NEWFF MAANEET MERE HUMSAFAR THRD 7 Upd pt69 pg127 - Page 30

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneet5

PRECAP: Everyone is worried since Geet is not talking nor responding
i hope geet jaldi tikh ho
acha piya ab samaj aaya ki tera twist track maaneet ko ore kareeb lane ka ye plan badiya lage raho we all love u

She will b alright Sailu maan's love will bring her back

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: geetsweet

awesome part...

geet ko kya hu... even iam scared...
continue soon

Don't worry she will b fine maan haina

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: goyalkalpna123

awsome parts yar and soory for late reply

but the story is taking new twists
wht will be happen next cant wait
update soon bye

Thanks dear yes the story is taking new turns but don't worry job hi hotha hai ache k liye hi hotha hai

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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting piya jaldi update du na plzzz
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks for your love and support. This time I have replied to your comments
love-Piya
PART 65

Maan enters with the first aid box as soon as Maan comes and sits besides Geet she hugs him

Geet was only reacting to Maan's touch and nothing else

The trauma of witnessing a murder had given Geet a tremendous shock but a small part of her mind still remembered Maan only Maan

Maan: Kya hua Geet tum itni ghabrayi hui kyun ho main hoon na tumhare paas toh ab fikr karne ki koi baat nahi

Geet did not speak anything but she just hugged him more closely

Maan lifted her face by holding her chin and looked directly into her eyes

Maan: Apne Maan par bharosa hai na Geet?

Geet touched Maan's face lovingly as if telling him yes I do believe u

Maan wanted to hear her voice but Geet did not utter a single word

Maan: Geet ab jab tum jaanti ho k main tumhari kitni parwah karta hoon toh tumhe bhi mera utna hi khayal rakhna chahiyena dekho tumne khud ko phir se chot pauchayi mujhe kitni takleef pauchi hogi zara socho

Geet once again made herself comfortable in his embrace as if trying to tell him that you are the most important person in my life and I can't see you in pain even in my dreams

Maan was extremely worried

In normal conditions Geet would have fought with him but now he was dying to listen to the melodious voice of his love.

Maan could never see Geet in this condition. It was becoming difficult for him to hide his pain

Dadima understood that Maan won't be able to suppress his emotions for too long

She decided to take charge of the situation

Dadima: Maan bete aap first aid box lene gaye thena aap wo le aaye?

Maan: Ji Dadima

Dadima: Laayiye wo box hume dijiye hum khud humari beti k zakhmo par malham lagayenge

Maan gives the box to Dadima

Dadima lovingly touches Geet's head

Dadima: Geet bete apna haath dhikhayiye hum medicine laga dethe hai

Geet did not react

Dev and Annie were also tensed Annie was literally on the verge of shedding her tears

Dadima tried to touch her hand but Geet just moved her hand away from her and started caressing Maan's face lovingly

Maan: Laiye Dadima medicines main laga detha hoon

Maan took the box from her and placed it in front of Geet

Maan: Geet agar tumhari izajat ho toh kya main ye medicines tumhare haatho par laga du

Saying so he placed his hand in front of her

Without a moment of hesitation Geet placed her hand in his as if assuring him that I am all yours

Maan smiled at her but Geet did not return the smile she just looked at him lovingly

Maan started nursing her wounds

He was treating her like a delicate flower and was trying his level best to sooth her pain

Dadima was worried seeing Geet's condition but at the same time she was extremely happy to see the strong bond that had developed between Maaneet

Maan: Geet maine bandage laga diya hai abjald hi ye ghav bhar jaayega

Geet rested her head on Maan's shoulder

Maan: Meri Geet ko neend aa rahi hai

Geet moved her face slightly as if replying in affirmative

Maan: Toh thik hai Geet thoda aaram kar lo apni Maan ki baat maanogina?

