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Originally posted by: alice54

hey i happened to see your ffwhen i wasopening something else and happy that it happened😊

beautiful start!!!!

It was a bit tough to imagine Aakash so frank and they are in an embrace😲...

hope i will get used to it...

plz PM me for your next update...

Originally posted by: sugar_babe

Really liked this, please do PM me when you update =)

Originally posted by: simplynanna

Refreshing to read a different story line😊Thoroughly enjoyed everybit of it.

Love how Akash's become all bold and confident and AMAZING 😍

Aur Arnav, I smell something burning😉

Cant wait to read more. Please PM me when you update next❤️

And yeah, loved the desciptions you've used. You are a natural🤗

Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt

Hallo tes_v1, 😃 Hey Annie!
Got the opportunity to reply to your new FF. Actually last when I checked, the page didn't open, so sorry for the late reply! Oh! My bad! I should've checked it.
Back to the story..
Well, Well!! 😛That is a good start! I like it! Hmm...Arnav and his business brain, 🤢while Khushi and her Love...Some combination! Thanks! That combination is gonna create some story! ;)
Let's see who wins! And Aakash is in a totally different form! It is amazing to see him in such an avatar! 😲😆😉 His avatar is gonna keep surprising you with his every appaerance! ;)

My god! He likes Khushi? Heheheh...😆...Would love to see Arnav seething in anger, when he sees Khushi in his brother's arms! 😉 Boy! There's no limit to what's gonna happen to him! 🤣
I guess, it's just an attraction for Aakash...and this is a lovely step to bring Arnav on track...! I think, there is Arnav's POV left to be revealed right? I mean about the college days. what it is for Aakash, only time will tell. But yes, it is gonna have a drastic effect on Arnav, hopefully!
Way to go, pal! 👏👏Love it![/DIV] Thanks again!

Waiting for the next update(s)!

RegardsAnnie 😃⭐️

Cheers!

Originally posted by: immayurfan

Nice

Please pm me when you updatE

Originally posted by: Pearl_mystic

Awesome!!!!!!! Nice to see them working together!!!

Please add me to ur pm list... Waiting eagerly for the neat part..

Originally posted by: Aahanaxx11

wow i love this story!

Please do add me to your PM list.

Waiting for the next part to be up.

Originally posted by: tes_v1

Thanks Aahana! It should be up by tonight! :)

Originally posted by: Smileyface

tiaaa!!!

finally found it =D

ur PM had the link but it didn't work...so i was like i shall get to it soon by stalking her once i get some time hahah!

Hershiii! 😆
Oh, I'm glad you did! My bad! I should've checked the link first. Oh, I don't mind being stalked. Hehehe...

ok to the story

omg i love it!!!!

Thank you!

this is totally diff from the show and i like that haha!

Oh yes! It is! And I'm Glad you're loving it. :)

AKASH AND KHUSHI?!?!?

Unbelievable, eh?

no wayyy!!!

For Arnav, yes way! 😆

Akash as a player?! i can totally see that haha! though i think he is absolutely adorable in the show!

Yes he is! And I thought let's utilise his cuteness against his very brother! Hahaha!

arnie baby better jump in and say he is going to marry her -__-

Oh, Arnie baby's reaction is gonna be stunning! 😆

but loving it...i really dunno why u didn't start earlier on ArHi! silly tia <33

Lack of time, babe. Nothing else.

continue sooonnn <33

Hopefully, by tonight!

xox

hershi

cheers!