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Posted: 13 years ago

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part 21
lovely part...
cont soon...


thanku dear... 😊
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thanku dear... 😊
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Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet

loved it

maaneet romance was awesome


thanku dear.. 😊
glad u liked it...
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thanku dear... 😊
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thanku rekha.. 😊
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Originally posted by: Rupal

Awesome part...Good job.


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thanku annie... 😊
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replied to all ur comments. plz do check.. 😃😊 chapter 22:


maan n geet enjoyed their first date in the beach. When they r returning to hotep geet fell asleep in the car. When they reached hotel maan took geet in his arms n headed towards her room. He opened the door n made her sleep on the bed n tugged the blanket. He switched off the lights n kissed her on her forehead n told

good night mishty.

Geet smiled in her sleep feeling his touch.

Maan smiled at her innocence n went to his room. He changed in his vests n pants n slept peacefully.


This is one of the most peaceful sleep in their lives. A smile on their face, feeling each other in their dreams. From next day the new beginning with their new relationship.


Next day morning:


geet slowly stirred n opened her eyes. A smile crept on her lips thinking about previous day's night.

I love u maan told geet closing her eyes.

I love u too jaan whispered maan in her ears.

Geet opened her eyes n saw maan looking at her lovingly. Geet too smiled at him but immediately frowned.

Maan tum yaha. Nahi nahi main yaha kaise ayi hu. Hum tho beach mein the na.

Maan lied beside geet n hold her tightly by her waist n told

tum kal waha so gayi thi. Tho main le aayi thi tumko.

oh.. par tum yaha kaise ayi ho. Door tho locked hain aur keys bhi mere paas the.

Jaan kitne sawal poochti ho tum.

Geet pouted n maan chuckled n kissed her cheeks.

Awww jaan suno we came to ur room from my room. They both r connected darling.

Geet's jaw dropped listening to this.

Matlab u took connected room. Tum na besharam ban gaye ho. Koi ladki ke room mein aisa ata hain kya?

Hmm ab meri jaan se milne ke liye mujhe sharam kyun? Bolo?

Geet blushed for this n about to get up maan held her wrist n brought her on top of him.

Maan yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?

I am giving morning kiss to my mishty.

Maan placed his lips on hers. Both r lost in each others touch. Geet encircled her hands around his neck pulling him close. Maan placed his hands on her bare waist. She is still wearing that saree.

Geet opened her mouch allowing maan to enter. Maan entered her mouth n kissing her madly playing with her tongue.

Geet moaned maaan.

They r kissing madly. Their tongues r playing with each others. Maan's hand is roaming on her bare back inhaling her sweet scent. Geet feeling tickling sensation n giggling n lost in his scent n breathing heavily. After the long kiss they broked due to lack of breath. Both r breathing heavily. After their breathing became normal Maan brought her more close n whispered

good morning jaan.

Geet is blushing furiously. She is not able to face him so got up n ran to the washroom.

Maan smiled at his mishty n he too left to his room to freshen up.

Geet stood under the shower still blushing thinking about the kiss. The warm water is relaxing her senses. She is feeling his scent all over her. After a long bath she came out wearing bathrobe. She is looking at her clothes what to wear suddenly her eyes caught a packet which is on the bed.

She took the cover n opened it. A smile formed her lips. There is a cute light green colour top n jeans. Yes maan knows that she loves to wear jeans rather than suits.

Thanku maan.

She got ready n wore a small matching ear rings. She put pink colour lip gloss n no make up. Without makeup only she is looking like an angel. She wore the green colour single bangle n put her favorite watch on.

She got ready n came out of the room. She knocked maan's door. Knock knock.

Come in mishty told maan.

Geet smiled n went in to his room.

He just came out of his shower n wore his jeans. His upper part is bare geet is just staring at him rather say drolling over him. Maan saw this n smirked.

She was lost in him. Maan came near her n whispered

is ur drolling session completed?

Geet came to her senses n kept her head low feeling all shy.

wo.. wo.. ma.. stammered geet.

Bolo jaan I am listening.

Umm,... nothing u get ready told geet avoiding his question n turned back to leave.

But maan is too fast he held her wrist n pulled her towards him. She slammed on his hard chest. She kept her hands on his bare chest n his hands on her waist.

Geet hugged him tight n maan too hugged her tight.

Bolo jaan.

He removed his hands fron her waist.

Maan plzz leave me na.

Maine kaha pakda tumko told maan.

Geet broke the hug still her hands on his chest n realised that she is hugging him tight.

Geet turned crimson red in embarrassment n ran out of the room as fast as poosible.

Maan smiled at geet seeing his effect on her n he too got ready.

He too got ready other wise his mishty who is blushing now will be in angry avatar if he is late.

Maan came out n saw her waiting outside. Maan hugged her from back n asked

chalein?

Geet simply nodded. He broke the hug n they both went for breakfast hand in hand.

When they both reached the restaurant they saw sudha,yash, chinna n krishna r waiting for them.

