Pehla Pyar-- Angad+Kripa & Dk+Disha - Page 11

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Posted: 19 years ago
wow Kajal jaanu taht was really good.

now whats teh secret disha has to say.

this is getting interesting, like Kaasam Se show 😃

😃
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Aliya's cellphone rings just as Disha is about to tell. Disha and Kripa look at her and Aliya is amazed.

Aliya: hello?

Josh: hey its josh.

Aliya(hesitatingly): so wht made u call?

Josh: nothing just like that. i was missing you. i havent seen you for three dayz.

Aliya: um...josh....

Josh: yeah?

Aliya(tears dripping down her cheeks): the reason why i havent been able to see you is that my mother passed away.

Aliya completely breaks down and Disha and Kripa come over and console her. A little too overwhelmed, Josh drops the glass he was holding. Angad notices and walks over.

ANgad: what happened>

Josh: uh....a-al-al...aliya's...

Angad: aliya's what?

Dk walks in.

Josh: aliya's mother passed away.

Dk: what?!

Josh: she just called me and told me.

Angad: we should go see them.

Dk: yeah....let's go.

They all get ready and are about to set out when Naina comes.

Naina: where are you guyz going?

Dk: a girl that works for us just lost her mother. im going to go console her.

Back to Disha's SEcret:

Aliya(wiping her tears): what were you saying before?

Disha(stuttering): i...pa...papa...

Aliya: papa?

Kripa(crying): DON'T SAY HIS NAME!!!!!!!

Disha walks over and puts her hand on Kripa's shoulder.

Disha: why? why do u have so much hatrd for papa?

Kripa: because he left mamma when she needed him the most. he let her be called an unwed mother.

Disha: Kripa! he made a mistake. and today.....

Kripa: mistake?! how does one just leave and break all ties with the person whom he loves the most? huh?

Aliya: look, what does papa have to do with....?

Disha: i want him to move with us. papa is alone and so are we.

Kripa: hold on! how do you know he will accept us now? How do you even know where he is?

Aliya: kripa, relax.

Disha: i....i have met him and he really does regret what he did but was to scared to face mamma's wrath.

Kripa(crying): too scared? that doesnt sound any bit different, di. and you met him?! how could you? after all he did?

Kripa runs up to her room!!!!!!!!!!!

Angad, Josh, and Dk were standing by the door for part of the heated conversation and got the picture about their father.

hope u liked it.
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Posted: 19 years ago
Hey,,,I just read the whole fan fic
really nice fan fic 😉 it was awsome. and plzzzz cont. soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
You cont jaanu!!!! yay!!!!!


wonder whats gonna happen!!!



Please cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
heyy kaju!!..whts upp??...yay!!!...im done reading and caught up with ur fanfic!!..ITS FABULOUS!!!...i really like it no i mean i love it!!..plzzz continue soon yaar!!...i cant wait!!.. 😃..

❤️LUV ur big sis and bff!!
Deepa🤗
Edited by angadlover<3 - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
hey nice ff...i like the story so far..plz cont soon 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
wow kajal jaanu that was fab 😭
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago

Originally posted by: a-k-fan17

😭 😭 😭 sad part




im sorry....romantic parts will be coming up soon...hehe...hope that'll cheer you up. 😉
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Posted: 19 years ago

Disha turned her head to look at Aliya and was surprised to see Josh, Angad, and Dk standing at door waiting to step inside. Angad and Dk looked at Disha while Josh was busy absorbed in his thoughts about Aliya's current state of mind.

Disha (flustered): hi….umm…so what bring you here?

Disha tried to keep her head back and had to use all of her strength to fight back tears.

Dk: well, Josh found out about your mother and since he's my brother gf I thought I ought to give you my condolences.

Disha (a bit bewildered at Dk's considerate side): oh thanks. Well I'll let you guys talk and be right back.

Josh immediately walked over to Aliya and held her face while Aliya's cheeks began to be moist from tears racing down them. Aliya was desperate to confide her feeling into someone and Josh was her current companion. She embraced him, with her hands wrapped tightly around his neck and he in return hugged her tightly. Dushyant and Angad were both a bit embarrassed by this and looked at Disha with pleading smiles.

Disha (giving Aliya a puzzled look, who was too busy to notice): on better thought, I do need help with something.

Disha didn't exactly lie as she had something she did need help for. It was to cheer up Kripa and try to make her see sense. And right now, Kripa was not in any mood to talk to her older sister. Disha stopped mid-way and went off on deep thought. She remembered how one time Kripa was so mad at everyone as they kept on teasing her about how cute she looked and treated her as a baby whereas she was eager to be an adult. She looked herself in the room and wouldn't come out for a whole day until everyone bribed her with some chocolate. It was milk chocolate.

Dk: umm, Disha?

Disha (slightly red): oh sorry. I really do need help. As you can tell, Kripa acts just like a three year old when she's mad so I do need help into making her come out of her room and accept our father. I know I am asking for more than I should.

Angad: hold on, I just realized that you guys are all sisters. Wow, what a family. Three beautiful women in one family.

A small but hardly noticeable smile crept onto Disha's face which had disappeared for quite a few days now.

Dk: hey, I thought we were friends. There are no limits to a friendship & I'll always be there.

Disha (smiling with appreciation): I should have known better.

Angad (jokingly): yeah you should have…just kidding. I'll go and try to get Kripa out of her room. It can't be that hard.

Disha: oh boy are you in for a surprise. Well, call me if you need any help. Come on, Dushyant…I'll make you some coffee.

Dk: okay.

Disha and Dushyant walked down the stairs and made a left into the dining room area, quite a distance away from Aliya and JOsh.

Angad walked to the room that had a sign "Kripa's Room" and knocked on it.

Kripa: go away!!!!!!

Angad mantained his silence and knocked again. There was no response.

Angad: Kripa, open the door.

Kripa( a bit shocked and shaken): i dont want to talk to anybody.

Angad: fine. i guess this milk chocolate that i bought will go to waste.

Kripa unexpectedly opens the door and looking at ANgad's empty hands attempts to slam the door back shut but Angad beats her to it. He shoves his way in the room and shuts it. Kripa, in fury, walks to the window and sits down, her back facing Angad and gripping a pillow.

Angad(patiently): Kripa

Kripa(snapping back): what? and if this is about my dad i dont want to hear a word.

Angad: why'd you think it's about your dad?

Kripa: cuz i know di, she probably set you up on this.

Angad: well she didnt cuz i volunteered and another thing, this is about your dad.

Kripa(in tears): why does everyone have to take di's side?

Angad(utterly confused without a clue wht to say): what?! who said i was gonna take her side? Kripa, i know this is hard and i'm very very sorry to hear about your mother but you have to face it unless.....

Kripa(turning to face him): unless what?

ANgad: unless you're scared cuz then i have to call you a scaredy cat and all of my friends are brave.

Kripa: you...you....you!!!!!!!! ughh...dont talk to me anymore.

Kripa throws the pillow she was holding at him. ANgad laughs as he thinks she's adorable when she's mad and he also is trying to cheer her up which so far isnt going well.😕

hope you liked it. well i guess i'll continue tomorrow or maybe the day after depending on your feedback....hope it wasnt boring.

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Posted: 19 years ago
its great I hope Kripa agrees to accept her dad 😊

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