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Posted: 13 years ago
thank u muski... me will surely make my ocmments about every update... i still need to comment on 4 parts... just that net wasnt working properly since last night ...every time i typed and i clicked post, the net got disconnected and the comment also got lost coz of that... but now me typing all comments in word pad and posting her... thank god...
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Posted: 13 years ago
jaldi plzzz
intezar nahi hota yaar...
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting!!!!! 😃
Edited by thea_angely - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update
4 parts was just awesume
pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
dad fighting for his wud be daughter in law and maan for his wud be wife 😆 ...awesome updates ... idiot first he needs to sort our things with prachi ...OMG !!! how much i loved it how he was bothered ...thinking Geet is sidetracking when she said ur personal matter ...❤️


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Posted: 13 years ago
maan u r so adorable
cant stop falling in love with u :)
nice update
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Posted: 13 years ago
Maan is so sweet... aur uska gussa...😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
diii waitng waitng😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
Keeping my promise before ur next update...
here r my comments
Part 77
Yash is sooo sweet...he really feels that Geet is his little princess the daughter he always wanted... Yash khurana wants to kill Geet's frnd's BF who has made Geet so quiet and stressed... dad aap apne hi bete ko maarna chahate ho?? bechara Maan he has no idea his dad is so protective bout his geet... lolz...

loved the way Yash was worrying for geet and wanted to make sure that she ate something and did not end up sleeping empty stomach...
OMG Yash cant think that Geet can have BF.. he thinks of her like such an obedient gal while maan has such opposite impression bout geet.. maan beta apne dad se kuch seekho...
Warning to never ever keep her fone off... wow... over protective dad... ufff...
Maan beta be bothered about who ur dad is talking to and on whom he is shouting for keeping fone off... u r gonna b in trouble later mister for keep Yash's lil princess in stress...
Bechari Geet... she cant separate maan from her and thinks he hates her coz thats what he proclaims but she has seen something else in his eyes but is scared of what he says... hmm.. poor gal... Talk with prachi.. thank god neither prachi nor geet spoke bout what happened...
Geet cursing herself for being rude to maan.. aing... Geet u werent rude to him dear... he deserved it...bechari geet baby missing her puchki... haaye..
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Posted: 13 years ago
yash ' I can't see her tears
Maan retorted in a tone that was in par with his ' neither can I
yash ' I guess I don't have anything much to say then.
Yash sighed .. feeling little confident abt this boy, though he was really worried for her knowing how mush she keeps her feelings to herself. .
After the call Maan didn't give her the phone back. Switched it off & kept it away.
Aap aisen nahi karo, sir bahut paresan hojathen hain. Us din bhi bahut dant padi thi
he didn't even bother listening to her.. & slipped the phone into his denim pocket. She kept looking at his audacity that was going beyond her tolerance now. She just slipped her hand inside his pocket to reach her phone. He held her wrist at once.. screaming in utter shock kya kar rahi ho
mera phone
wo tumhara phone nahi hain
she immediately pulled out her hand in shock ' though she was quiet sure it was her phone.. but the way he reacted she really got confused... he laughed holding his stomach.. she frowned at him.. for making a fool out of her.. worst she even got tricked
aap mera phone do.. she reached again.. he got up & ran .. she chased him. He turned into the park.. she didn't stop.. managed to chase him there too... he teased her showing the phone & again putting in his pocket..
she cutely frowned & ran behind him... he got tired & sat on the grass, panting... he saw her trying to catch up.. he smiled & dropped his head on the grass, laughing
she sat next to him panting.. still trying to reach his pocket for the phone.
He held her hand.. plzz Geet stop...
nahi.. mujhe mera phone do.. she slipped her hand
he got up at once & pinned her on ground, both were panting, she tried to kick & wiggle..
stop.. stop..stop.. stop... he inched closer & closer on top of her holding her hand on either side
she stared at him & at his eyes
I don't know wat u do to me he said it ever so sensuously, in a husky panting voice.
She gulped her saliva, gaping at him.. his breath heavy warm & rough falling on her. She curled her legs feeling the sheer male sexual dominance.
He had done it so many time before taking in those lips..sealing the distance..here he was tempted.. tantalized beyond him to, her lips.. soft.. he exactly know how much it drives him insane, he looked at her once before into those almond eyes, that had those many questions.. the answers he didn't have..he couldn't not in his sense.. not when he knew wat it meant to claim her, not when it was not just an out burst of anger.. this was more.. more than all that.. something deeper..something more he wanted... he couldn't have satisfied just kissing them... he desired more, more than he could ever ask her..more than she could ever give!!!!

he leaned closer.. she closed her eyes tight holding her breath.. he smiled sweetly.. & placed a soft peck on her forehead. She sighed .. though her heart was beating faster & faster.. like she was expecting much more than.. or was she longing. A thin line where she stood her heart didn't know herself. He released her hand at once & laid next to her crossing his hand looking up at the sky. Unsure why he wanted her like the way he wants her. He shook his head grinning at his own extreme urge.

She cutely moved her petite body away from him. He looked at her from corner of his eyes grinning.. she tried to be so slow & smart to sneak her hand to reach the phone that was edging out of his denim pocket. He let her take it... & simply put his arm around her waist pulling her closer. She sat up at once. He moved his head to her lap.. & crossed his arms, that only reminded them of their first kiss. She didn't say anything. Sat their uncomfortably.
I need to go
where?
How does that matter to u?

Who else it matters to... oh yah.. ur boss!!! karan!!..that frd of urs armaan
her face became really small, hurt..sad & she looked away. Why was she feeling so hurt when he said all that.. she knew he was just teasing her. Why she was not able to bear it when he did.
Jab ki puri duniya manti hain.. she probably slept with karan.. why it hurt so so much when he says the same thing
why why!!!
she just leaves from there without saying a word.. he tried to garb her hand but she was too fast for him now.
He smirked & laid back on the ground relishing the moment that was so special, wondering wat was that all abt.

Next day was sunday. Maan had no clue abt geets schedule or house, or even office.. all he had was number... he looked at her number .. punched it in.. & then left it. he was not that running behind girls types (excuseme.. wat was that chasing the bus all abt then.. muskan pulling her hair)
He called prachi & met up with her in the mall. They went for a movie & came out laughing when he saw Daadi standing with Karan & visal.
Karan & Visal had just accidentally met Daadi at the mall, so they were just saying a normal hi.. bye discussion.
The moment karan saw Maan & prachi together.. we had that wickedest of smirk.. & screamed out.. yehlo Daadi.. yeh rahen love birds
Daadi turned to look at the direction & then was shocked to see Maan with some girl. Daadi scanned her top to bottom couple of time. Daadi was taken a bit back.. she was definitely not maans types.. she was not even wearing a jeans let alone micro minis.. Daadi gave one of those questioning looks to Maan which he alone knew wat it meant.

Daadi did expect him to have GF... sorry Gfs.. but not like her.. god she is so .. wat to say .. forget it .. she can't explain it.. not that she is not good looking.. not that she is dressed well.. actually too decent. Daadi shook her head couple of times to make sure .. & to come in terms with the fact that this was her atangvadi pota only.
precap
for those who ever missing our tough Geet
boy Maan ur in for a big trouble
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thanks for the lovely comments & likes
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 13 years ago

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