.

Nupur shivered and lowered her eyes as she felt Mayank's eyes on her. She did not what was happening to her why she was feeling strange under his gaze,

The feeling which she never felt before not with her husband.

She could feel admiration, intensity in those eyes which was making her heart beat raised though she trying her best to control on those strange emotions that were making her restless.

She holds her breath avoiding his deep intense gazes which were affecting her like drug.

She suppressed fake smile on her face before proceeding towards them. Mayank gulped down his lump as realizing the fact how shamelessly he was starring her without caring about Nupur's feeling as he could see nervousness, awkwardness on her face due to his continuous gazing but what he could do he had been loosing control on his heart, those all desires that he had been buried somewhere in his heart was blossoming again..

He turned his face straight and closed his eyes for a moment to controlling his messed emotions..

"Mama you are looking gorgeous" Dia opened the door for her and hugged her tightly.

"Thank you my jaan"Nupur wrapped her in her arms and kissed her on her cheek..Dia leaned more towards Mayank so Nupur could sit there easily with them,she sat there and locked the door and Dia cuddled closed to her.

Nupur looked at Mayank with the corner of her eyes who was trying his best to avoid her gaze and it was the first time when she was feeling nervous to call his name.

"Mayank uncle Mama is looking gorgeous na..what you say?"Dia asked raising her eye borrows and Mayank who was lost somewhere came back into reality with Dia words and finally he turned his face towards them.Nupur embarrassedly lowered her eyes while Mayank again get lost in her but seeing her nervous he recollected himself..

"she always looks beautiful as she is the most beautiful girl of the world" he said admiring her looking at her face and Nupur gasped air before raising her eye and looked at him who was looking at her intensely

She gave him surprised look as she did not Mayank had always admired her secretly. He was reserved type person who hardly could expressed which was in his heart though Nupur was his best friend but he could never openly told her what was in his heart for her..

"I mean she is looking beautiful"Mayank corrected himself and smiled and kissed Dia as he did not want her to get know what was in his heart..

Nupur tried to collect her messed emotions and trying her best to be normal in front of Mayank though now it was getting difficult as Mayank's presence closed to her was affecting her and she had lost her control on her emotions but what all that was happening to her she did not know?

"Thanks" She smiled forcefully and turned her face in other side..

While Mayank got busy in talking with Dia as he did not want make her discomfort in his presence..

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"Mayank uncle where are we going towards?"Dia asked in questionably getting excited..

"Joyland(amusement park)?" Mayank turned his face towards her while taking turn and smiled to see her excitement..

"Wow" she clapped happily and Nupur too smiled to see Dia happy after many days..she looked at Mayank who was looking content to see Dia smiling happily .she was amazed to see his love, care and possessiveness towards Dia and Dia too was getting closed him. She did not even take his father name once in these few days, the love,care and attention she wanted from his father Mayank was giving her.

"You know Mayank Uncle Papa kabhi mujhe joyland (amusement park) nahi le ke aye bas aik bar mama mujhe le ker aye thi"she said in sad yet her typical childish tone and Mayank felt as something pricked in his heart,Mayank looked at Nupur who was trying to control those tears that were willing to come out..

He pulled Dia for hug with his one arm and kissed her forehead..

"hum her roz joyland (amusement park)aye ge,aur Dia ki her baat mane ge"he said loving;y looking and her face and she grinned.

"sach!!!"she asked in confirmation getting excited and he nodded his head,she grinned and cuddled closed to him hugging him with her tiny arms while Nupur could not help but looking at Mayank lovingly, it was true he had golden heart..

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Dia had enjoyed a lot in joyland (amusement park)she enjoyed the ride of Trick cars(Take a trip through time aboard a replica of the automotive industry. The ride is designed for the kiddies who like the open road.) LITTLE COASTER, WHIP(The Whip ride excites and thrills with quick motion and rapid spins.)And many more but Mayank was with her all the time so she could not get hurt herself while Nupur was looking them enjoying and playing..

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After a awesome trip they were drove back towards home,Dia was tired so she had been slept in Nupur's lap peacefully,the content,happiness in Dia's eyes Nupur's had seen today she never seen before..

"Thanks Mayank"

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here is next update...i hope u ll liked it😳

Edited by Maria. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
SIS...🤗

plzzz update "Fallacy MayUr" n "WLYF" n "Intezaar" plzzz
eagerly waiting for it...😳

Awesome update SIS...
i loved it lodsss...
Beautifully written...
loved it a lottt...
Loved d way Mayank cared for DIa...
it was indeed an adorable n very cute part...
hopefully Nupur will get to know abt Mayank's feeling for her...
loved it lodsss...
waiitng for d next part...
love u SIS...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow amazing. plz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mayur and Dia are so cute,i loved Mayur moments
amazing
loved them
plz do continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
@Anila sis,siya
INshallh i will update Intezaar n others FF very soon...

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