-dhundlae aks- Maaneet FF THREAD 9 - Page 76

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Posted: 13 years ago
kyun na kahoon?? she barked.. looking away in disgust
he closed his eyes in misery.. not able to accept her lie... like his heart seemed to not accept her words anymore.. like they could read her eyes
kah lo.. jo kahna hain kah do... jise kahna hain kah do
kah do sab se.. I am a dunked.. cheap.. egoist bast**d.. I am not the way I pretend in college
r u happy now???
is that wat u want to do???
she still didn't respond to his plea.. maan abi bi geet ko nahi samaj paya when u know what u said wrongbecoz of u geet accepting lie
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Posted: 13 years ago
Do i have to say
as usual getting restless for update, obviously 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
di can u explain after all this happen kya maanprachi sach me apne aapko BF GF samaj the hi nahina prachi jisne almost maan ke bina kahe sab ulta pulta samaj ne wale ab engage ment tak bina bataye karli we loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet ab to samaj ja tera koi galthi nahi na hi almost maan ki Geet pulled away from the hug.. Maan ka kya prachi
prachi almost screamed in horror..
Maan!!! main ussen kya kahongi
Geet '
how could u prachi???
prachi was taken a bit back with geets anger
Geet '
u didn't think of him even once
maan still feeling bad ki prachi ne maan ko betrey ki
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Posted: 13 years ago
precap
Maan knowing abt prachi's engagement
di story ko i hope ore complicated nahi banvoge \plz maan apne feelings ko geet ke samne openly rake nahi prachi se baat karne ki koshish
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Posted: 13 years ago
di firse updating yummy plz we cant wait
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Posted: 13 years ago

Dhundlae aks

PART 95

Geet ' lekin
prachi retorted ' tu meri frd hain yah Maan ki
meri jaan galen main aatki huen hain. See this ring.. dammit I am engaged.
They wanted to keep the wedding in this semester holidays. Papa ne some how explained abt my studies & got this breather until I complete my engg.
Prachi was getting cold feet to tell Maan abt her engagement. She dragged Geet with her to meet Maan. It was so many day since Maan had actually seen her. He could feel his heart beat rising when he saw prachi & Geet walking in through the entrance of the coffee shop towards him. His eyes couldn't see anything but her. Only her... like nothing else existed, he couldn't believe she was there .. she was coming towards him... & like she could feel the intense glare of him.. without even looking at him.
She had her head glued to the floor... hand twisting & turning, restless... lashes fluttering, making his heart flutter harder & faster.. restless still a slight pinch why she is so tensed. Is she still angry at him??? will she talk to him atleast today?? will those eyes graze him with a glance. He didn't even realize when prachi broke the news to her. He was lost in Geet.
Prachi couldn't dare to look at him either... she looked down & softly admitted
Geet felt like a needle pierced when she said those words. Maans silence only killed her further.
Prachi called for him ..maan
all he could say was umm.. still crying to those eyes to look at him once. Just once..
prachi ' I am sorry all that happened suddenly
Maan very coldly said ' congrats
Geet closed her eyes tightly. '
prachi felt horrible & left from there at once.
He stood there vulnerable to her just one word. She couldn't take his pain.. she just hugged him dearly.. I am sorry.. I wish I could help u
his heart was beating all of sudden like.. it just got its life back.
It took him a while before he could hold her back. His reluctance was totally misread by her. Oh how could she not fall for him all over again. Then all of a sudden .. his dream.. his disbelieve.. she was there right infront of her.. taking him in her arms..he thought.. she wouldn't ever come... . he hugged her tightly, he could feel his heard turn to tinier than dust... don't u ever do this to me again.. he whimpered in her ears painfully, touching her feeling her sealing her skin to skin.. tip to toe.
They couldn't have hugged endlessly like that in a cafe.. for ever. He gave one of those complaining grin.. I told u . tumhri frd hi mujhe hurt karegi
she tried to smile at his joke.. but it was painful for her. His hurt, is he ok.. with all this.. she didn't know.
We can still try speaking to prachi's mama, wo itni bhi strict nahi hain
Maan tucked her closer in the sofa.. kis ke liya
she looked at him totally puzzled. He seemed so lost in her, he looked so contented just having her fingers entangled with hers, feeling them.. softly caressing it, playing with it.. drawing patterns on the back of her hand. Did she even want to push him away.. but then how can she be so selfish.
Her heart felt a lump when she managed to mumble we can try to explain anuty u know each other for 2yrs. He looked at her expressions, he could clearly see her restlessness.. the way she was looking down & trying hard to say something sh edoesn't want to... exactly the way when he sees her with karan. He grinned.. she gave him a confused look.
he bit the back of her hand..
she flinched a bit.. it was more of anger she was talking abt him & prachi.. but then he didn't care wat she spoke & meant.. he was in a different world having her just by him.. & the cherry on top.. was her tinge of J... abt her own frd... something to treassure for. How could he miss that. He didn't take anything of her concern abt him & prachi seriously. He assumed it to be her mumbling like he does abt her & karan, baseless & meaningless.
Aap teehk ho na
he kissed her hand .. umm
she sighed & went back to her flat.
She caught up with armaan. She just couldn't get over.. how can Maan be so cool abt all this, or is he hiding something. She bugged armaan the whole evening.. how can that even be possible. I could see he was hurt.. he was worried.. but then.. he didn't say anything. Armaan never understood that character Maan... & the point why Geet was so concerned abt him.

Meanwhile Dev & Nt were getting really close. Their naughtiness began to be very evident in office. Geet warned Nt couple of times.. especially when they were so openly meeting up for lunch & followed up ahem ahem.. Dev even went behind Geet asking for her flat keys... she giggled & supported them sweetly.

Geet couldn't refuse meeting Maan now. Her heart cried for that cuty baby of hers, all he asked for was to drop her to office after the college. He didn't ask anything more... he seemed so contented just with that.. guess he really feared losing her after that weeks separation. He didn't dare to touch her.. or get carried away. Though..his mind did.. his soul seek tranquillity only in her essence.

precap
their closeness was evident
-PREV PART 94 NEXT PART 96-
thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
r
hehehe me 1st
but not in a mood to read n comment
kal kar doongi
pakka
shollydi
abhi sumthing else occupying my mind!!!!😭
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ok ok i know i was to read tmorw morning
but i couldn't stop myself..
this was so refreshing
a much needed distraction for me though!!!!😊
thnxx a lottt di🤗

oh boy
geet is again into misreading him..
lagta hain misread karte karte poori zindagi
hi chali jayegi dono ki
lol😆

n geet..pagal..thoda dekh yaar
he is so in luv with u..
but my innocnet geet feels
he is hurt!!
baba re...me hitting my head on the table now!!!!!🤢

n prachi...umm now confused abt her behaviour!!!!
continue soon plzzz


Edited by kawaii_geet - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
such a cute update so far...👏
maan being such a cutiepie...not even touching her, just bcoz he feared losing her again😳
uff...u made me so greedy...want more...specially after seeing the precap...closeness was evident??kiski maaneet or devtara????
Edited by Manpreetmann - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome twist... was wishing for this for long...

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