TUM SE MIL K ..MN ss PART12(LAST)PG33 22/01 - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71
I loved the updates Fiza... 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
very nice part...:):)
very cute and sweet
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
cute updt fiza
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74
luvedd it
beautifully written
the way their frndship grow jst wow
they r the cutest
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Posted: 13 years ago
#75
loved it😊
Edited by kirti123 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76
wow another beautiful update
so now mayur r in college-excle college
hehehehehe r a wah college ate he mayank pe line maar rahe hai..lol
thanx GOD maynk didnt gve her any attention...
r wah maynk was getting jeal;ous- baat kya hai bhai..???kuch kuch hota hai kya???
abhi se itna jalan ho rahi hai...oh ho i forgt that it was flashback part.. btw it was very beautiful and cute- specially bike scene. bike scene was fantastic.. loved this update so much. its one of my fav FF's.. very nice update FiZa but tooo short
nest time try to update a longer part

update next part soon
btw im taking a break rm I-F... but i'll come FF section to read mayur ff. kyun ki mayur story pare bina mera dil ki chain nehi milti...:D


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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3 was mind-blowing sis
loved their bonding it was cute
n part4 fantastic update Fiza
both were well written
thank for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY SUJA

Antyyy..she threw herself on her n hugged her tight, to get rid of her fear, and plus it was such a pleasant sight to have her in front…in all these day whneve she came Mumbai, the best time she use to spend with shilpa, she use to miss her so much when she wasn't here..even if mayank is talking to shilpa he cant dare to hang the phone without letting these ladies talk..

SA: heelo mera beta..per yeah kay hal bana rekha hai

Mayank: he laugh out loud, mom tumhari beti ki jan nikal gai bike per

SA: tuny phir taaz cahli..

Mayank: kya baat ker rhai hoo mom…25 ki speed per chalty chalty mein bhoda hogaya…aur yeah asay bhaiti thi jasy ab giri tab giri…lol

Nupur: anty dekho na is ko..mein aj tak khabhi bike per nhi bahiti..she pouted..

SA: is k tu deemgh karab hai…koi baat nhi…per itna nhi dartay..she made her messed hairs…kasi ho tum

Nupur: per ap kasay agai…aur yaha stay ker rahin hain

SA: nhi stay nhi ker rahi hoon…actually tumahry uncle k transfer hogaya hai finally so islayn mein apany betay k pass hi raho gi

Nupur: reallly…ap yahin rahoo gi..hamesha…wao…ab maza aay ga..phir tu mein ap se roz milo gi…

SA: done…

Mayank: han aur her roz tum ko bike per ana paray ga..jsut imagine nupur..bike , taaz hawa, itny sari jerks,,,aur tum ujhala ker bike se neechy….

Nupur: anty is ko dekho naaa…

SA: maaynkkk..maar gay ga…jao tum apny dad se milo woh agay hain

Mayank: ohh reaaly mom..jab hi tum itna muskara rahi hoo…he said teasingly and she raised her hand to beat him

Nupur: acha tu yeah glow islayn ahi anty

SA: sahrma kerlo tum dono…maa ko tease kertay hoon..

MF: koi shak humari wifey per yeah glow kis liya hai

Nupur: she straight her sefl ..namsaty uncle

Mayank: kya kaha nupurrr….namsaty….dad..ur scuh an old follow..

MF: nasmte bte..khush rahin..woh tameez dar hai jo tum nhi hoo

Mayank: oho hello..mein kiay adopted ho aur yeah sagi sab is ki side kyun lay tay hain wasy hey dad…

SA: chlo bacho lunch kerlo

Nupur: nhi anty mein chalti hon….if it would have been SA she would have willingly said yes, but today ti was mayank's father n she was bit scared about it, though she was pretty surprise looking at mayanks relation with his father but yet she was not so comfortable

MF: aray nhi beta…khana kha ker jao…mana aj mein ny bana ya hai..per itna pora nhi hoga..

Nupur: she smiled….ap ny..

