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Posted: 13 years ago
part 16
nice part...
OMG Geet is really a unique piece...
she knows its her mistake but making MSK to apologize...
very good meet...
cont soon...
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[banner credit goes to stutz and shivu]

PART-17

hey friends iam back with the update..i want to dedicate this part to my sweet heart jyothi(jyothi krish).she wanted quick update..jyothi dear i hope u like it😉

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Maan:ha mein doond raha hoon…bas aa hi raha hoon..

He then disconnects the call..

Dekho meri behen ki engagement hai aur muje kisi ko lekar waha jaldi pahunchna hai isiliye mera raastha choodo..

Geet:wahi toh..mera bhi bhai ka engagement hai aur muje bhi kisi ko doond na hai jo muje pick karne wale hai..isliye sorry kahiye aur muje jaane dijiye…

Maan looks at her irritatingly and geet smirks again…….

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Now geet's mobile rings…

Geet:hello…ha baba aarahi hoon..bus muje tumhara o friend miljaye..pata nahi kaha reh gaya..teek hai teek hai I'll search for him..

[ha iam coming..let me find ur friend who came to pick me….ok I'll search for him]

Maan still stood there glaring…

Maan:dekho muje jaana hai mere paas tumhare liye poora din nahi hai..mera raastha chodo..

[see..i have to leave now..i don't have the whole day for u so plz let me go]

Geet:muje bhi koi shouk nahi hai aapke saath rehne ka..chalo teek hai 4 baar nahi ek baar kehdijiye mein chali jaaongi…

[just say sorry and u can leave..i too don't want to stay with u]

Maan:teek hai fir tumhe bhi mujse thank you kehna hoga…

[ok then u too have to say thankyou to me]

Geet:bilkul bhi nahi…

[no way]

Maan:teek hai mein bhi nahi kahunga..chalo hatjao…

[ok then..iam not going to say sorry..move now]

Geet(st):hey babaji iski akad toh dekho…mein toh inse sorry sunkar hi rahungi..is sadu ko toh mein nahi chodungi muje akad dikha raha hai upar se pagal kaha hai…teek hai pehle sorry toh kehne do use..mein kaha sach mein thank you bolne wali hoon..

[oh god…see his attitude… he called me mad na.. I'll not leave him without asking me sorry…ok then let him ask for sorry first]

Teek hai mein ready hoon..pehle aap mujse sorry kahiye aur phir mein thank u kahungi…

[ok…iam ready..first u say sorry then I'll say thank you]

Maan:nahi..pehle tum thank u kaho…waise ladies first right!

[no..first u say thank you…however we say that ladies first]

Geet(smirks):bilkul nahi..pehle aap hi kahenge..warna khade hojayiye shaam tak...muje koi problem nahi hai…

[not at all...u have to say first…if not u can stand like this..i don't have anyproblem]

Maan(st):ye ladki sach much pagal hai..chalo sorry keh detha hoon warna nupur muje maar dalegi late pahunchne ke liye…

[this girl is really mad..ok I have to ask for sorry otherwise I'll be late and nupur will kill me]

Teek hai..sorry..

Geet:(st)ab aaya na pahad se neeche..

Kya? muje kuch sunai nahi diya…

[what??what did u say?i didn't hear it]

Maan glares at her…

Geet:aap muje goor kyun rahe ho sach mein kuch sunai nahi diya muje..wo kya hai na yaha station mein itna shor hai toh…smiles at maan innocently…

[y are u glaring at me??i really didn't hear it..u see so much of noise here in station..so..smiles at maan innocently]

Maan looks at her annoyingly and says sorry again…

Geet smiles at him ….bas itni si baat thi kya zaroorat thi tab se argue karne ki..dekha aap kitne acche se sorry bol diya hai..

[see..how easy it is to sarry..you were argueing with me unnecessarily..]

Maan smirks at her..ab tumhari baari…[now it's ur turn..]

