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Posted: 13 years ago
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VERY LOVELY DEAR...AND THANKS FOR THE PM😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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beautifully writte.. gud job !!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

Yeah trust the "Maha fools" of RM to give Lavanya ALL the credit! Anjali is an idiot man! (does it LOOK like he is in love with Lavanya?) the way he acts with her?

But liked your OS!


yepp!! everyone in RM are fools😡 but khushi will get her reward for her hardwork in my OS atleast hehhe
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

WOW!! i bet something like thats gnna happen in the show too!! but that dumb Anjali will think its all because of Lavanya!


heheheh yess!! Anjali dumb as always😆 but i won't disappoint u
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey this part is from La's pov!! don't run away😆 give it a try and i'm almost sure u won't regret reading it
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Part 2:


Lavanya's pov:

I couldn't believe what ASR judt said right now!! he was actually talking about love!

But he never ever told me that he loved me. I expressed my love so many times for him and he never reacted. he just hugged me back sometimes but still his hands would barely touch mine.

I think he never loved me. But now all these things he was saying right now as if he exactly understood love for a person.

"Chote...?? all these words... came out from your mouth?? Oh my god I can't believe it!! I never knew that you had so much feelings inside you. All this is just because of you Lavanya hahah"



What because of me?? could it be that he strted loving me??! i looked at him and he looked shocked when di mentioned about his changed behaviour because of me. He was not even looking at me!!

His eyes were boring into Khushi's...

It seemed as if the roof over me was crashing down on me.

The way he looked at her... there was love written all over his face but not for me.

could it be?? could it be that he loved..?? my breath stopped and i gulped.

So... I was actually in the way of Khushi and Arnav. I had to step back!!

But before that i have to sure that both of them really love each other. I have to keep track on them and observe how they behave with each other.

and i had a plan in my mind...

my thoughts were interrupted by Mami

"Arnav bitwa?? is it really you speaking?? Uff all this is because of you miss tip-tap" she said looking at me.

I gave a slight fake smile.

I looked at Khushi and Arnav. Their eyes were locked and he gave her an apologetic look and her eyes were wet u could see that clearly.

I should've realized long ago!! I was such a fool. Even at the diwali day when Arnav announced our marriage Khushi was crying and i thought she was crying of happiness!! but no she was hurt and was in pain!

Now i have to take it in my hands and test both of them.

"Arnav bitwa, how can i refuse now of payal and akash's marriage after u have given me such a huge speech of love" she said with a slight smile

Arnav came back to his senses and realized what mami just said.

Everyone was so happy afterwards and they even called the Guptas and told them that they were coming tomorrow evening.


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Arnav was in his room, nani anjalidi and khushi in the living room making preparations for the engagement and tomorrow's visit to the gupta household.

I had a plan in my mind and went to ASRs room with a glass of juice and hid a blade in my hand.

I entered his room, he was busily looking at his laptop. I placed the juice beside him but he didn't even look at me.

So i went to the drawer and acted as if i was searching for something but i cut my finger with the blade purposefully and shrieked!

"Ouch!! ASR since when do u have blades in your drawer. Ohh it's hurting so much please help me" he looked at me suddenly


"Lavanya don't fuss around. You are not a 5 yrs old kid, u can take care of urself"

Sooo. that was it he didn't care about me at all. I didn't say a word and left the room.

So he didn't react at my wound. Let's see how he will react when Khushi is hurt.

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I waited for the right moment when ASR would come down.

Afterall long 2 hours he came down and sat with us.

Ok BINGO i thought!!!

I went to the kitchen picked up some veggies and a knife with a tray. I started cutting them and after i was finished with two i called Khushi.

"What's it Lavanyaji"

" Khushi i'm having difficulties cutting these. Can u help me"

"ofcourse, give me the tray"

i lifted the tray and the knife and i purposefully cut her flesh on her hand. ' i'm sorry Chamkili' I thought. but it's just for ur own good!!

she shouted and within seconds ASR was standing in the kitchen examining her hand.

He looked at me with full of hatred.

"LAVANYA!! what have you done?? Are you out of your mind?? You hurt Khushi!!!??" he shouted

He looked at Khushi with concern and love and put her hand under flowing water under the sink.

"Are you ok Khushi?? OMG so much blood."

Khushi just nodded with her lips pressed tight.

He dragged her into the living room with me standing in the kitchen and tears rolling down.
So here we go!! ASR is madly in love with Khushi.



SOOO How was it guys?? don't forget to comment and like hehe😃
























Edited by loveydovey - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#36
ths is superb..and cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#37
Loved it! Finally La's "Akal Tikane agayi"! Feel sad for poor La, but what is better? Marrying a man who loves someone else? How is THAT going to make her life good?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: MrDarcyfan

Loved it! Finally La's "Akal Tikane agayi"! Feel sad for poor La, but what is better? Marrying a man who loves someone else? How is THAT going to make her life good?


exactly!! i hope she'll realize also soon in the show 😃


and thanks for liking my OS
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏Please Continue.😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I am desperate to see this kind of situation in actual serial...anyways superb update lovey dovey

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