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Posted: 19 years ago

here is the next part

part 25

angad- man..i just love this woman....(and goes to change) ❤️

angad goes to change and comes down to the party

dadi – duniya ka sabse acha bacha ………………many many hapy returns of the day 😛 😛 😛

angad – thanx alotttttttttttttttt dadi 😃

angad is abt to hug dadi but she stops him and points to her feet 😆

angad – oh dadi ( he touches her feet and then dadi hugs her) 😛 😛 😛

then he goes and meets other guests

and there comes sujal and kashish also 😉 😉

kashish – hey angad MANYYYYYYYYYY HAPPPPPPPPPY RETURNS OF THE DAY 👏

angad – thanx sis 😛 😛

andag – but this is not fair di …..u r coming so late like a guest😒 😒

kashish – sooory kaam tha 😒 😒 😒

angad – its ok 😛 😛

and then he turns to sujal and hugs him (by this time kripa also comes and greets them)

angad – hey sujal 😉 😉

sujal - many many hapy returns of the day 😛 😛

angad – thanx and soooory 😛 😛

sujal – sorry ????????????for what 🤔

kripa understood what he was trying to say and she interrupts saying 😛 😛

kripa – hey angad u should also give the party ka credit to sujal ……………usne mere bahut madat ki 😆 😉

angad – ok thanx for the rocking party sujal 👏 👏 👏

sujal - u r most welcome

the DJ

DJ – ok now all the coples get on the dance floor ………………now everyone pics up the newspapers

Everyone – 😕

DJ – comeon guys it is a birthday party and the rule of birthday parties r there should be games ……….so what if we r adults we can also play games…………..right 😉

The crowd cheers
👏

Ok now the couples r like

Angad – kripa

Sujal – kashish

Josh – aliya

And

Prithvi – sanjana (remember in the starting ……….he tells that he loves her…………hope u all do)


Dj – ok the game is like u all have to dance on the papers and keep folding as the music changes and remember who ever steps outside the paper in out 😃

Soo all couples lets start


All the couples start dancing

Josh – aliya

Aliya – ya (hoping he says something nice ) 😕 😕

Josh – I 😛 😛

Aliya – I 😳

Josh – love

Aliya – love 😳

Josh – I love someone very much 😡

Aliya – whatttttttttt I thought 🤢 🤢 🤢

Josh - u thought what' 😆 😆 😆

Aliya – nothing ………….who is she

Josh – I will tell u later on

Aliya –
so what can I do in this
😡

Josh –
come on yaar tum ek ladki hoon …………shaya tum mere madat kar sako..i mean ladkiyon kis psychology mujhe kya pata...u r a girl n u can understand another female reelllyyy well.....u can gimme some rrreeeaalllll good ideas👏

Aliya – achcha.....kya karna hoga mujhe 😕

Josh – can u tell me how can I propose that girl 😆

Aliya –
yeh tum mujhse kyun puch raha ho😕😕

Josh –
bcoz u r thr only girl I can talk abt all this thing …..and ofall u know me reely well ….so plzzzzzzzzzz mere madat karo...aur main jisse pyaar karta hoon...woh bilkul tumhari jaisi hai..sweeeetttt...caarrinnggg....blah blah.....u know na...so plzzzzzzzzzzz help me out na...😊

Aliya – okok I will help u ……do 1 thing take that girl to a beautiful restaurant ……..and decorate the whole place with balloons and roses …………..with candles designed that says ILU 😳

Josh – woooooooooo thanx a lott I will do that

Aliya – (sad as she had started to love him)...she is jealous n angry as well...coz she had feelings for josh and thought tht even he loves her....but she was wrong..and so she was reeellllyyyyyyy saaaaddddd.... 😔

And they keep dancing


Many couples get out and at last there r only 3 couples left that r

Josh and aliya , sujal and kashish and at last our sweety love duby couple angad and kripa


Now the paper has been folded to a reeely small part ………soo all the gents have to pick up their ladies 😛


First angad pick up kripa

Angad – woooooooooo

Kripa – kya hua 😲

Angad – tum kitne bhari ho 😆 😆 😆

Kripa – aacha ……..to jao mein nahin khelti

Angad – okk soory …….tum to foolki tarha halki ho

Kripa – giggles 😆


And on the other side aliya is continuously staring into josh's eyes


Just before the music is abt to change kripa loses her balance and stands and the couple is out 😆

