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pritm

@pritm

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Posted: 13 years ago

#481

lovely update
can't wait more to know twist
so plz update fast

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Vindiya hashini

@diyachill

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Posted: 13 years ago

#482

hey dear..i love the way the story is movin...to cure yrs of pain ,selfless and unconditioanl love with time is required...if u emphasized only geet pain and maan rude behaviour by adding some more parts that would had been boring and little bit over touchy...but here u r emphasizing maan way to impress geet and bring back smile ...that is wonderful...dont change ur story for any1...u r too gud...plz continue soon..both r having d shares of pain

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saam123

@saam123

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#483

Hi anu awesome update

thanks 4 this double

update.so good geet

is melting now but still

she is very far 4 trust

him again.may be very

scared to be broken again

mann please stop hurting

ur self. this will give her more

pain .talk with her. tell her

everything what ever it's in

ur mind.give words to ur

emotions.ur silence is confusing

her more, good going .

update soon

Edited by simm28 - 13 years ago

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preethia

@preethia

Sparkler

Posted: 13 years ago

#484

loved the update...

so sweet msg from him and the party arrangement and all but this one mistake now madam bahut gussey mein hain...

how can he not know that if he is in pain she will automatically know it and moreover the way he was thinking things in his mind was funny and nice...

pl cont soon