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Posted: 13 years ago
dadi is too much...she does not want any1 to take care of her...

continue soon..

thnx for PM...
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...

poor geet maan angry whn no fault of hers...
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dadi pe first tim gussa a rha h grrr

meri geet ko dat pdwa di

waiitng 4 next
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Posted: 13 years ago

haaila ye daadi toh bilkul hi mental kism ki insaan hai yaar

faltu me bechari geet ko phansa diya

she needs a piece of mind

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Posted: 13 years ago
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So sorry Now updatng...
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My Lover My Enemy




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Part-9

Maan grabbed her from her arms and dragged out side the room when Dadi smirked and left the bed and move towards the window.

She saw them both of were standing there arguing, then she saw geet turned and moved towards her room with teary eyes, She smilled wickedly, seems maan fired her, seems she left her, left her forever ever...

Dadi was on cloud nine, she was taking a toll of the house, yelling on all the servents, when she was passing through geets room she heard she was crying...

Well bauhath din tak mujh par apna hokum chalaya geet, zara tumhaarey aansuon ki nami se apne jaltey dil ko thanda toh karlooo, she thought wickedly...

Geet jab itni hi takleef hai toh beta chhod do, she was crying, resting her head on her mothers lap, when her mother said, hum kucch naa kucch kar lenghey beta, zindaghi me pehley hi itney dukh dekhey hai ab tum ko aise takleef me nahi dekh sakti meri bacchi, she too sobbed, her daughter, liitle angle of her life, for whom she left her husband, her love, her life, she accepted to be servant in her own maternal home, she left her name, then still the fate gain played a dirty game with her, and she distanced with her own daughter, she was all trying her level best to make her brother, sister in laws, their child satisfied with her work that she almost forget that one more person was lingering, craving, dying for her love, her own daughter was left alone, in the race of life for whom she left everything, she was left alone by her...

But whatever she did in past, that was mistake, she realized it, now the sole aim of her life was to be, to beside her daughter, and she was playing a role of guardian, a mother, a care taker very well...

She saw her geet smiled with her very first time, she saw her daughter sharing her thoughts with her like a friend very first time so how could, how could she left her alone to face this cruel monsters again all alone

She caressing her hairs, giving her a piece of mind about that older lady and geet smiled in tears...

She sat straight again and smiled with moist eyes...

Maa aap bhi naa I cant leave her...

Dadi was all shocked again...

Huhhh she is behind my money, she wanted me to give her money, greedy nasty middle class people...

Maa you know I always felt, she is like mY own dadi, if she would still alive in this world, she would be like her only...

Bit khadoos with others and bit caring with her love ones...

Mujhe Maan ki baton ka bhi bura nahi lagha maa...

Agar unn ki jagah me bhi hoti then also I would reacted in the same way...

Maa mujhe aisa laghta hai iss ghar me jaise it is mine...

I was forbidden first, but now this house, this breeze accepted me as im theirs, then how could I leave her...

You know what I realized, daadi is not what she pretend, she is not what she show that she is...

From inside she is really kindhearted...

You know what Maan's father the way he love me...

The way he care for me as I am his own daughter, it expressed how much this house was longing for a care taker...

I know dadi is scared, she don't want to trust me but I will let her make trust on my self, I will win her heart one day definitely...

She said in firmed tone with determined expression, Least she know she already won her heart, dadi was standing there outside the door with tears in her eyes and guilt in her heart,

How sweet she is...

How innocent she is...

She all the way knew how I was trying to get her off, how much I was hating her all the way...

But she still... still want to win my heart, Dear daughter you already won it...

Maan left that day with an irritation, he knew he should not shout on her like that, her sad face was flashing in front of his eyes all the way of journey, yes in journey, he left again, ran away from the problem, from the fear, How could he,

But yeah still how could he, he was imagining someone in her, her eyes were same like hers, it haunted him badly...

He wanted to get away from the vicinity of that eyes, he just hated the person to the core, he was on the way to shimla when he received the call about dadi being hospitalized again...

He just turned the car and drove towards the Mumbai madly...

He insanely rushed inside the hospital as he soon as he saw Doctor he grabbed her collar hows my Dadi, hows Savitri khurana Doctor...

He was shivering in fear and shaking the doctor terribly, seems like he was not in his self, well how could he, how could he be calmed when his dadi's life was at stake...

His hold loosened when he heared, she is Fine Maan...

And here his mind sparked with the thoughts of her...

Yes she was there...

She was there that time inside the house all the while na than how could she in on bed...

He looked at her his piercing gaze was sending shivers through her spine...

She was literally feeling that earth take her inside her...she was horrified, somewhere sacred of maan's anger and worried for Dadi too.

When maan grabbed her arm and dragged her outside the Passage...

I told you, I told u geet I wnt spare you till death if anything happen to my dadi...

Now you have to pay it, pay it back, what have you done to her...

He was shaking her in his tight hold, a tear welled down from her eyes and Maan ruthlessly wiped it with his rough touch, don't you dare to distract me with your crocodile tears, I know how to manage a greedy gal like you,

You are also behind my money like she was, you are the same like her, selfish, bitch...

Geet looked at him with shocked expression the word was not all digested by her, she raised her hand on him, she slapped really hard that her hand was printed on his cheek, he was too shocked to react,

When Doctor came running who is Geet...

Geet came ahead hurriedly, Me ji doctor , Doctor I am Geet,

Savitri khurana calling your name, she wants to meet you now...

She rushed towards the ICU, she saw her lying , her eyes were closed, she came and stand there silently, she took her hand in her hand and kissed the palm,

Aap ne toh dara diya dadi, a tear fall on her palm, when Dadi opened her eyes and smiled weekly,

Geet bte kyaa aap humein Maaf kar paayeinghein, Hum ne aap...

Shhh Dadi, aap aaram kijiyeh aur aap apni beti se maafi maangh kar ussko sharminda karenghi, aise toh me kabhi apne aap se nazrein nahi milaa paoounghi

They both smiled and geet rested her head on her chest and hugged her dadi brushed her hand and kissed her, and Geet smiled,

She finally achieved what she wanted to be.. she won this battle of life too

Well to won someone's heart is not less than a battle, not less than a war.

Maan was standing motionless outside the room, watching the heavenly scene,

His dadi, who is not less than a mother for him, was finally coming back to the life, after that dreadful incident she didn't wanted to trust on even the servants, she finally loving the others too, she was really became possessive for Maan, so that her health was totally getting drowned because of these worries...

His thoughts disturbed with the call, he saw It was Yudi on the another line...

Haa yudi bol,

He was shocked, and his face was all pale , his facial expression said it all to the person standing infront of him,

Geet was standing with the worry all over written on her face, she rushed towards him.

What happened...

Yudi...


Precape: Marriage and Real Identity of Geet...

Previous: part-8
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Edited by Angelic_analyst - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
yapeee
me
1st
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wao so emotional part loved it so much...
Geet won kharoos dadis heart...Sorry bt now dadi is not kharus.😛😛😛
Superb update
Love it Eza Mam
Thank for sweet crying😭😭 update
Edited by Mayamaan - 13 years ago

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