Angad- kya kripa.......tumne balance kaise loose kar diya...ab dekho hum haar gaye...😡

Kripa- sooorryyyy angad(holds her ears)😉...main kya karti..mujhe laga tum mujhe gira doge....aur main girna afford nahi kar sakti....😛

Angad- confuseddddddddddddd.......😕


Now only sujal-kashish and josh –aliya are left 😳

they keep dancing when even kashish looses her balance n trips but our sujal the gr8 manages to hold her....and so they r out toooooooooooo

Sujal- ye lijiye madam ji...hum bhi out ho gaye😉

Kashish- toh kya hau sujal.....hum toh vaise bhi ek doosre ke saath hamesha hi hai..haar ya jeet hamare liye toh koi maayne nahi rakhti hai na...hum dono toh pehle se hi ek doosre ko jeet chuke hai riteeeee...😳

Sujal-haan ur rite...toh hamari begum saahibah romantic baatein bhi kar rahi hain....woooooooooo...i'm flatteredddddddddddddddddddddd....(winks)😳

Kashish- hits his arm.....achcha humein chodo....wahaan dekho....aaliya aur josh ek doosre ke saath kitne pyaare lag rahe hai na...👏

Sujal- haannnn..they look reely cute together...a couple made for each other....😆

on the other hand...the dj declares aaliya n josh as the winners....while our laila and majnu r still looking into each others eyes and dancing away like they can stay like tht for ever.....👏

finally angad cumes n snaps his fingers in front of josh n they both come out of their dream world...😊

Angad- josh ji...ab toh hamari behen ko chod do....aap dono ye game jeet chuke hain...😃😉

Josh- oh haan...soorrryyyyy.....😃

AAliya- blushes and runs away👏

and tht's it they go n collect their trophy which is made of crystal in a heart shape...and whch says made for each other.....aaliya is rrreeelllyyyy happy tht she n josh have won the trophy...and last on the stage u see aaliya n josh fighting for the trophy....😉

AAliya- josh main ye trophy rekhoongi...😃

Josh- nahi main ise rakhoonga...😃😃

AAliya- josh plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz(makes a cute face)😉

Josh- is left with no choice.....and gives it to aaliya....theek hai..tum ise rakho..lekin yaad rakhna ye trophy hum dono ne jeeti hai..tumne akele ne nahi...👏

Aaliya- says to herself.......ye baat main kaise bhool sakti hoon....(blushes)😳

Josh- tumne kuch kaha😕😕

Aaliya- nahi toh...👏

And the party ends and everyone go hoooommeee......


ok thats it for now
will continue 2morrow and mostly it will be the last part
lol
ashi and guddi
😊

Edited by ashita_tweety - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: apra

good continue soon

thanx apra ...........u know wht i wanna read your fan fic also cannt star now having exams next week but will sure read it after that 😉

lol

ashi and guddi

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Posted: 19 years ago
Kripas pregnant isnt she? lol...
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Posted: 19 years ago
oh man i just read ur fan - fic it was awesome !!!!!!!!!!!!!

plllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon !!!!!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
i think i m really late 2 comment on ur fan - fic as u r finishing it up soon !!!!!!!!!!! 😆

bt i tjink it will b ok wid u !!!!!!! 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago

IT WAS REALLY GREAT...DO CONTINUE SOON

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Edited by shahidlover24 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanx for that v. sweet n nice part!!!! i rly liked everything in it, from the dance to josh n aliyah's conversation!!!! n i am confident that this prediction of mine that kripa's pregnant n josh is in luv wid aliyah is gonna cum true!! cont. soon ,as i wanna see what happens next!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
omg!! it so sweeeeeeeeeeeeeet!! 😳 😳 😳 i loved it!! plz continue sooon!! 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
guys we r sooooooooooooooooooooooooo soory we will continue on 5 april as our exams r going on 😕 .................sory once again.......bye 😛
but i can garantee u that the wait will be worth .........the next part is rellllly going to be coool 😉
lol
ashi and guddi
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Posted: 19 years ago
Good luck on your Exams and continue when you can 😊

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