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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Snehagujral


iska 40 part update huya hai kya koi bta do


dear 44 parts ho gaye hai...!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: OsheenDGr8


dear 44 parts ho gaye hai...!!
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when will be the next update dear ?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

<div></div> when will be the next update dear ?


Tomorrow for sure😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
just went through this ff
its amazing & so refreshing
cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: OsheenDGr8


Tomorrow for sure😊

waiting eagerly dear 😊when will u update it now or evening dear ?😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Waiting for next part dear.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

<div></div> waiting eagerly dear😊when will u update it now or evening dear ?😊


i thnk u wil update evenin hopefully.
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Posted: 13 years ago

MILAN- The Final Destination
PART- 45

Thnx guys for lovely comments n likes... Love u❤️

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Special thnx for awesome comments
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haha I was nt taking chun chun k badla bt nxt time movie ka end bata dio lol😃
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Alice Academy was my fav n I just loved Netsume's character
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Thnx dear😊
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Kahan ho yaar??

Don't beat me guys... I am really sorry for late update😳



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Maan- Ae Prem bata mai kaisa lag raha hu?
Maan asked, checking himself in mirror for the umpteenth time.

Prem rolled his eyes.
Prem- Haan looking good. Waise tum jaa kahan rahe ho?
Maan blushed- Wo geet ne mujhe dinner pe bulaya hai.
Prem- Oooh... Toh yeh baat hai. Mai bhi chalta hu na phir, mujhe sirf apne liye kahan banana padega.
He teased Maan.
Maan retorted- Nai tu kya karega jaa kar. Pata nai khana kaisa hoga... Why take risk??
He tried to reason.

Prem- Dost dost na raha...
He sang dramatically wiping the invisible tears.
Prem- Thik hai jaa tu bhi kya yaad karega.
When no response came, he looked for Maan but he was already gone.


Maan stood outside her main door n rang the door bell like a gentleman waiting for his host to welcome him. Geet opened the door n 'thud'. Maan was totally flat while his heart did a small flip-flop with joy. He was completely mesmerized by her. She for the first time was dressed in salwar suit. The purple color of suit complimented her skin tone perfectly.

Wind blew n her flakes moved on her face just like it happen in movies, she gently removed the locks. Ufff... She looked so serene n offcourse damn sexy.

Wow...
Escaped from his mouth n Geet blushed crimson red.
Tum aa gaye...
She asked with a faint smile. Maan did'nt replyed anythhing n just gaped at her like an idiot. But who cares??

Geet was feeling really shy she had wore salwar suit because she had some idea that Maan liked traditional dresses.
Aise mat dekho mujhe sharam aati hai
Maan sighed- Hayee... Toh kaise dekhu...?
He said leaning on the side wall. Geet straightened- Andar aana hai ya nai?

They went inside n Geet made him sit in the living room.
So whats the menu??
Hmm. Thats a surprise.
Geet again smiled faintly n he remembered the famous proverb 'daal me kuch kala hai' but he ignored it, nothing could be wrong when they are together.
You wait here I'll back in 2 minutes.
Saying this Geet rushed to the kitchen.

Tik-tok Tik-tok Tik-tok... 10 minutes passed then 15. Maan was getting pissed off. He was here to spend time with her n not to sit alone n stare at the furniture.
Maan ST-Yeh ladki dinner bana rai hai ya birbal ki khichdi
Maan-Geet...
He called out.
Haan bas 2 minutes.

He waited for another 15 minutes.
Geet...
He again shouted.
2 minutes Maan
MaanST- Oh! God not again
Maan went inside the kitchen n his eyes popped out of the sockets seeing the spectacular scene.

Uneven, big pieces of vegetables scattered on the counter. Some weird red thing was boiling on gas n what was she trying to do...aaa...may be making the dough but it looked like white fluid with exceptional amount of water in it.

Maan was about to burst out laughing but seeing her condition he controlled himself.
Tum andar kyu aaye, mai laa rai thi na.
She said making a cry baby face. Aww!! How cute she looked. Aan just wanted to chew her up, his sweet angel who was doing so much just for him. He wiped her flour stained face with a cloth n led her to the living room.

Tum baitho. Mai dinner banaoga.
Par tum kyu banaoge? maine tumhe dinner pe bulaya hai.
Toh kya hua? Tumne bulaya hai it does'nt mean k tumhi cook karogi. I will cook n then we'll have it together.
Geet nodded sadly.
The Master Chef is at your service. You just wait n watch.
He gave his best smile to cheer her up n went to the kitchen.
Chal Maan kaam pe lag jaa





CONTINUED BELOW...!!
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CONTINUED...!!



Maan first cleaned the mess n quickly made pasta thinking his princess must be hungry.



Maan called Geet to the dinning table n served the food for her n himself.
Maan- Now tell me howz it?
Geet made a yak face...
Kya hua accha nai hai??
Nai... Bahut accha hai. Koi aisa kaam hai jo tum nai kar sakte?
She asked amused, her face wan.
Maan Singh Khurana can do everything.
He raised his collar with proud.
And I am useless. I can't even make dinner for us.
Geet's eyes were downcast n her spirits looked really low.

Maan smiled sweetly n held her hand in his. His warm hand was so comforting.
Who said you are useless. You can dance, sing n you are the best guitarist I have ever seen. And our heart, it is so shiny that it can outstand a diamond's sparkle. You are my jaan, my life..
Geet blinked unbelievingly. How can someone be so perfect. His acknowledgement was ultimate bliss for her.
And yeh one thing... you are the sexiest girl of this universe... Toy Girl.
He said naughtily n Geet smiled. She felt light n special.

What else a girl wants?? Few words of endearment, a touch of care n compassion n the feel of being precious to the one who is most special to her.

Geet looked at their entwined hands. She felt so happy n complete. She knew she was not perfect but he was there to fill the empty spaces. Suddenly her eyes caught the glimpse of a cut on Maan's forefinger. It was slightly bleeding.
Maan yeh kaise hua?
Wo vegetables cut karte waqt ho gaya

Geet softly blew on it to sooth the pain.



She decided to bring the first aid box but then thought otherwise. She took his finger into her mouth n sucked it. Maan did'nt know how to react. It was the best aid he had ever recieved. It seemed with his finger she was suckng all his sanity. 'Control' Maan chanted in his brain. Geet rolled her tongue around his finger n slightly rubbed it over the cut.

Oh! Sweet lord. How was he supposed to control now when she was behaving like this. A shiver ran through his spine n all his nerves electrocuted. He jerked his hand back.

We should eat. Its getting cold.
He said without looking into her eyes because he knew one look n his resolution in drain.
I will feed you. You are injured.
Oh please Geet its just a sma..
Chup bilkul chup... !! Tum bana sakte ho toh mai khila nai sakti
Maan sighed in defeat. Can he win from his sherni? Never!! Geet fed him lovingly while Maan admired her.

After dinner they cleaned the table n Maan started to leave.
Maan tum ruk nai sakte. Mujhe akele darr lagta hai.
No No...The more he will stay here alone with her the more difficult it would get. He did'nt wanted to deny her but there was no option.
Geet I have to leave. You don't fear. Just call me if you need anything.
Geet ST- Yeh aise nai maanega
Maan turned n just then the lights went off.




PRECAP-Naughty Geet ka khurafati dimaag..😳
Poor Maan...😉




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Posted: 13 years ago
awesom update
loved the precap
geet key khurapati dimag mein kya chal raha hai

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