OS: ASR's new clothes (Part 2, pg 10)

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madmaxine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: lexaxel
A super and fitting part 2...Khushi returns on her own terms and as Arnav's equal😊.

You must have worked like a trojan to put up 2 parts of different stories and both totally read twice-thrice worthy.

U ROCK my friend👍🏼!!!!!!

As usual..you hit the nail on the head. I like that you always get the point and see beyond the fluff. I wanted her to come back...but only when she was ready.

Yeah...writing both of these took about 3 hours. But I love doing it..so it's fine. 😊

Thanks again Nancy.😊

Originally posted by: sweetygirl28
that was nice.. very cute.. khushi is totally an opposite compared to the original.. her attitude!!

its time to come back home,huh!!! that was awesome!!

Thanks! Glad you liked the different Khushi. 😊

Originally posted by: meghnas
😆😆 the poems were tooo cute n funny! n nani's sex n the city OMG 🤣🤣
loved this no nonsense Khushi...directly askin will u marry me!!

Yep..this one gets to the point..no beating around the bush. Thanks and glad you had fun reading. 😊

Originally posted by: dbr_kmichi
wonderful wonderful one!!

Thanks!

Originally posted by: priyaprasadj
Good one Vidhya.
Khushi in complete control...and Naniji is hilarious 😆

Yep...she's the boss here in this one. Thanks. 😊

Originally posted by: minimuffin86
that was awesome!!! and congratulations on winning the best os of the week!!!

Thanks muffin! 😊

Originally posted by: Angels11
Nani cracks me up 😆

Nice 1 coz i am a sucker for happy endings 😳

Nani is hilarious..yep. And as for happy endings...they are the best kind. 😊

Originally posted by: sarach
it was really goood.loved it..that funny tee and slogan..

Thanks! 😊

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madmaxine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: alice54
Funny and beautiful update😆

Loved the way kushi ...er...proposed him😆...any guy would have been confused after the sudden proposal🤣...And Arnav's expression was a typical ASR mode but a good and funny one...

Thanks! Glad you liked it.😊

Originally posted by: sharneil92
OH MY GOD! I CAN'T BELIEVE I JUST READ THIS! I SHOULD HAVE GONE THROUGH MY 85 UNREAD MAILS BEFORE!!!

AAAHHH!!!
VIDHYA! THIS IS FAB! COMPLETELY!

NANI IS A ROCKSTAR!

KKG IS MY IDOL!

AND ASR IS SUPER CUTE! 😆

I LOVE THIS ENDING!

STRAIGHT. PRECISE. ASK. DONE. ⭐️

a gold star for you!!! and thank you for the dedication!!! 😳

Thanks Shalu! Nani is awesomeness..love her to bits myself. Yes...I kept it clean in this one..no mucking around. I love. You love. Let's' get this over with! 😉 And you're welcome babe!

Originally posted by: Lekshmic7
Superb!!! Loved it

Thanks.

Originally posted by: Kritianya
Beautiful

Thanks

Originally posted by: rupzloveu
awww happy ending
loved it...

Thanks much!

Originally posted by: mirnalini
That was very nice!
Loved how Khushi and La teamed up on Arnav...wish they'd do the same in the show as well!😛

Wouldn't that be something! I'd pay to see that. 😆

Originally posted by: amrit23
just read both the parts !! They r fabulous really
Lovd them sply the second part, Arhi will make world's most scariest babies lol...adored it completely...too bad this was the last part

Great job btw ! Keep writing like this

Thanks a lot. Glad you liked it. 😊

Originally posted by: srahs
loved it
thankx for pm

Thanks!

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Rumaisa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#93

awww i loved this

am so happy u decided to give this os a happy ending hun

it was brilliant n it definately cracked me up

am also a sucker for happy endings

thanks for the pm hun

take care

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meenaluma

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Posted: 13 years ago

#94

superb great no words to explain great ending loved a lot

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Posted: 13 years ago

#95

What?? Nani watches "Sex and City" and she's teasing Lakshmi is better at humor when compared to Arnav🤣

World's scariest babies😆

Nice ending! Thanks for the PM!

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bmtdluver

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Posted: 13 years ago

#96

loved it! I seriously cracked up while reading this, especially this part:

"What is it Chotey? Why are you screaming? I was watching Sex and the City and you interrupted," said Nani crossly.

"Nani, did you send me this as joke?" asked ASR, showing her the Tee.

"Me, send you a shirt? As a joke? If I wanted a joke, I'd rather ask Lakshmi why the chicken crossed the road. She's funnier than you are. You could make milk curdle with that expression on your face. Now, stop asking me stupid questions. Samantha has breast cancer, and I need to find out what happens!" said Nani huffily, walking away.

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Zeba

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Posted: 13 years ago

#97

Fab finish Vidhya!!

I loved the wacky reactions Arnav got from his family...priceless.

Brilliantly done hun...I loved it.

⭐️

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madmaxine

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Posted: 13 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: Chika_gurl
luvlyyy

Thanks!

Originally posted by: tinsel
Wow! A Happy Ending🤗

Thanks! 🤗

Originally posted by: Zeee
love the babies part! lol
thanks for continuing
xxx

Thanks!

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007
Luv Ths...

So glad you do!

Originally posted by: Rozy77
awww i loved this
am so happy u decided to give this os a happy ending hun
it was brilliant n it definately cracked me up
am also a sucker for happy endings
thanks for the pm hun
take care

Hi Rozy! Glad you enjoyed the happy ending. You take care too. 🤗

Originally posted by: meenaluma
superb great no words to explain great ending loved a lot

Thanks!

Originally posted by: immayurfan
Awesome os

Thanks!

Originally posted by: Sivaranjani
What?? Nani watches "Sex and City" and she's teasing Lakshmi is better at humor when compared to Arnav🤣

World's scariest babies😆

Nice ending! Thanks for the PM!

Glad you enjoyed the jokes in this one! 😃

Originally posted by: bmtdluver
loved it! I seriously cracked up while reading this, especially this part:
"What is it Chotey? Why are you screaming? I was watching Sex and the City and you interrupted," said Nani crossly.

"Nani, did you send me this as joke?" asked ASR, showing her the Tee.

"Me, send you a shirt? As a joke? If I wanted a joke, I'd rather ask Lakshmi why the chicken crossed the road. She's funnier than you are. You could make milk curdle with that expression on your face. Now, stop asking me stupid questions. Samantha has breast cancer, and I need to find out what happens!" said Nani huffily, walking away.

Glad you like my weird sense of humor there! 😃

Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower
Fab finish Vidhya!!
I loved the wacky reactions Arnav got from his family...priceless.
Brilliantly done hun...I loved it.
⭐️

Oh thank you! He has a wacky family...so wacky reactions are a must! 😊