Is pyar ko mein kya naam doo-NEW PG 56!! - Page 3

yay! a new fan fic by u!! u just made my day! lolz...kewl intro...cant wait for the first part! btw- chek out mine...im gona continue in 10 mins!!!! k. bi 4 now!!!
LUB,
Prakriti 😊

hurry pooja man....the concept is brilliant...cant wait to read the first and plz cont ur other one....ur great writter and none of ur work is boring

The Day was beautiful in the humongous city of New York. As the camera takes us around to some gorgeous site-seeing places, it stops right in front of the door to a wonderful, big palace! The big boulder doors open and we the camera leads us inside to big room. THe walls are painted pink and decorated with all varieties of pictures of two girls, the same in all the pictures. As we look around we see that the room is vacant with no one inside. Just as we are about to exit the room a door opens in the room and out of the bathroom comes a ravishing looking girl in her leather black pants and white tank top. THe girl walks over to her large wooden brown dresser and picks up her hairbrush and combs her and walks out of the room.

THe girl walks into another room with walls nicely painted purple, also covered with pictures of two girls. As the girl steps into the other room we hear "Aaliyah..tum tayar ho?" THe girl is none other than Aaliyah! Aaliyah walks further into the room and replys "haan, im ready!...hurry up!" Now we see Aaliyah talking to another girl. THe girl had beautiful chocolate-like brown eyes, she stands in front of the mirror next to Aaliyah with her shoulder length wet hair, applying some gloss to her lips and handing it over to Aaliyah who is now just staring at her friend's beauty. Now the girl is completely done dressing, she is wearing light blue jeans and a cute pink tank top and beige colored UGGS (they're a type of shoes for those who don't know)

THe girl goes to Aaliyah and we see that it is none other than our Kripa!!

"Hey yaar! Someone's looking great!" speaks up Aaliyah.

"You're looking very beautiful yourself...let's see which guys' mouth drops seeing you today!" replies Kripa. THe two burst into laughter.

Kripa looks at her watch and realizes that the two are getting extremely late for college. THe two run downstairs and grab a bagel each and run out the house and to the car. They take Kripa's silver lamborguini since Aaliyah's is in the repair garage to get fixed, she had gotten it shifted to India when she went so she can drive around in her own car so she can go places by herself, but she had some technical difficulties and the roughs roads had dragged the tires. On the way to the University the two stop by at a Starbucks to pick up some coffee since the college is a fair distance away.

"Kripa, you wait here. I'll go and get the coffee," shouts Aaliyah, already half way out the door.

Five minutes later Aaliyah comes out of the cafe with two cups of delicious lattes. They drive a little further and stop when they read a board that reads "NEW YORK UNIVERSITY (the place to be)"

Kripa pulls into the parking lot and the two get out and walk up into the university. As they walk through you see the guys just drop their mouths open, as the two are the most popular girls in school. The two girls digress onto class since this was nothing new to them. THe day passes on like that and they go home after their lectures for the day.

So that was the first part!! Let me know how it was!

awesum part pooja (like usual!)! hey i started a new fan fic:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=218460&PN=1& TPN=1

tats the link.....hope u like it!
LUB,
Prakriti 😊

Originally posted by: prakriti

awesum part pooja (like usual!)! hey i started a new fan fic:
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=218460&PN=1& TPN=1

tats the link.....hope u like it!
LUB,
Prakriti 😊

yea i heard im surely reading it!! and yea rite..stop lieing that part was horrible!!

Originally posted by: Pooja922

yea i heard im surely reading it!! and yea rite..stop lieing that part was horrible!!

i swear! ur one hte best fan fic writers i know!

Lub,

Prakriti😉

thats it? only one person liked it?
do you guys think i should go on with this fanfic? if so, then please comment!!

awsome part Pooja 👏 it's mindblowin can't wait to read next part 😛

awesome pooja! cont soon w/ both of them!