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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry Fiza for not being commenting this FF from the last 3 parts were superb loved how Mayu helped Nupur about everything, n how Nups n SA made plan to make Mayank conffess the way Mayank stand in front of ND was admirable awesome Mayank looking foward how it goes Mayank's test, i know he'll win thanks for the pm sis
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Posted: 13 years ago

Lovely update dii..

Yippiii mayank confessed..Finally...Im so happyyy...

Loved it loads...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Love it dii...
Im proud of my mayank...
Loved it...
Cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago

I never knew writing this ss will give me the most awaited news from ahem….though I really want to show it here..but I don't want to be bashed..yupi …sorry no more comments …thnku all for like this ss so far…

It was there studying session …

Nupur: she puted her head on his shoulder..mein thak gai mayank

It wasn't the first time she was so near, but this time it affected him , in sumthing different way…he looked down to her close eyes, n pout…he kept string her not even registering a forward she was complaining about…

Feeling of her so close, looking at her like this was the bestes thing he can ask for…when she felt he isn't answering , neither arguing nor scolding she flet strange

Nupur: mayank tum

She looked up, and his strong gaze made her words choked but his eyes didn't left her, moving his hand towards her he removed her fringes form her face, to wch she gasped n closed her eyes till the moment his fingers were on her skin…

He was enjoying each and every change of expression, she slowly opened her eyes, n found her inching close to her, she felt her thorat dried…

She closed her eyes when she can now feel his breath caressing her skin, he looked at her final time, n moved up to kiss her forehead, she clutch her fist tightly, as he kept lingering there more than enough..moving bit away he went near her ear….

Mayank: ur imaginative wish..will be granted at special day love..he said huskily

And she turn red knowing wht he was saying , she hugged him hiding her face in him, he chukled and pulled her close to him….

They spark aprt as reflex when they found some one on door of the class room…

And to there luck it was prof sneha..

Mayank: ah..mh…good afternoon ma'am..

Prof: wao aj student yaha woh bhi studing ..impreesive guys…

Mayank: thank ma'am…woh library kafi over flow hai islayn…

Prof: hmm..pitty …carry on…

She said n left and they felt there breath cuming back…

Mayank: thank GOD aj parko imagine ny bacha liya..warn tum ny tu marawa diya tha

Nupur: hain,…emin …mein ny kya kiya…

Mayank: who made me pulled to her han…he asked mischievously and received a slap at his shoulder

Mayank: per bach ga…

They looked at each other n borke in laugh…

…………………………………………………………………………………………………….

Things took a turn of 360, and life change completely, Mayank was now engrossed more in his career studying and part time jobs and projects picking up, while nupur has never had any other frind then him was feeling a bit alone….

Mayank: itni khamsoh kyun hoo…he said as they were siting in empty class room, as he was studying and she was turning pages

Nupur: tu kya bolo..tumharay pass time kab hai

Mayank: ma'am agar parho ga nhi na tumharay dad ny waqi is baar kisi aur ko dhond layn gay

Nupru: han tu thik hai parho mein ja rahi ..

Nupurrr…rukho…he moved towards her n griped her wrist…turning her towards him..

Mayank: kya hua…

Nupur: she hugged him n he ws surprised, he embraced her too…I am missing u

Mayank: hmm…I am sorry yaar..tum ko pata hai na ..mjhy waqi time nhi mila raha ..even I am missing u

Nupur: is se achay tu hum confeesion se pehly thay…tum 24/7 meray pass hotay thay

Mayank: nupurr…I am still with u….

Nupur: koi nhi ur not…

Mayank: aray..yeah kay baat hoi

Nupur: acha tu asi baat hai tu I want a day form ur life

Mayank: aray ap k liyan tu pori zindagi hazir hai

Nupur: she borke apart…tu dekh hai..kal tum mjhy date per lay ker jao ga final…

Mayank: nupur kal nhi not possible

Nupur: mjhy kcuh nhi suna I want it …dekha tum mjhy ek din bhi nhi day sakty

Mayank: nupur kal nhi teen din bad

Nupur: chor mjhy bus…

Mayank: nupur pls kal k bad tu jaha kaho gi..mjh yeah kam kahtam kerny do

Nupur: choro mjhy bus…mein tumhari liyan important nhi hai.

Mayank: acha…taking a deep breath ..thik hai…but kal just day time…okay 5 bajay tak…

Nupur: done…she smiled widely n hugged him tight,

………..

This was the date mayank was not ready to go with her, and he has a solid reason. But yet nupur was to angry on him when he said she wasted his time ….her father in the morning said to her on dining table..

ND: aur ..it has been 5 months nupur…tumahry us mayank k koi pata nhi

Nupur: dad…I will appreciate ap us k nam respect se lay

ND: acha us mein koi repect full baat kiya hai

Nupur: aur ap dekh lay na…woh apko sab proof ker k rahy ga..i know him..just wait n watch..wasy bhi mjhy koi farq nhi perta ap ny kya sharat rekhi hai…ap kaun se meri life mein kahin thay jo ap is fasaly mein apan haq jata rahy hain

ND: nupurrr…

Nupur: kyun sach pora laga….MR. BHUSHAN just wait n watch mera mayank kiya kerta hai…

……………

She was upset about this that day and mayank was hell nervous n was in panic as he found cum topic that he has even touched a part of the test, and as usual he was poruing out all that on nupur, and when she said she is leaving he felt sumhtng hurting inside as for whom he is doing all that was saying so….

