THE MISSION- pg.37 ..6/26 LAST PART!!!!! - Page 6

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Posted: 19 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: griffinmonster

👏 really good
write more long parts
kya karen yeh DIL MAANGE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ill try to wrire longer parts but t takes such a long time and me is just lazy😛 anyways ill try

luv himani

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Posted: 19 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: kriti_6teen

i love the mystery u have created. 👏

there is a bigger mystry ahead😉

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Posted: 19 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: muqualp

himani plz cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok muqualb😃 im typing it up wright now😉

luv himani

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Posted: 19 years ago
#54
cmon himani! i luv r fan fic! cont. soon!
luv,
prakriti 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#55

hey guyz
the next part is gonna b after the war so at this point THE MISSION has already gone to war and is on its way back.[i didnt want to spend too much time on the war] it was very successfull they fired the first shot and they didnt loose that many people..👏👏 also the THE MISSION has a some nucluer weapons and misiles left over..

luv himani 😃

Edited by Sour Skittles - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#56

part 5

recap-

** angad overhears some1 talkin about sum weapons and destroying THE MISSION

** kripa gets a job at the bose company

** priaya and karan decide to call kripaand tell her to pretend to be doin a mbbs

It was angad that heard the convorstion he was still shocked but he was not able to see who was talking.. he was taking food for the captain so as soon as he went into the captains cabin he was about to tell the captain his overheard conversation when prithvi walked in
"My my what do we hav here the lowly chef bringing the captain his food.. captain dillip don't eati t its contaminated with angad germs"
" prithvi uuuuuuuuu."
" both of u shut up don't u know how to act in front of the captain"
"sorry captain but luitenent prithvi actually thinks hez smarter than me … I mean at least im not insane u know liken some PEOPLE"
angad really hit the spot there prithvi just flared up and was about to punch angad in the face when angad blocks it with a strong for arm block. ( he he i used to do taekwondo)
Before it could it could get any worse dilllip told angad thanks for n the food and told him to go out
"What prithvi I don't expect this kind of behaviour frolm my luuitents!"
"Sorry captain but hate angad sooooo much why do you even eat the food he cooks ??"
"U know hes an awesome cook😉 but anyways common we hav to go discuss the problem of our weapons……. "
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
"kripa ur first assignment is to perform ON THE MISSION for captain dillips party"
"uh whats THE MISSION and whoz captain dillip?😕"
"jezz kripa do u like never wach the newz"
"uh noo itz so borin!!!🤢"
"well THE MISSION is our navy ship that fired the first shot in the war and they are on theirway back..thay r havin a part for the captain and hav asked us to pwerform"
"ooooh that's soooooo hot to perform on a boat naina aunt ur the best!!🤗
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" kripa pick up the phone 😳"
"hello?"
"hi kripa its priya"
"hi di I miss u so much guss what I got a job at the bose company and even got my first assignment"
"that's gr8 kripa!!!"
"I know tell em whatds up at ur end howz mom and dad😔 Whatya tell um about my running away ?"
"Actually thatswhy I called ok it hard for me to tell u this umm.."
"Di whats is it ur scarIn me😕"
"Ok itoldu,mur doingurmbbs"
"What??? speak slowly cant understand u"
"Itold mom and dad that ur doing iur mbbs😳"
"What!!!!!!!!!! how could you do that di now what anm I gonna do?😭 "
"I know kripa am really sorry didn't know what to say so just said whatever came to mind..."
"Now what ur gonna tell the truth rght?"
"R u mad kripa!! do u know what mom and dad would do if they found out i was lying to them... theyre so happy right now.. "
"K didi do u have any more bright ideas then😡"
"Well I was thinking if u could just pretend that ur doing ur mbbs"
"Wht😡 u know I don't lie to mom and dad about anything right even when do sumethin they don't like"
"But kripa to save my skin ull hav to do it ...theres no other way"
"K fine but what if they want ot visit me at my college"
"Just tel them u have vacation goin on and uv takin an apartment"
"God plz help me😕 k di ill do this but only for u cuz I know what will happen if mom and dad fpund out thirr perfect daughter priya waz lying.. bte this couldn't hav been ur idea so spill it whoz idea waz it😛"
"Um.. karans"
"Ha knew it only he can b sooooo stupid I am soo glad im not there for ur wedding or else I would hav dided seeing my only sister b mary a retard😉 "
"Kripa 😡😡"
"Jk di luv ya gotta go"
"K bye luv ya too karan says bye "
"Bye yall"

i forgot to tell you that naina is prithvi mom and prithvi owns the bose company.😉 hope you liekd this part

luv himani

Edited by Sour Skittles - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: prakriti

cmon himani! i luv r fan fic! cont. soon!
luv,
prakriti 😊

i continued😉 im soo good😆😆 but the part is boring🤢

luv himani

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Posted: 19 years ago
#58
aawesome part! I really luved it! Cont soon!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#59

PROMO
HEY MR.PRESIDENT WEREE CONTROLIN THE MISSION RIGHT NOW CAN U DO ANYTHING ABOUT IT..........NO u cant!!!!!!!!!!!!
well blow anyone who cums 3 miles near this ship

Edited by Sour Skittles - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: amneetkaur_24

aawesome part! I really luved it! Cont soon!

thankuuuuuuuuuuu😃

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