ARHI SS/FF : The Protector - part 16,pg 131

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#411

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh
woah you started this? i love the concept
sorry havent been much on IF lately! now let me go catch up this and i will give you detailed comment later :D:D

yup ... me started this story ... went all ninja n james bondish n saltish !!! 😆😆😉😉 ...
glad you liked the concept
n no probs abt not visiting IF ... so ofcourse u cudn read it be4 ...

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#412

Originally posted by: littlemoi
Omg!! This update was FAB!!
LOVED IT!!

Thank you so much for the pm!!

thanks a llot Littlemoi ...
am glad you liked the update 😊

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#413

Originally posted by: ilive2laugh
kk so finally caught up to all 8 parts
and totally loving it

makes me wonder what happended to both of them in those 7 yrs!

looking forward to next chapter

8 parts at once will b thoda difficult to digest ... but am glad you like it ...

what all happened in the 7 yrs will slowly comeout in flashbacks ... don worry ...
atleast till now you know Khushi married , n lost her hubby n kid + shez become one hot Special Service Agent 😉 ...
for more details ... keep stalking this post 😆😆😳😳

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#414

Originally posted by: aditi07
excellent update...loves it totally 👏👏
initially i too thought that she was gonna say something personal to arnav but guess we'll have to wait for some more time for that to happen😕
...liked arnav's outburst...wonder how khushi is gonna respond!!
plz update soon😊

p.s really awaiting for ur update of ur other FF "Life & its Twists"...its one of my fav...plz update it as soon as u can😊

thanks a lot aditi ...
considering ArHi I expected most of them to think she will spk something personal ... but me being me ... aka 😈... had to add in a twist ... 😉😉
yup ... u ll hab to wait for the right time ... for her to spk "personally" to him

oh an abt Life and its Twists ... its on hold dear ... coz my brain can work in only one mode ... mushy - romantic - cute or Action - Kickass - Thriller ... although LAIT will also have its share of action n thrills (oopss!!) ... I ll continue it after this FF is done 😊

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#415

Originally posted by: alice54
Excellent Update dear!!!!!!

I so loved it when he blasted her at the hospital...just liek the one in show...it was beautiful...

and all the math, geography & science(as i say about all these description of timing, location and logic) was very good...actually damn good...i wondered whether you are a science student...or more specific great at physics or math?????

waiting to see what Kushi replies...

continue soon...

She deserved it right ?? after all she made ASR panic n worry ...😉😉

am glad you liked all the science stuff ... n I am a Electronics & Comm Engineer ,so have to get my facts right ... else ... I cannot be convinced about it right ?? 😉

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#416

Originally posted by: arhi-fan
Hey nishi!
It was an awesome. In the first few lines u also scared us that wat happened to khushi. But she was safe n way u described the whole scene was awesome. N the last scene of arnav's concern for her was awesomes. Hope khushi understands his feelings n gives him a second chance. Update soon.

😆😆😆😆 ...

In true Barney Stinson style - Challenge won ... aka ... got you guys worried abt Khushi ...
Am glad you liked the way the scene of her escaping was potrayed ... n further glad that you liked Arnav's concern for her ...
Abt her understanding and giving him a second chance ... lets c 😉

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Nishi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#417

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dumas

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Posted: 13 years ago

#418

He knew what he had signed up for ... and he faced it ... and if you ever feel sorry for him , it will be an insult to him !!! ... A soldier who fights to death never dies ,but the soldier who fights for existence never truly exists ... and He fought to death ...

words that are completely true awesome update it was very touching loved it khushi is not a team player i think she just does not want them to get her loved the update thanks for the pm now she has met anjali can't wait for what happens next

Edited by dumas - 13 years ago