Geet closes her eyes in his embrace and doses off to sleep almost instantly

Everyone was just surprised to see the effect Maan has on Geet

Maan placed her carefully on their bed and started caressing her face with all his love

With each loving touch of Maan Geet's fear filled face was slowly getting relaxed

Maan was also lost in his Geet he wanted to take away all her insecurities at that very moment but he himself was in a big dilemma

He was not sure what was the actual reason behind Geet's fear but he knew that he had to do something he just couldn't afford losing Geet

She was the most precious gem of his life

Maan kissed her forehead and signaled the entire family to come out of the room

But as Maan stood up he realized that Geet was holding his hand securely even in her sleep

Maan took her hand and gently kissed it lovingly.

He moved towards her ear and whispered softly

Maan: Tumhara Maan bus tumhara hi hai aur jis cheez par sirf tumhara haq ho wo chahkar bhi tumse judaa nahi ho saktha.

Maan :Aaram kar lo Geet main tumhe chodkar kahi nahi ja raha

It seemed Geet could hear his voice even in her sleep she loosened the grip on Maan's hand

Maan covered her with the spread and once again kissed her forehead and comes out of the room

Dadima, Dev and Annie follow Maan

Living Room

Dadima: Maan bete ye sab kya hai aur Geet ye halat kaisi hui?

Maan: Geet ki iss halat ka zimedaar sirf main hoon Dadi

Dev: Ye aap kaisi baate kar rahe ho Bro?

Maan: Haan Dev meri Geet agar aaj dari hui hai toh uska zimedaar main hoon, main uske paas tab maujood nahi tha jab mujhe hona chahiye tha

Annie: Bhai aap kya kehne ki koshish kar rahe hai?

Maan: Hum Amritsar se wapis aa rahe the k ussi dauran humari car bigad gayi hasi mazak karte karte kuch der k liye meri Geet meri aakhon se dur chaligayi aur..

Dadima: Aur kya Maan?

Maan: Aur phir jab maine Geet ko dekha toh wo kuch gundo k beech mein phasi hui thi jinke haath mein haiyaar the wo Geet ko maarna chahthe the par maine aisa hone nahi diya

Annie: Par wo Geet ko kyun maarna chahte the?

Maan: ye main nahi jaanta par itna yakeen zarur hai k Geet ne kuch aisa dekh liya jo usse nahi dekhna chahiye tha

He was literally in tears

Maan: Ye sab meri wajah se hua hai agar main Geet k saath hotha toh aaj uski ye haalat nahi hothi

Dadima: Maan apne aap ko samhaliye iss waqt Geet ko aapki zarurat hai aapne dekha nahi aapki ek aahat par bhi wo kaise react kar rahi thi hum sab ko toh wo jaise bhool hi chuki hai iss waqt aap hi ko unka saath dena hai ek bus aap hi ho jo unhe iss sadme se bahar la sakthe ho

Maan: Dadima aap galat mat samajiyega par main chahtha hoon k Geet mere saath mere kamre mein rahe

Dadima: Hume aappar aur apni bachhipar pura bharosa hai Maan aur sach kahe toh aapke har faisle par hume pura yakeen hai aapko jaisa thik lage aap waise hi kijiyega

Annie: Bhai main Geet k liye kuch khana le jaathi hoon agar wo jag chuki hogi toh main usse khiladungi

Maan nods his head in approval

Annie goes to the kitchen

Maan: Dadi main outhouse jaakar aata hoon ek baar check kar lu k Geet ka koi saaman toh waha reh nahi gaya

Dadima: Ji bete

Maan goes to the outhouse

Annie enters the room with the food

Geet was holding Maan's photograph that was lying on the adjacent table and she was touching it lovingly

Annie: Hey Geet dekh main tere liye tera favourite khana laayi hoon taste kar k bata kaisa bana hai

Geet was silent

Annie took a small piece near her mouth but Geet did not move she was busy admiring Maan's photograph

Here Maan got Geet's photograph in the outhouse he takes it and comes back to his room

As soon as Maan enters Geet rushed towards him and hugs him

Maan: Geet maine tumhe aaram karne ko kaha thana chalo koi baat nahi waise tumhare haath mein kya hai