Geet:ha..bolti hoon na…tha….hawww ye kya hogaya…she points her finger towards a moving train…maan looks that side while geet escapes from there…

Maan:oye hello..kaha jaa rahi ho…thank u…

Geet turns to maan and smiles…koi baat nahi..it's ok..and moves out…

Maan gets irritated with geet…isko toh mein nahi chodunga..agli baar mere saamne aayi na tab use nahi chodunga….pehle ye geet ko toh doondu…pata nahi kaha hai..

[I'll not leave this girl…let me search this geet first..god knows where she is..]

Maan calls mayank and asks him to send geet's photo..he sends it..maan opens that and is shocked to see geet's photo..

Maan:oh toh ye hi hai geet..geet sharma..ab dekhna mein kya kartha hoon..bada mazaa aaya na tumhe muje tang karthe huye…ab dekho mein tumhe kese tang ka kartha hoon..he smirks and moves towards geet….

[oh…so this is geet...now see what i'll do]

Geet is waiting outside the station while she notices that maan is coming towards her….

Geet:hey babaji ye meri taraf hi aaraha hai..ek thank u ke liye mere peeche pad gaya hai..kahi ye mera peecha toh nahi kar raha hai…

[oh..he's coming to me..he is after me only for one thank you..oh god is he following me???]

As soon as maan comes there geet starts shouting on him.."aap mera peecha kyun kar rahe ho..

[why are u following me??]

Maan:oye hello mein tumhara peecha nahi kar raha hoon..apne car ke paas ja raha hoon aur waise bhi tum koi aasman se utri hui pari ho kya…

[oye hello..iam not following you..iam just heading towards my car..what do u think of urself?do u feel that u are an angel?]

Geet:ha mein pari hoon..aur mein…

Before she could say anything her mobile rings..she instantly picks the call.."hello mayank kaha hai tumhara dost..pata nahi kaha gaya…aur koun hai wo…

[hello..mayank wher's ur friend??god knows where he is..]

Maan is silently smiling as he know that she's geet and waiting for him…

Mayank:di ek minute..aap mere baat toh sunlijiye…mein ne maan ko aapka photo mms kiya hai aur aapko bhi uska photo bhejdoonga phir aap maan ko asaani se doond sakthi hai….

[wait..let me speak..i sent ur pic to maan and will send his to u so that u can find him easily]

Geet:ab bol rahe ho…tab se kya kar rahe the..jaldi bhejdo..yaha ek sadu muje pareshaan kar raha hai…

[ok send me soon..]

Maan glares at geet.."kya kaha tumne??

Geet:aap kyun naraaz ho rahe ho..kya aapka naam sadu hai??

[y ur name is sadu??]

Maan smirks at her…"nahi maan hai maan singh khurana.."

Geet is confused with his name maan…

Geet:ye toh mayank ke friend ka naam hai na…

[this is mayank's friend name..]

Maan:aur mein jaa raha hoon..muje tumse koi baat nahi karni hai…"

[iam leaving..i don't want to talk to u]

He moves towards his car which is just besides geet..

Geet:ha ha jayiye muje bhi aapse koi baat nahi karni hai…

[ha go then..i too don't want to talk to u]

Meanwhile,geet recieves mms sent by mayank..she quickly opens it and shocked to see maan's photo..maan who sat in his car notices geet's shocking expressions and smiles silently…

Geet:hey babaji ye sadu mayank ka friend hai..aur ye muje doond rahe the…ab mein kya karu ye toh ja raha hai..muje venu bhi nahi pata..agar jaldi nahi pahunchi na engagement ka kya hoga..mayank.ye kya kar diya tumne is saari duniya mein sirf ye sadu mila hai kya dosti karne ke liye..ab mein kya karu..is saadu ke paas jaana hoga..chalo geet kuch nahi hoga babaji hai na..kuch nahi hoga..hey babaji apni geet ki raksha karna…

[oh god!he is mayank's friend..what I should do now?he's leaving and I don't even know the venue….oh mayank what did u do??u found this man as friend from this whole world..what I should now??..ok I'll go to him..nothing will happen my god is with me]

She moves towards his window and slightly smiles at him…maan glares at her and turns his face away..he is about to start the car…

Geet:maan..rukhiye na..mein hi geet hoon..mayank ki behen jike liye aap yaha doond rahe the..wo mein hoon…

[maan..wait…iam geet mayank's sister for whom you were searching]

Maan:jaantha hoon..so what??

