ARHI SS/FF : The Protector - part 16,pg 131

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Anu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#441

Karat Rocks!!!!!!!! Just finished the whole 9 parts in one sitting! Ohh! Anjali knows about Khushi!😲

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Nisha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#442

Nice part

Everyone is shocked to see ARnav's panic and concern for khushi. they wonder about the bond between them but no one questions them, only daddu seems to understand that Arnav has strong feelings for khushi while she just puts up a cold front.

He even refuses to go and check on his di just to make sure that khushi is alright

Daddu does not want khushi to keep endangering her life, he wants her to learn and work as a team. Vicky and daddu seem to understand khushi's weaknesses better than her.

Its sad to hear that Sam is dead. But khushi refuses to shed any tears because he is a martya.

Arnav is shocked to see how strong she has become, holding on to a set of beliefs which are new to Arnav

Anjali is shocked to see Khushi in the hospital.

please continue soon

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Nishi

@nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#443

Originally posted by: dumas
He knew what he had signed up for ... and he faced it ... and if you ever feel sorry for him , it will be an insult to him !!! ... A soldier who fights to death never dies ,but the soldier who fights for existence never truly exists ... and He fought to death ...

words that are completely true awesome update it was very touching loved it khushi is not a team player i think she just does not want them to get her loved the update thanks for the pm now she has met anjali can't wait for what happens next

thanks a lot dumas ... am glad you liked this update ...
Its not that Khushi is not a team player , only that she doesnt truly trust anyone ... although at the max she trusts Colonel the most ...
She has just built walls around her , making her less approachable ..

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Nishi

@nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#444

Originally posted by: Zeee
omg!! poor sam. khushi feeling and enduring grief is depressing
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dont worry dear ... it wont be for long ...
You know there is a quote by F. Scott Fitzgerald. - Show me a hero and I'll write you a tragedy.
and in this FF Khushi is the Hero 😉, so I have to show slowly how she turned into what she is ... although not thoroughly depressing I hope , since I am trying to throw a generous amounts of Action - Mystery and later even Romance too 😉

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Nishi

@nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#445

Originally posted by: hararnav
absolutely loved the way u have explained the emotions between soldiers.. how they shud be brave wen they lose their partner...
khushi is so brave... ... good update

Am glad that I could do justice to the part . I have immense respect for soldiers and I have just tried my best to show their emotions during a battle .
😊

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#446

Originally posted by: moon_mine
loved it!!!!
sad that sam died!!!!
i hope nw anjali comes into the pic n let their lovestory bloom again!!!!!

thanks a lot moon_mine .
Am glad you liked the part ...

yes Sam died , he was a minor character . But as in war , there is collateral damage here too . Coz it would be unrealistic if I let everyone off unscathed .
Anjali's just seen Khushi after a span of 6 years ... so lets c her reaction in next one 😉

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Nishi

@nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: LyssaPie
I think you have a great criminal mind lol
anyways Khushis strong and we know it because she dealt with so much and now a simple pain doesn't hurt her.

Arnav needs to show her something

and uh oh Anjali and Khushi met!

lol ... me having a criminal mind ?? ... 😆😆 ... I would take that as a compliment thou ...

yes ... you r right abt Khushi ... shez dealt with soo much pain , that pain doesnt affect her at all ... in fact nothin affects her much since she has blocked out almost everything ...

n yeah ... uh oh moment is gonna come 😉

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Nishi

@nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#448

Originally posted by: sweetygirl28
Very sad update nishi.. sam died :( :( i loved the way u wrote how khushi explained arnav that he shouldnt grieve for his death and rather feel proud that he has fought and faced death by WILL..

Daddu and vicky seems to be knowing more abt khushi.. she has lost trust in everyone and has become more like a female ASR
Arnie boy is publicly displaying his concern but that doesnt cover the fact that he has once mistrusted her ( that reminds me the flashback is yet to come ;) )

Very nice update on the whole..

yeah dear ... sorry cudn keep ur request of keeping everyone alive ... Sam died ...
am glad you liked the part where Khushi asks Arnav not to feel bad for Sam's death .

Yup Daddu n Vicky know more abt Khushi , after all they also were with her in the last 7 years. She has lost trust in everyone and who can blame her ??

Yup ... I was wondering why no one commented on Arnav's outburst 😉😉 ... n a flashback is due ... (already warning , it wont be nice )

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Nishi

@nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: sarach
loved the update..it was fab..liked the spirit of a soldier..i always wanted to go in army and serve the nation..but couldnt..

am glad you liked the update ...
oh same here ... wanted to join defense services but as they say , not all dreams come true ... ...