Good morning guys wished maan.

God.. aap log itne der kyun kardi asked di.

Geet is blushing remembering morning's incident. wo..wo... fumbled geet.

um.. bolo geet teased di.

Kuch nahi di breakfast karte hain told geet.

Others smiled at her n went inside. They all ordered their breakfast.

Geet where did u go yesterday all of a sudden. We were waiting for u for dinner asked di innocently.

wo.. di.. ma.. main...

seeing her condition all others started laughing.

Geet didnt understand why they all r laughing. But when she saw maan he was also smiling seeing condition. Now she understood that all know about this. Geet pouted for this n asked

jab aap sab ko pata tha muje kyun tang kar rahe ho aap sab.

Arey saali ji aap tho bura maan gaye. Humne kaha tha na we will also get chance to teaseu said yash.

Diii pleaded geet.

Sorry geet I am with yash now. Its our chance to tease u darling.

Geet made a sad face n looked at maan n then to krishna n then to karthik. But karthik looked at other side.

Oyyy jiju n di chup, kyun meri behen ko tang kar rahe ho aap log asked krishna.

Geet smiled n told thanku bhai.

Waise geet, maan ka surprise kaisa tha asked krishna.

Maan ka surprise bohot bohot ac... then she realised that even krishna is also teasing her.

Bhai aap bhi told geet.

Karthik tum bhi mere saath nahi ho asked geet innocently.

Karthik is melting seeing her innocent face but he too want to play along.

Geet tum dono mujse baat na kare tho hi acha hain told karthik.

Kya hua chinna asked geet innocently.

Kya hua? Tum bhi mujse baat chupane lagi told chinna.

Maine kya kiya?

Tum tho mujhe bataya bhi nahi ki tum bro se pyaar karti ho told karthik innocently.

Geet blushed hearing this.

Aisa nahi hain told geet.

Kya?? tum mujse pyaar nahi karti asked maan.

Nahi nahi I love u told geet immediately thinking that maan misunderstood her.

All the other shouted

ohhh...

geet realised what she said n her cheeks turned red.

I love u too geet told maan.

Geet I was just kidding yaar I am very happy for u n bro. Bhabhi told chinna.

Maan hugged geet sideways n told to others

arey yaar y u all r teasing her like that.

Oho... abhi se uski side told krishna.

Sudha di got up n hugged geet n kissed her forehead n asked

tum khush ho na?

Ha di main bohot khush hu told geet.

Look Mr. khurana take care of my sister agar wo muje ek bhi complaint di na. Tho tumara khair nahi warned di.

Maan bowed n told ji Ms. Handa I mean would be Mrs. malhotra.

All laughted whole heartedly.

Karthik hugged maan n geet n told

I am very happy for u both. But I am angry on u for not telling me.

Sorry yaar we planned unexpectedly so time nahi mila told maan.

Its ok bro but main aapko ek baat kehna chata hu. U should not scold me mainly u geet told karthik.

Kya hain chinna asked geet.

Not now delhi jaane se pehle li batata hu told karthik.

Ok as u wish told geet.

Karthik turned back n winked at di n krishna.

They both understood what he is going to tell. They both too winked at him n mouthed all the best.

After that they all had their breakfast enjoying, pulling each others leg. But maan n geet are stealing glances every now n then. As maan is sitting beside geet he caught her left hand. Geet is shocked with his sudden action. Geet made a baby face n looked at him.

But he didnt care her n continued eating. He saw geet is not eating.

Geet y u r not eating asked maan innocently.

Geet just glared at him angrily. All turned towards her.

Geet tumari tabiyat tho thik hain na asked chinna.

Ha chinna I am fine told geet.

Then y u r not eating asked yash.

Nothing jiju told geet.

Geet is pleading maan to leave her hand. But maan is maan. Finally with no other option geet pinched maan's hand.

Maan shoued ouch...

geet freed her hand n asked kya hua maan.?

Maan glared at her n told kuch nahi geet thoda mirchi lagi hain.

oh... n she gave him water n smirked.

But maan gave her u-will-get-punishment-for-this look.

Geet too gave we-will-see look.

After breakfast yash asked so guys what r the plans for today.

Both di n geet shouted movie.

Arey yaar what movie we will go somewhere else told maan.

Thik hain tho hamare saath shopping chalo told di.

Nahi di movie is a very good idea chalo chaltein hain told maan.

All others laughted at maan seeing his frightened expression when they mentioned about shopping.

Geet n di started walking ahead boys r just following them. They all took one car n headed towards movie theatre.


Precap: girls: bolly movie.

Boys: horror movie.

Who will wn girls ya boys. 😉😆


Hii friends here is part 22. hope u all like it. Plz hit LIKE button n do COMMENT.

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guys i will be busy in this week so next update will be after 12th. but wanna update any one ff tomorrow so tell me which one do u want.

kya mujhe pyaar hain (or) do i deserve ur love (or) distance brings us closer. plzz tell me.


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Edited by jyothikrish - 13 years ago
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