[I know..so what??]

Geet:so what??aap muje nahi lejayenge…

[so what??..u don't want to take me with u?]

Maan:nahi..waise bhi mein toh sadu hoon pagal hoon..tum mere saath kese chal sakthi ho…

[no…iam an arrogant,mad fellow..how can u come with me??]

Geet:(st)hey babaji ye sirf saadu nahi dust danav hai..dekha muje kese tang kar rahe hai…

Nahi…o toh bas mein mazak kar rahi thi…

[no..i was just joking]

Maan:accha!bahuth accha tha tumhara so called mazak..mein ja raha hoon..

[oh really…ur joke was very nice..iam leaving now]

Geet:are rukhiye na..aap muj jaisi boli baali ladki ko yaha akele kese chod kar jaa sakthe hai..

[wait na…how can u leave an innocent girl like me alone here]

Maan:tum aur boli…(smirks)huh…waise tumhe ek baat batadu..ye bechare pan ka natak karne se kuch nahi hoga..tum khud jaa kar venue doondlo…

[u and innocent..huh…let me clear onething to u..ur innocency is not going to work on me]

Geet:plz maan aisa mat kijiye aap jo kahenge mein wo karungi….

[plz maan don't do like that…I'll do whatever u say]

Maan:oh accha!toh teek hai ek sorry aur ek thanx bolo…

[ok..well in that case say me thank you and sorry]

Geet:thank u toh teek hai…par sorry kyun???

[but y I should I ask for sorry]

Maan:kyun ki tumne muje itna kuch sunadiya aur upar se mujse thanku kahe bina hi bhaag gayi..isliye…

[becoz u were taunting me sice long time..and u ran away without asking me thank u]

Geet(st):dekha babaji kese tang kar rahe hai ye dustdanav…isko toh mein baad mein dekhlungi..

[oh god see how he is torturing me..i'll see him afterwards..]

Maan:kya kaha tumne??

[what u said??]

Geet:kuch nahi..sorry..

[nothing..iam sorry]

Maan:kya??muje kuch sunayi nahi diya…

[sorry..i cant listen it]

Geet:hawww….aap jaan booj kar ye sab kar rahe hai na..

[haww…u are doing all this intentinally???]

Maan:nahi geet sach mein sunayi nahi diya..o kya hai ye parking area itna shor hai toh…

[no geet..i really didn't hear it…this is parking area and u know noises and all..so..]

Geet(st):hey babaji mere dialogues muj par hi apply kar rahe hai…

Teek hai sorry says little loudly..

Maan:kya??muje kuch sunayi nahi de raha hai….

[what??i cant listen it again..]

Geet glares at maan and shouts sorry…..near his ear..

Maan:ahh..tum pagal hogayi ho kya??chilla kyun rahi ho??

[ahh..are u mad?why are u shouting?]

Geet:aap ne kaha na ki aapko sunayi nahi diya isliye…

[u said that u cant listen it]

Geet again shouts thank u in his ear….

Maan glares at her…ab sorry aur thank u dono hogaya toh mein chal sakthi hoon na…

[I think I can go with u now]

She instantly settles her self in the front seat beside maan…

Both glares at each other again…

Geet(st):dustdanav kahinka..mein aapko choodungi nahi…boli baali geet ko kitna tang kiya hai aapne…

[I wont leave u…

Maan then headed towards engagement venue..both were busy in throwing glares through out the way…finally they reached the place and geet soon steps down the car and runs inside with excitement…

She finds mayank and nupur on stage..she goes to them and hugs them..

Mayank:di aap kitna late kardiya…

[u are late..]

Geet:sorry baba…kya karu sab tumhara dost ki wajah se…

[sorry baba..this is becoz of ur friend]

Nupur:kyun geet kya huwa???

[why?what happened?]