Mayank: nupur…a voice came from behind breaking her determination of letting him free fro all the worries that she is responsible of…

Nupurr….rukho..guess what kal kya hua

Nupur: mjhy kya pata…aur mjhy jana bhi nhi hai…mein JA rahin hon

Mayank: nupurr…..tum abhi tak naraz ho…pls aj nhi na aj meray pass solid kahbar hai BY GOD…he said mimincing her clapsing his hands

Nupur: mein ny kaha na mjhy nhi suna na…aur han tum fikar maat kero aj mein dad se baat kerlo gi ..u will free from all the worried….

Mayank: kya…kya kaha tum ny han…aur dad se kya baat kerlo gi han…tumhara deemgh mein chal kiya raha hai….deemgh thik hai tumhara….he said in full anger

Nupur: han mera tu deemgh karab hi hota hai…mein khabi koi sahi baat kerti hoon…but ab I'll let u free..

This was alimit to his anger…he took hold on her hand dragged her towards a room, an empty room who has witness there all special moments, there fights , there love, there romance, and there fears..

Nupur: mayank chor mjhy..mjhy jan hai

Mayank; TUM..KAHIN….NHI…JA..RAHIN…samjhi…

He was holding her form shoulder n she was her back was against the wall of that room

Mayank: kis ko chor ny k baray mein soch rahi hoo…itni jadli bore honagi mjhy se…

Nupur: mein koi bore wore nhi hoi hoon samjhy tum…tum ko hi waste of time lagta hai meray sath time spend kerna

Mayank: aur jasay tumhain tu pata hi nhi k mein yeah sab kyun ker raha hoo…

Nupur: han tu islayn I am seting u free…

Mayank: but I donot want to be free..than….nupurr….acha ..look at me… tumharay sath time spend ker..kya I donot miss that..but we have to be strong na..mein kal tumahray sath time spend kerny ko waste nhi kaha raha tha….but woh wqat galat tha…tum janti hoo jab mera deemgh per kuch hota ha tu asay hi bolta hoon

Nupur: han per pehly tu meray sath share kertay thay k kya hai…aura b bataty bhi nhi hoo..she pouted n he chukled..

Mayank: ohoo….ek tu mein surprise dayna chata tha…aur us se zayda mein sure nhi tha k yeah ho jay ga k nhi….

Nupur: kya…

He grinned..

Mayank: choro..ab kya faida..tum uncle se baat kerlo..mein bhi arma kerta hoon ab..itna bhag ny dorny ki kiya zaroorat hai hai na….mein koi aur dhood llayta hoon..aur tum koi aur…wasy sheena kasi rrahy gi..ya ria…woh tu colloge k first day se try ker rahi

She grap his collar..n pulled him close

Nupur: MR mayank Sharam…Kisi aur k baray mein galti se bhi soch na tu tumharay tu mein hasher kero gi na tumhari 7 postay yaad rekhyain ki samjhy tum….sheena aur ria kit u na….jhotay chotay tukaray kerkay na tumhary hi galay mein dal ker..haji ali per bhita doo gi ..samjhy tum…

He burts into laugh

Mayank: nupur yeah example na tum mjhy hi day sakti thi…..aur is mein un dono k kya kasur …galti tu meri hai,..tu mjhy saza kyun nhi di …hm…..

Nupur: mjhy tum se baat hi nhi kerni hato….

She moved away n he pulled her back, back hugging her…

Mayank: mein tu tum ko dinner kerny ki soch raha tha..yeah lo…forwarding a letter in fornt of her…

Nupur: yeah kiya hai…

Mayank: job letter

She turn around …with an ear to ear smile

kAY..really….she was asking him all that n excitedly opned it..

mayank: yup..i got the job,….han salary buhat achi nhi hai…tumhain daal roti mein hi guzara kerna paray ga

she was done with looking at the letter….n was thankful to God

nupur: nhi parmashver ji ap k sath tu mein pyar se hi guzara kerlo gi..na khelain tub hi rah lo gi…

mayank: he took her dupata on cover her head…hay bharatiya nari…

the both laughed n hugged each other…

nupur: god I cant belive it….per ab tu tum aur busy hojao gay…

mayank: hmm….kafi zayda..colloge k bad direct office aur kyun k 9 hrs poray kerny hain tu raat tu hoi jay gi…

nupur: hmmm

mayank: hey not like that..samjhi…nupur I need to u to be with me plsss…shayad mera deemgh karab honay lagy , mein complaining hojao ..but pls stay with me ..

nupur: I am always with u….per mayank agar humari call agai tu..abroad se…

mayank: tu hum chalein ga na…dekho abhi 5 months hai humari graduation complete hony mein…3 months tu meri job per hoi jay gay na….

nupur: oh gr88888….mayank mein sach mein buht khus hoon….