Mayank: hmm…humaray ghar mein sab ko khana bana ata hai…

Nupur: wao per mjhy tu nhi ata …

MF: kuch bhi nhi not even tea

Nupur: nhi….han per mjhy Maggie bani ati hai…

Mayank burst on to laugh n shilpa glare at him..

MF: gr8…kcuh tu ata hai na..thik hai kisi din Maggie party kerain gay…dekhain tu us taste maker mein se kiya taste nikalti hoo

Nupur: uncle…she pouted….

Mayank: han aur us din magie walo ko bhi pata chaly k magie bechari ki asay bhi karab hosakti hai

Nupur: dekho Sharma…tum apany ghar mein tu mein tumhari izaat k kiyal ker rahi is k yeah matlab nhi k tum bolay jao

SA: aray beta tum ko full ijazaat hai

Nupur: anty kisi aur din aj jana paray ga…dad ko car chaiy so..

MF: tu mayank chor day ga

Nupur: BIKE PER>…nhi uncle

MF: acha chalo mein chor aao ga…mjhy kam se bhi jana hai…

She had the best of the time at mayank's home. She never felt like an outsider, it seems she was a part of family. Family she wonder wao, this is really a family

Cuming back home she was thinking, that's why mayank nevr need friends, who needs friend, to hung outside when u have such peace at home, parents who r more than frinds for him. Waooo..she wonder how much she feel wanting of all this..small little happiness, small little things , all making a wonderful life.

……….

Shilpa: kya baat hai mayank Sharma, ap aj kal larkiyoon ko bike per ghomatay hain..wah

She was stroking his hairs who was lyin in her lap

Mayank: mrs shamra agar ap bhool gai tu ap k hi huqam tha k mein nupur ko ghar lo….

Shilpa: han woh tu hai..per ..achi larki hai ..hai na

Mayank: han woh tu hai

Shilpa: hain na..khubsoorat bhi hai, smiple bhi…aur tujhy tu perfectly handle kerti hai..mjhy tu buhat pasand hai

Mayank: maa,,yeah nupur nama kyun parh rahi hoo tum….kya bool na cha rhai hoon…..

SA: aray mein ny kya bolo mein tu generally bool raha hoon…

Mayank: mjhy pata hai tumahra genmerallly…..plss…apko pata ahi mjhy yeah sab apasand nhi hai…

Saying so he left the place, n shilpa chuckling enter her room

MF: kya baat hai, apko ko kya hua

SA: ap ko beta bara hogay ahai

MF: han woh tu dekh raha hai..aj us ki pehli bike per pehly din hi larki…mjhy se bhi fast hai yeah tu…wasy larki achi hai..magar

SA: magar..

MF: bhushan group of industry ki iqloti waris hai….she isn't of our class

SA: com on ap bhi kis zamany ki baatein kertay hain

MF: yeah her zamany ki baatein hai….pehly tu us k is mahool mein adjust kerna phir us k parents k mana….impossible hai

SA: us se pehly bhi ek aur cheez hai

MF: kya

SA: ap k beta…woh tu sochy pehly asa…

MF: uffu yeah tu bari muskil baat hai…lol…

SA: han abhi thora kuch bola tu kahta hai, k ap yeah kasi baatein kerti hain

MF: ahaa…donot shilpa abhi kuch maat bolo usko…pori tareeqay se us k hojany do…warna us se bhi bahg jay ga…

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Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#79
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beautiful update dear butit was too short.. actually i m expecting a new part as i've already this part.
but still i loved this update. maynks parents r adorable.. he is really very lucky...aww they were so friendly... they alsoloved nupsalot and nupstoo rspect them... i loved mayurs bonding with maynks parents... hehehehee so Maynks mom-dad already thinking abt nupur. they want her as their daughter-in-law.. wah wah.. ab mayur ki bari.. i hope ki in dono ko apnip yaaar ki ehsas jaldi ho jaye...



Edited by -Faria- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#80
mayank parents is so cool. continue soon

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