Geet:ab kya kahu nupur..o itna aatitude dikhata hai ki poocho mat..bada smart samaj tha hai apne aapko..pata hai kitna tang kiya tha muje..sadu kahinka…

[he is very arrogant..he estimates himself as very smart..he really irritated me…]

Mayank and nupur smiles at geet nervously while maan is standing beside her and busy in glaring her…

Nupur:geet….maan bhai…

Geet turned and shocked to see maan…she gulps her saliva while is maan glaring her..

Nupur:geet ye mera bhai maan singh khurana.

Geet:bhai?????

Maan:kya kaha tumne sadu…tum bhi kuch kam nahi ho…pagal ladki..u are a chatter box..ek baar bolna shuru ki na toh rukne ka naam hi nahi lethi ho..

[what u said……u are not less than me..u are a mad girl and a chatter box who cant stop once u start]

Geet:haaa…kya kaha aapne aap hi paagal ho aur aapki….

Mayank:ek minute tum dono ladthe rahenge ya engagement bhi hone denge…we are waiting for u people…jaldi jaakar tayyar hojayiye.

[wait…will u guys stop fighting and let our engagement happen..go and get ready fast]

Maaneet glares at each other again…and moves from there…….

precap:maaneet's nok jhok again and dance sequence...

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Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update
loved it to the core
glad to see geet
but phir se ladai uff kitna ladti hai geet
continue asap
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Posted: 13 years ago
edited~~

thanku soo much for dedicating it to me... love u... hugs to u.. 🤗
hayeee kitna awesome update hain yaar...
i loved it so so so much...
omg omg.. they are fighting like small kids... even they r better... ek sorry aur thanku ke liye...
i remembered godavari movie... 😆 tumko pata hain na...
hey babaji geet yeh tho cheating hain... bechara maan tumko sorry kaha aur tumne tho MSK se panga liya...
main tho pagal ho gayi hu inn dono ke jagda dekkar...
i am imagining their shocked faces after getting mms... omg... dekha geet, atlast u had to tell thanku n sorry bhi.. he is MSK yaar... ofcourse tum bhi geet ho koi kam nahi...
hmm so they reached venue ontime... acha hua... 😆
wonderful dear... i was laughing like a crazy... thanku god mom ghar par nahi hain... 😆
Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
funny really very funny how they fight for sorry n thanks.I m thinking about Geet's face when she came to know about Maan.What a name...one more added .How she loudly put her sorry in his ear.Maan is really bechara here.Geet is devil...loved it dear😃


Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
superb update dear 😃👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome nok jhok

continue soon

thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothikrish

edited~~

thanku soo much for dedicating it to me... love u... hugs to u.. 🤗
hayeee kitna awesome update hain yaar...
i loved it so so so much...
omg omg.. they are fighting like small kids... even they r better... ek sorry aur thanku ke liye...
i remembered godavari movie... 😆 tumko pata hain na...
hey babaji geet yeh tho cheating hain... bechara maan tumko sorry kaha aur tumne tho MSK se panga liya...
main tho pagal ho gayi hu inn dono ke jagda dekkar...
i am imagining their shocked faces after getting mms... omg... dekha geet, atlast u had to tell thanku n sorry bhi.. he is MSK yaar... ofcourse tum bhi geet ho koi kam nahi...
hmm so they reached venue ontime... acha hua... 😆
wonderful dear... i was laughing like a crazy... thanku god mom ghar par nahi hain... 😆



thank u sooo much jyothi..thnk god update was good...bus 10 minute pehle hi update ready ki..jaldi jaldi likdi..i was scred whether u people like it or not but ur comments reklieved me..thank u sooo much sweetie..
love u🤗
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneetlover1



thank u sooo much jyothi..thnk god update was good...bus 10 minute pehle hi update ready ki..jaldi jaldi likdi..i was scred whether u people like it or not but ur comments reklieved me..thank u sooo much sweetie..
love u🤗
🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗



aww darne ki koi baat nahi...
update tho bohot bohot acha hain... i loved it very much...
love u too sweety... 🤗🤗🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow superb update
maaneet nok jhok superb lolzz
will see wat next update

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