Pehla Pyar-- Angad+Kripa & Dk+Disha - Page 10

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Posted: 19 years ago
#91
From Kajal..........


guys i am so sorry but today i won't be home since i will be too busy going to a party

i know i havent continued in a very long time but there have been many things going on that i seem very very over-whelemed so i promise to continue when i am a little more relaxed and at ease. thanks for understanding.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#92
thanks guli jaanu for the info. 😃
kajal have fun at the party 😉 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#93
hope u have fun at the party 😛

enjoy!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#94
finally caught up!

********phew*******


awesome parts...loved the way u wrote Gayatri's death!!👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#95
come onn plzzzzzzzzz post the newt part 😭 😭 😭
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Posted: 19 years ago
#96
She will.... once she has the time!

jaanu where are you?! 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
#97
The three sis awakened to find themselves by their bleoved dead mother's body. Kripa was so numb with pain that she didnt have the heart to even shed one tear. Disha was still crying and her eyes were bright red. Aliya was in Disha's lap, wiping their tears together.

Disha wiped her tears and stood up.

Disha(stuttering): Im going to go call the morgue.

Kripa looked up in amazement. Aliya's tears dripped faster down her left cheek.

Kripa: di...abb...

Disha: yes, Kripa. We'll noitfy them and they will take maa after the last rites.

Kripa bursts into tear for the first time since they found their mother dead.

Aliya quickly hugged her and cried at the same time.

After Disha called, everyone went into their own rooms and changed.

Disha quickly called her closets relatives and then went outside to go call another person.

All of the people that were called promptly arrived and everyone was seated downstairs dressed in white.

Priest: we need to start soon.

Disha: sirf ek minute...Kripa

Kripa came down the stairs with her head down and dressed in a white embroidered salwar kameez.

The priest started the last rites and in no time they were over and the priest stood up.

Priest: Where is the son of this family?

Disha: there is no son but Im good as any son. Please tell me.

Priest told her what she had to do they completed it.

The city morgue soon came and took the body away to be cremated. The ashes would be returned to the family of the three sisters.

It was night soon or later.

Kripa, Aliya or Disha hadn't said a word or eaten anything for almost two days. Disha finally spoke.

Disha: we have to be strong and only because mamma's body isnt here, that doesnt mean her soul left us.

Kripa: lekin....

Aliya stood up and left the room and returned with a dish in her hand. It had a full dinner on it.

Disha eyed it and then gave a questioning look to her.

Kripa: yeh...

Aliya sat at Disha and Kripa's feet and gave them a pleading look.

Aliya: you guys havent eaten since last night. Don't let your health in a bad condition. App ko meri kasam

Disha started crying, touched at Aliya's concerns. She hugged her and Kripa and they had a group hug.
Kripa: I really don't want to eat.

Disha: you have to You call me your older sis so that means that you have to listen to me.

Kripa gave her a weak challenge.

They all ate, occasionally feeding one another and wiping each other's tears.

Soon they all lay awake on their bed and eventually cried themselves to bed.
Next Morning:

Disha was laying awake in bed.

Disha(thinking to herself): now I have to take care of them and mamma I promise you I will do my best to always keep them happy and safe. Now I must reveal the secret I have been keeping for so long.

Aliya opens her eyes and lays awake for a few minutes.

Aliya(thinking to herself): Mamma, I promise you that I will help Kripa and Disha didi in every possible way I can. I wish you here with me.

Kripa is awake and in the bathroom washing her face.

Kripa(thinking to herself): Didi has so much responsibility right now that it's my duty to take care of Aliya..

All three of them get dressed and meet each other downstairs.

Disha is pacing back and forth. She has her head down.

Kripa: what's wrong? What happened?

Disha looks up.
Aliya: di, tell us.

Disha: I have something very important to tell you and you have to listen to me carefully.

Aliya: what is it?

Disha takes a deep breath and her eyes get watery.

Disha:I....er....we......

Aliya's cellphone rings and disha and kripa look at her. Aliya is amazed.

i am extremely sorry for the very long delay! 😕
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Posted: 19 years ago
#98
u just had to stop there!!!!...



that was sad!!


please cont soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#99
just caught up with the fanfic and its mindblowing 👏 👏 .
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Posted: 19 years ago
thanks guys! look, i havent been on i-f since like a week so this weekend i have to catch up reading all of the fanfics i used to read and all of the forums i went on so another update has a very slight chance of happening!

but guess what? i will make up for it next week where updates will come so fast u wont have time to catch up! lol.....kajal

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