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Posted: 13 years ago
nice upd8.
waiting 4 maan's reaction.
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awesome update dear..
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PART 8

maan frozed in his place like statue

the party came to conclusion...all student s are trying to move...geet finished her speech and went to pinky.

pinky:geet u rocked dear...

geet:thanks pinky...

pinky:geet we r getting late...shall we move

geet and pinky start to move...suddenly

geet:oh my god...pinky i forget my bag in class room...pinky u wait here...i'llgo and get it

pinky:geet, do u want me 2 accompany u ...

geet:no pinky...u wait here

geet went to her class.on the other side it took few mis for maan to come 2 reality...he saw geet running towards her classroom...without waiting a second...maan followed her...geet did not see him...she rushed into her class and search her bag...suddenly she hears a foot step noise...geet raise her eyes...she was shock...maan entered the class and locked the door.. he walked towards her

geet:(st)hey baba jee whether my dream came true or i m in dream...

she pinch herself...oh my god its true

geet:(action)stop...wht r u dng?


this make maan angry...he tighten his fists...maan continuously walked towards her...

maan:(angrily)STOP ur drama geet? ...u well no na...i dnt like any lie..but u lied to me...geet u did a biggest mistake...u messed with MAAN SINGH KHURANA...u tested my patience...u must have 2 pay heavily for ur stupid lie...geet y u lied to me...bolo

geet shivering badly in fear.she dnt know...what to say...she dnt know...how to control his anger..

maan tightly held both her arms not realizing his nail was piercing through her soft skin. he bursted out...


maan:(he shookn her)bolo geet y u lied to me...i blindly trusted u ,but u made fool of msk..

he tighten his grip on her arm...the anger in his voice scared her to death

geet:(start crying)so...sor...sorry maan

maan look into her eyes

maan:(angrily)stop ur crocodile tear... she hears his words and start 2 cry badly


maan:(angrily)i said stop dis non sense

geet was shivering in fear...she try to control her tears...but she can't...
maan can't able to stand before her tears...maan loosened his grip

maan:geet plz i can tolerate ur lie...but i cnt able to stand before ur tears...its killing me dear..

maan 's each and every lovely word killed geet for lying 2 him.

geet:maan actually that day..


geet tried to explain...but maan stopped her

maan:i dnt need any explanation.

geet lower her head in guilty

maan:u tested my patience...u r going to pay for that...dnt afraid geet...not now... i m not like others..baby...i m totally different from other boys...what is written in my rule book is correct for me...i dnt follow or obey others...what come to my mind is correct for myself...i do that only..do u understand what i say..

geet node her head and slowly raise her head and looked up at him with teary eyes...it made him loosened his grip instantly..her looked vanished his temper...in fact he felt likesome one has ripped his heart out and sliced his heart into million pieces...he felt her pain...her tears killed him...he left her arm

he gently held her face with his palms..he removed her tears ... maan looked deep into her eyes



maan:I LOVE YOU geet...i cnt think of my life without you...geet whenever i see you i forget myself...my heart goes out of my control...i dnt know why it happens to me...geet ur absence make me crave for you...geet your presence makes lost in you...i dnt know why its happening to me...

He rests his forehead against her...maan feeling her breath ...the fresh rose aroma in her breath was driving him crazy...her pinky luscious parted lips were making him insane.at that moment .all he wished from his heart was to hold her in his arm likes dis forever...He wants To hold her ...He wants to feel her ...He wants to look at her beautiful face for rest of his life...those innocent eyes keep on attracting him towards her...

he cares her soft pinky cheeks and feels her..her nervousness start to increase as she felt his thumbs caressing her cheeks..it worsen her condition. more .geet felt his face coming closer to her..she felt his nose touching her...


closed her eyes tightly in fear...nly half inch away from his lips..her heart beat raise..she felt her knee went week as soon as his lips meet her lips...he kissed her... This s the first kiss for both...he enjoyed the kiss but she did not respond to him...she closed her eyes tightly.she keep on hitting him with his small fist on his chest but maan is not in the mood to let her go any where...she felt she would collapse any moment...geet did not want to continue dis futher.using all her energy...she pushed him away..by an unexpected push maan moved a little away.

Geet covered her mouth with her small palm and started crying


maan:y r u crying?

Geet:y u kissed me? how can u do this to me?

Maan:i luv u so i kissed u

geet:but i dnt love u

maan was super duper angry now

maan:i dnt ask u whether u luv me or not.there s no other option for u .u should luv me.

on the other side pinky waited for geet.adi and vicky noticed pinky and
went to her

adi:wht r u dng here?where s geet?