He takes the photo frame from her hand

Maan: Ismein kuch kami haina Geet kuch toh missing hai chalo aaj isse complete kar dethe hai

Saying so he takes the photograph that he had found in the outhouse and puts it in the adjacent frame

Geet touches the frame gently

Maan: Ab dekho hume yaha bhi koi alag nahi kar saktha haina

Geet rested her head on Maan's shoulder

Maan : Annie ye khana chat par lekar rakh doh main Geet ko khila dunga

Annie: Ji Bhai

Annie leaves the room

Maan places the photo frame on the table and carries Geet in his arms to the terrace

Annie had already placed the food she had also arranged two chairs

Maan makes himself comfortable on a chair and places Geet on his lap

Maan: Geet ye Annie bhi pagal hai 2 chairs rakhkar chali gayi ab hum dono ko do alag alag chairs ki kya zarurat hai

Geet touched him lovingly

Maan: Geet aaj hum yahi ek saath dinner karenge tum soch rahi hogi k maine koi candle light dinner kyun arrange nahi kiya haina?

Geet just looked at him but did not say anything

Maan: Ab Geet ye candle light ki hume kya zarurat jab hum yun saath baithe ho toh charo tarah bus ek hi jazba hoga pyar ka mohabbat ka haina

She rested her head on his chest

Maan: Uss chand ko dekho Geet wo bhi humare iss khoobsurat pal ko yaadgaar banane k liye apni chandni humpar bheker raha hai kyunki wo jaanta hai ye jo lamha hum iss waqt ek saath bita rahe hai wo humari zindagi ka ek bada hi khushnuma pal hai

Geet encircled her arms around his neck

Maan: Aur ye pal hume kisi diary mein likhni ki zarurat nahi hai balki ye lamha toh hume humare dil mein kaid karna hai humesha humesha k liye

Geet was listening to him carefully

Maan: Aaj ek vaada karogi mujhse?

Geet looked into his eyes deeply

Maan: Zindagi k har uch neech mein har ache bure pal mein mera saath dogina? Kabhi bhi tumhara vishwas mujhpar se hatne nahi dogina? Bolo Geet jawab doh

Maan: (thinking) kuch toh bolo Geet kum se kum ek baar apne iss dusht danav ka naam hi le lo

Geet moved her lips towards his cheek and kissed him as if promising him that I would be with u till my last breath.

I will never leave u and regarding trust then for me my Maan is the other name of trust. I trust u blindly and I love u more than my life

Maan was trying his level best to make Geet speak but this one kiss of Geet gave him a new confidence he was now sure that he would be successful in getting his Geet back the Geet who belonged to him only to him

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Edited by piya- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

am first...hihi...after long...lol...


ok update now...geet reacting to maan's touch only...i guess ke ab maan needn't leave geet alone anymore..i mean if he will go for like a little while itself geet gonna be scared like hell... :(((...poor soul...she is still undr the trauma... :(((...but then thnkkk goodness she still remembers maan...warna i seriouslt dunno maan ka kya haal hota... :(((


she isn't even responding to dadima... :(((...i hope she comes out from her pain n trauma very soon...can't see he like this at all...


aur ab even maan is blaming himself for this state of geet...me double sad... :(((:(((...but i loved how he was addressing her as meri geet in front of all...love u for this maan...i loved how maan was being patient with her and trying to do all that he could for geet...i mean that frame part...n then dinner together...geet on his lap...and then that candle part...how they didnt need it...loved it...


but still geet didnt say a word...maan bete...zyaada hard try karna hoga...hehe...waise u told me k no kiss...but see we got one...even geet can't see us being deprived from it...hihi...


nice update pihuuu...continue soon...love u...n haan hamari geet ko jaldi se thik kardena...thik hain?????...hihi... :)))

Edited by zahra15 - 13 years ago
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Edited by payalpari - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Simply superb... awesome n outstanding part!!!!!!!!
Edited by bhanu_rekhag - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
no words dear
spell bound
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u truly shown the love bond which they share dear
waiting for the next
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Posted: 13 years ago
love the bond between maneet

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