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smithasrk

@smithasrk

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#361

i have a small request. Next time along with the update kindly make some arrangements for refreshments please

I AM THIRSTY. MY THROAT IS PARCHED😉

Loved it honey. please update soon

LOve

Smitha

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Blue Rose

@uniquebluerose

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#362

Oh...when i realised it was dream...i was like

Hell no words to say how i felt!!!! My body temperature is on all time high after reading Day 4...you can imagine what day 7 would be doing it to me...

And welll after the depressing episode in which both were totally depressed and full of tears you SS is like breeze...

Or should i say its like wet dream or those in which there is rain and i am getting wet in it and all i am feeling is more hot more hot...

as if it was rain of fire scorching my body

with these lines...

Khushi found herself looking into the intense honey coloured eyes of Arnav Singh Raizada, while he stared back at her with a triumphant and sexy smirk on his face...i was blushing

wasn't long before his warm lips descended upon her mouth like a moth to a flame, burning in their intensity

I literally swooned yaar

Well everything after that has made me breathless and probaly my feelings are almost like what Khushi must be feeling right now in your SS...

Nadia...fablous writing esp when you were you have written about how its dream and everything god...guess will go crazy

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Kinarandomness

@Kinarandomness

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#363

nice one

its already 184 likes you should post next part soon

thnx for the pm

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579908

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#364

Writing Blog in construction, all works will added there...

Edited by Lip-a-Licious - 13 years ago

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lively-piia

@lively-piia

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#365

ME FIRST...

NICE ATTEMPT...LOL CHORI PAKDI GAYI...

WHO WAS WATCHIN THEM...

CONTINUE

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#366

Great update Nadia :)

Excuse my lack of comments, I'm preparing for a major exam so I'm MIA these days :)

xoxo

Aanya

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monsi08

@monsi08

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#367

LA watching 😲
She also got the gorgeous view of shirtless Arnav 🤣
I hope she goes out of the picture in the next part so that A and K finish the task at hand peacefully 😉 😆

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jessica

@crazzygal_jenny

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#368

wow interesting yrr too good... continue soonish pleaaasssee

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sharneil92

@sharneil92

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#369

curious pair of eyes?

Anjali? i think so. 😳

hohohoho... but nice update! now i have a feeling, next chappie wont be as hot and happening as the previous ones. am i right? only the last one would end with a "bang". 🤣 excuse the pun please, but it seemed most appropriate! 😆

Edited by sharneil92 - 13 years ago