Mayank: mein bhi…chalo ghar chalo….maa ny bolaya hai tum ko

Nupur: chalo…aj tu hum mil ker celebrate kerain gay….

Mayank: done…

….

Life was at there fullest , though they found a very little time together, all that was in college time, as he reached home it was too late so mostly he is made eaten sumthing and talking to her he mostly of the time sleeps…when form other side there is no response she get to know he has fall asleep..

Sumwhere she felt its all because of her..yet she is waiting for the day one mayank will tell her father he did it all before one year..this was making her feel proud to much…she want to prove her father worng…

Nupur: dad ki shakl dekhy wali hogi..ajb un ko koi haray ga….

…………

He was lying on his bed, with his cell on his ear, and listening her blutten of whole day, he was smiling and closed eyes was enjoying it..

Nupur: mayank was tumhari job k ek faida hua

Mayank: kya

Nupur: tum khamoshi se mrei baatein sun tay hoo..na mjhy daatay hoo, na meri baatei pakraty hoo

Mayank: buhta hi bori baat hai tum mjhy bechary k mazak urati hoo…

Nupur: wasy I miss it…

Mayank: mjhy se pocho I terribly miss u…sorry yaar…mein kal bhi so gaya tha na….

MD: mayank….a knock on door he locked back

Aray yeah kiya bhi…ankhein band , kaan per phone..ohoo…meri bechari bahu din bahr tumhara intezar keray aur tum sotay hoay us se baat kertay hoo

Nupur was blushing n smiling at the other end

Mayank: sun lo yaha bhi daat pita wati hoo….

MD: nupur..beta… break lay aj….aj zara humain is ki class layni hai..

Nupur: okay bye…

Maynak: kiya hua dad….

MD: ap yeah kiya ker rahy hain…kab tak chaly ga asay….han

Mayank: matlab…..

……..

At colloge….

Nupur: mayank…hath choro plsss..

Mayank: no..sorry…..

They were siting in class, and that so on front seat like always..he was caressing her left hand which was in his left hand..n she was feeling her sensing off…n he was enjoying this moment,

Nupur: mayank plsss…mjhy se likha nhi jaraha

Mayank: tu maat likho….ek tu sirf yeahi time milta hai uper se tumhara choro choro…

Nupur: notes kaha se aay gay…

Mayank: fail hojay gay I donot care

Nupur: mayank..she hited on her palm tighly that made a sound of claps….

Prof: yeah liya ho raha hai

Mayank: sir woh nupur machar mar rahin thi…he said suppressing his smile…n she passed a dead galre to him…

Prof: ms bhuhsan…yeah class hai…pay attention…

Nupur: mayank tumhair tu na…

Mayank: kyun mein ny kiya kya…

Wasy tumhara yeah hath kahli kyun hai….he took her hand again in his hold

Nupur: yaar pls class k bad….

Mayank: tum janti ho I hate siting in fornt …today…aram se last seat per hotay….prof ko kuch pata nhi chlata…

Nupur: mayank….

Mayank: acha na ….tumhara yeah hath itna kahli khali kyun lag raha hai

Nupur: lo yeah tu hamesha asa hi hai..left hand mein ring nhi pehnaty

Mayank: kyn….

Nupur: mayank kya tumhain kuch bhi nhi pata had hai

Mayank: hain …aur mjhy kya kya nhi pata…explain…detail mein

She hited on his leg….

Nupur: left hand mein engagement ring pehnty hai idiot….

Mayank: nupur…stupid…woh sirf ring finger mein pehnty hain ….bewaquff…

Nupur: hath choro warna yeah jo pencil hai na yeah tumharay hath k ar paar hogi….

Mayank: aur meiay ocuh se jab prof sawal keray ga tu mein ny tu sach sach bolna hai..

She looked with pleading eyes..he smiled and stop caressing it just kept holding them..but than in between he strt again…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
😔😒😔 Dis is for wht u stated... :'( :'(

ok!!! now abt d update...
i loved it lodsss...
MayUr r sooo cute here...
waise i wud be waiting for d imagination wala wish... ;)
awww...
so iss liye Nupur itna gussa thi...
i sooo loved dis possessive Mayank alwaysss...
awww...
Shilpa aunty is sooo cute...
i sooo wish real life mein bhi sabki saas asi hi hoti...*sigh*
Beautifully written as usual...
loved it lodsss...
waiting eagerly for d next part...
love u API...🤗🤗🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
its very cute
but y mayank dad talked like dat?
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one...
waiting for the next

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Posted: 13 years ago
Aww cute update..
Hayee first part ws so cute and romantic...Aisa chota mota romance har update mein kyun nahi hota...Loved that bit...
Mayank is so concern towards nupur...love this two...
Loved this update loads.
Cont jaldi...
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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely updt fiza
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
rese
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awww cute update...
gosh both r facing tough time m sure mayank will defietely prove himself...
loved it yr...
and by the way which news u r talking abt... 😕?
Edited by drmaha - 13 years ago

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