ARHI SS/FF : The Protector - part 16,pg 131

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#391

Originally posted by: Nici0306
woah khushi ko daat padi...

yeah dear ... after all she got the great ASR to worry n panic... 😉

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#392

Originally posted by: zafi
Awesome.⭐️
Loved it.
UPdate soon. Thanks.😃

thanks a lot Zafi !!! glad you liked it 😊

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#393

Originally posted by: sweetygirl28
Nishi dear excellent update as usual.. loved khushi's pov.. and for a minute i thought she was gonna talk to arnie something personal but then it had to be with his murder mystery..

Loved it!!! and pls dont let anything happen to sam :)

ha ha ha ... gotcha !!! 😉😉
I know ... many would have expected her to tell something personal ... the least one being take care !! 😆😆😆 ... but me being me ... 😈 ... how can I let some of the predictions come true 😈😈😈 ...

n don worry ... at some point of time , she *will* speak personal stuff with him , ILU included ... but you need to wait for tat 😳😳😳

n glad you liked the part dear ... n Sam ?? lemme think ...

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#394

Originally posted by: dumas
awesome update loved it continue soon wait for her reply

thanks a lott dear !!!
am glad you liked the part 😊 ...

PS : haaye ... the pic !!!! 😍

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#395

Originally posted by: KaushalyaFan
That was awesome. You ended your suspense thriller (which I love BTW) on a cliffhanger. Loved it. Great talent. I love mysteries. Loved reading it enjoyed every minute of it. I was at the edge of my seat. BRAVO!!

KF;)

thanks a lot KF ...
yeah ... I love to end an episode hanging !!! ... you see it annoys ppl more 😳😳😳 ...
Am glad you loved this part 😊

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#396

Originally posted by: -Saibo-
Love your usage of the last line cuz like bs was awesome n I totally pictured it. Omfg I loved thisss. Please pm me!!

yeah ... I expected many to like tat part where he yells ...
I wanted him to yell ... but I dint know how much I shd make him yell , before Khushi breaks his mouth !!! ...
n guess what ?? this part literally fell into my lap , in the form of actual story yelling 😆😆😆

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#397

Originally posted by: Lyraa99
amazing update.. loved the fact that u used the exact words of the show...*sigh*... could picture the scene ol d mo beta

thanks a lot Lyraa ... am glad you liked the update
N i was sure you would like that one ... splly with Barun emoting it soo well 😉

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Chhaya

@arhi-fan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#398

Hey nishi!
It was an awesome. In the first few lines u also scared us that wat happened to khushi. But she was safe n way u described the whole scene was awesome. N the last scene of arnav's concern for her was awesomes. Hope khushi understands his feelings n gives him a second chance. Update soon.

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#399

Originally posted by: Zeee
omg! wicked part. loved khushi's control in this.
xxx

Wicked ??? 😔😔😔😔 ...
Poor me 😳😳

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#400

Originally posted by: pinkpearlz
I honestly thought she would confess, when she said arnav i have to say something, but then it turned out to be mystery related. yippee! Our girl survived. And arnav's burst out, hayye!
Great update!

lol gal ... she is a widow who cried over her husband's and her child's graves ... dont you thing it is too soon for her to confess her dormant love to Arnav ?? ... obvi it was mystery related ... coz it ll take a lot more for her to confess her love ...
n yeah ... tat's what Arnav is "Blast ended skrewt" !!! 😆😆
Glad you liked the part 😊