Pinky:geet forget her bag in class.so she went to get it .the

trio start chat about some interesting topic they forget about the time

IN THE CLASS ROOM:

geet tried to escape from maan.maan hold her hand and pulled her towards
him


.by the sudden pull geet head clashed on his chest.

her long hair has hidden her face.maan gently removed her hair and tugged it behind her ears.


maan held her waist with another hand...

geet try to move her waist from maans grip but she cnt

maan:geet dnt try to run away from me.dis will only reduce the space between us.honey i like our closeness but u feel uncomforatable.so dnt try that

geet:maan plz its getting late plz maan

maan realized its really getting late.he released her waist

maan:geet go and take u bag

geet took her bag and move towards door

maan:where r u gng?

Dis question made geet confuse.maan walk towards her.he slide his hand on her waist and slightly pulled towards him

maan:now its perfect.cme lets go

maan unlock the door and went toward the place where pinky is waiting for geet

geet tried to free herself from his grip

geet:plz maan leave me all r watching us

maan:all girls die to touch me but u trying to escape from me.

geet:i m not like other girls.

pinky,adi and vicky watched geet with maan their eyes widen in shock


and maan came to them and maan removed his hand from geet waist

maan:[wave his hand in air]bye honey

geet:[st]y he is behaving like dis in public

maan:[angrily]open ur mouth and say bye

geet:[nervously]by...bye

maan:thats good dear

He kissed her cheek and walk some distance and he turn towards them

maan:geet dnt forget till now u dnt pay for ur lie
and he went away

adi,pinky,geet and vicky mouth widen in shock

adi:geet wht s dis?

Geet:[start crying]he found the truth

vicky:wht he said?did he hit u?

Geet:no he proposed me and ...and..he kissed me
now she cry badly

adi and vicky at one side they were happy and another side they feel bad for geet

adi:geet dnt cry..he luv u na..so he wont try to hurt u

geet:i m affraid of his luv.it hurts me.he ordered me to luv him.if my papa comes to know dis.he'll surely not allow me to college..plz tel maan to stop luv ngme..plz.plz help me bhai

they r n dilemma.maan luv her madly another side geet afraid o fhim.adi tried to lighten the situation

adi:geet its getting late.we'll talk later .i'll tell him to stop luvng you.k na.

He removed her tears

adi:good girl.give me a big smile

geet smile sadly and they start to move

IN PINKY HOME AT 10.30 PM:

geet was still crying..pinky try to console her.but she cnt


pinky:plz geet dnt cry.u r gng to get sick.plz dear stop crying.

She make her to lay in bed and caressed her hair and made her sleep

NEXT DAY MORNING:

pinky wake up geet.

geet gets up with heavy head.

Pinky:geet we r getting late..go and get ready dear

geet:pinky i m not feeling well

pinky cme and touches her forehead

pinky:oh my god.geet u hv fever..u take rest dear.u dnt want to cme 2 clge today

geet nodes her head and again lyed down on bed

IN THE COLLEGE CAMPUS AT 8.15 AM:

maan is waiting for geet in his usual place.adi and vicky was restless and
worried for geet.sameera was in 9th cloud

sameera:[st]geet ur gng to die..

Maan watched pinky alone entering the campus..maan got angry.pinky
walked straight towards the class.maan gets up from the place

maan:pinky..pinky cme here

pinky was scared.she walks slowly towards maan.

Sameera:[st]shut.geet u escaped 2day..but i'll watch hw long u r gng to
escape.[sameera dnt knw anything about yesterdays event]

maan:[angrily]where s geet?


Pinky:woh...woh...she dnt cme to college today

maan:[roared]what the hell she is dng in home?

Pinky:she had fever

maan:[angrily]again another lie.u all r thinking that i m mad to believe
all ur stupid lie..

Pinky interrupt

pinky:really she is having fever

maan:[sarcastically]oh i c..give her address

pinky:she stays with me

maan:k give ur address

pinky:papa and mom r there in home

maan:i dnt ask you whether ur papa and mom in home or not.i asked ur address

pinky:woh...woh

sameera in 9th cloud.

sameera:(st)geet ur gng to die...ur chapter is gng to b closed...

sameera came and pulled pinkys ID card and tells her address to maan


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Edited by hepzi - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Loved it Jaanu

best thing ever
Maan confessed
but what's with Geet yaar!
Challo Maan, go home and drag her out of the house 😆 Loved it
youpie me first to say AWESOME...hepzi...love love love it! 😆😳
Edited by music_girl - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWWW i m in love with this ff yaar and your maan well hayeee
hey plzz plz continue soon super sooon plzzz😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
ossum dear
so maan knew the truth loved it
even thougjt he said he loves he
lovely dear
hope adi and vicky sjould say hw uch sje yried to say him
and wht he does now
ossum dear
wIting for yje nexy update dear
pls updatd soon feR
cant wait more dear
pls update soon dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update!!!! luvd it... poor geet she is hvng fever...
plzz continue soon...

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