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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome FF... but dat man is paralysed:( so sad interesting plzz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82
interesting concept...geet cannot talk...,maan is paralyzed...they are not rich to pay for expenses...what is going to happen...
waiting eagerly to see what you have for us
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Chapter 4

Doctor came near to that Man's Bed...Till now both Rahul n Geet were lookin at doctor ...what he gonna say next ?...Doctor checked that Man..who was not more than a dead body .Jst difference that made him a living being that was his heart beat.Even his breath was rented now (oxygen mask )...Dr took a deep breath...Both of them noticed something was wrong ..which doctor gonna say

Rahul: Dr any thing ..in this man which can show…he ll survive as normal..

Geet looked at Rahul first n after that toward doctor with wide open eyes...Waiting for doctor to say.

Dr: No Mr Rahul..I think nothing gonna happen...Even if u wanna shift him to a hospital having advance treatment..nothin gonna happen..wahan bhi inki physical injuries ka treatment ho sakta hai.Inke nerves system per kaffi asar padda hai..n I don think that any specialist gonna take chance with him…I mean any type of surgery...He is not in that condition. (he cleared)

Geet took out her slate n start to write on it.Till now doctor had judged she couldn't speak.So he was also waiting for what she gonna say.

Geet (wrote): Per doctor saab…what we should do now …what's ur opinion (she showed to doctor)

Dr: dekhiye Madam…we can wait ..for some time..so that he can b normal..I mean can breath normally.Bhagwaan ka shukkar hai..inki backbone theek hai….Per there is a blood clot in his head.

Rahul:What doctor …to kya usse inki jaan ko khatra to nahi? (shocked)

Dr: Mr Rahul…that blood clot is due to a internal injury. Jis...se internal bleeding hue…bleeding to rukk gayi..But blocked his nerves. That's why his mind is not sporting his body…ho sakta hai woh blodd clot nikal jaye…or yeh theek ho jaye…warna its impossible...(nodded his head)

Geet( wrote) : Dr iska aab koi ilaaz nahi ho sakta ?

Dr: Madam…famous neuro surgeon Dr. Khanna is here..He is my relative…yahan aaye hue hai mujhe se milne…n When I was checkin his reports... Dr Khanna also discussed it wth me….He is checkin in my cabin…Main aa gaya inko dekhne..he is also commin in few minutes to examine him

Dr Khanna came…He examined patient.He also gav same verdict...That blood clot was responsible for his condition.That was not dangerous for his lif...But that was also responsible for his this condition.Means If that blood clot remained it not gonna harm him …But that blood clot blocked his system….n he was in this condition.N it was not possible to go for surgery.Dr Khanna preformed some more tests ...n sent it to other fellow specialists n surgeons.He cost nothing for these tests a he was a known social worker also.After understanding whole situation….he ensured Geet to help.

Rahul phoned his boss ..n asked for leave.First his boss was too angry. But after this he sanctioned two days leave.Monday n Tuesday.

Rahul : Geet mujhe abhi jaana hoga…humko police main report kar deni chahea….( was ready for report)

Geet( wrote on slate) : Nahi Rahul….we can't ..patta nahi kis halat main yeh yahan pahunch gaye..kissi ne inko intentionally to maarne ki koshis to nahi ki..agar aisa hua to inki jaan ko fir se khatra ho sakta hai..Police investigate karegi..aur in per agar kissi ne attack kiya unko patta chal jayega…( she also nodded her head ) lik wanna say that he should understand .


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Posted: 13 years ago
#84

Same part


Rahul: Per Geet ..hum kaab takk yahan inki dekh bhaal karegay…Aab yeh mat kehna …Main maidaan (ground) shod k bhag rahha hu..But its true we r very common people…jinka mushkil se gujaara hota hai…kitne din Dr Khanna jaise log help karegay..kitne din hum yahan rehegay….( he was rite at his thinkin)

Geet looked at him shocked surprised n tears came down on her cheeks.

Rahul: Geet aab rona mat jo sach hai wahi sach hai…I m a male…bahar reh sakta hu..what bout u…log baatay karegay…tumhari itni ijzat hai puray gayon(village) main he nahi aas paas sabh jagah yahan taak log tumko jante hai...Izaat banaanay main saalon lag jaatay hai..per jaane main ek pal nahi lagta.

Geet: Rahul u wanna leave ..U can..not me….U asked how much days…I Say till he needs…I can't leave him as such….He can't speak..But what he thinks...kitni muskhil main hai ..woh..woh he janta hai..Or jast me…( she wrote in slate n showd him in anger )

Rahul : Tum Geet …


Geet: Ya me….I lost everything years back ..n I can understand..what his condition is..He has lost everything…

Rahul: Geet kya karna chahti ho tum..

Geet: I gonna b on his side…till he wants…in any condition…( she hit floor )

Rano also came there with some things in her hand.She was listening to them .

Rano : Geet tum pagal to nahi ho gayi ( she busted)

Geet: Nahi Maa…I think I have no need to make u understand...( she looked her...in Rano's eyes lik what she said Rano got that )

Rano was aware what Geet said.So she was not able to go against her daughter.Rahul went back home…n he was comin late in the evening... Rano gav Geet cloths ..brush soap..so that she can change..But water was not hot..so she had to shiver….But an unknown felling was forcing her to do so…She asked her mother to talk to her boss in apple juice factory…so to sanction her leave for few days…She never skipped her duty from many years…so she got leave..but not more than six days.

Geet sent Rano back home when Rahul came…He was willing to b with her…But she knew her mother had other works also….the order for Mona's wedding...Unwillingly Rano went back Geet's this decision gav back response to her…When within three days whole village who loved Geet few days back..had started to gossip.But Geet had no effect…coz She was rite….

After four days doctor cleared ..unnamed patient not gonna hav any progress.But he was out of danger..so he could b discharged…But where he could b taken…Nobody knew who he was..Even from last five days no body asked about his wheresabout.

After four days / Thursday

Geet was sittin next to that patient trying to put juice in his mouth..But no effect.when nurse came.

Nurse: Madam yeh apke patient ka saaman hai …apko denna bhul gaye thay..aur yeh 2 rings hai..aur ek bracelet..inka baaki saara saamaan to gir gaya hoga yeh inke hath main hone ki wajah se bach gaya

Geet looked with surprising way takin things from nurse.She(nurse) left room after that.Geet looked at his cloths in bad condition ..Two rings one plane gold ring ..n one having stone in that..n bracelet there was something writthen on it.

Geet read that might b his name.'Maan'

Precap : Geet decided to sold her precious jewellery n to bring Maan her home.


So I thing now cleared this poor guy is Maan...u lik this or not..comment so that I keep on moving...

keep it in mind to lik n comment


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Edited by Jass.KN - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

geet is really being nice to him

i was wondering, he must b able to know what is happening around him, or not?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
O my god. . Wonderful part.
Love pricap. . Geet wil bring maan. . . Wow . .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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osum part geet such me nice behave kiya. . .
Precap me she realy sold. . And bing maan back. . Wow. .
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Posted: 13 years ago
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osum part geet such me nice behave kiya. . . [

Thank u deari n akki tareeb u likd
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Posted: 13 years ago
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