(M&G) Bandit Queen-thread 1

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Posted: 13 years ago

#371

awesome updt Simi di!
it was awesome
awww both started to hv feelings 4 each other
awww maan was hurt to see her in pain
but omg he reversed back n focused on his plan catch BQ
wah what planning mastermind maan is
so geet agreed n admitted the truth to maan!
omg hope maan doesnt inform soon to the police!
awww geets past was sweet but rich man her prob how?????
loved it
cont soon!

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582204

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Posted: 13 years ago

#372

simi we love this concept

infact this ff is becomin one of my favourites!

do continue soon

loved the update

maan is so clever 😆 'he wants his shares' loool :P

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Sara Khanna

@$ara_$hachi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

Thanks Sara!
haha nope..I am not doing any research at all on this..just going by what I have seen in movies or shows and going from there...I am not copying any scenes or anything...whatever plan comes to my head I put it down😆😆😆
will updte 2marow

i am not saying that you are coping anything
i am just pampering you & appreciating your creativity darling😳

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keenu_kk

@keenu_kk

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#374

Wow
geet trusted him
great
wtng fr next prt

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tamannA

@tamanna1391

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#375

love it i like this concept yaar

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#376

awesome update...
toh dis is maan's plan to b in deir gang...but i pray he dont do anything to dem...afterall he is policeman...n i guess somewhere love is also flourishing...
loved it...
thank u very much fr d lovely update...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt part...
continue soon plz...

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Tabinda Areeb

@t_areeb

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#377

he is planning so well ...

but geet is a smart person ...

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disha

@Conqueror212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#378

awsmmm dear...
loved it😃

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maaneet5

@maaneet5

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Posted: 13 years ago

#379

we also awaited for geet past its so paining when anyone snacth our beloved ones especially the family nice update simi maan tc of geet i like it] maan ka innertourmoul nice
Maan kept close to Geet as he worked out..she was on treadmill now, he didn't know why it pained to see her in pain..his concentration was on her hand which was bleeding...she didn't care..but why did he care? What is she to him? Why did it hurt him to see tears in her eyes? It broke his heart into million pieces why?

maan done good job

Maan; yeah I can see you are taking care of yourself quiet well...now where is the first aid kit? (Geet stands up to leave but Maan holds her hand..) I can be stubborn too...either tell me and I will let you go or we are going to be sitting here for a long time until you do decide to talk...

maan making plans to get into gang was osum

maan feeling bad

He saw how much love they have for one another and how much they care of each other...there was tinge of guilt for doing this to them for the first time..was he getting to personal? He shakes his head and focuses back on his mission..to catch the Bandit Queen...

when all 3 know maan heard the truth geet confidence i loved

maan want in gang all 3 shocked