Pt42 'Devil In Love'Thrd11 Pg51 - Page 18

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part...loved the romantic game which turned passionate...update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update dear luvd it...plz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved the game..
waiting 4 ur twist😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
WHAT A LOVELY UPDATE
HE IS CHANGING BECAUSE OF HER AND HER LOVE AND SHE IS FINALLY ABLE TO TRUST HIM
HIS LIFE HAS BEEN TOUGH AND WITHOUT LOVE AND FAMILY
SHE HAS TO BE THE ONE TO GIVE IN TO HIS DEMANDS JUST TO PROVE TO HIM THAT SHE LOVES HIM AND CAN DO ANYTHINH FOR HIM
ONLY THEN WILL HE BELIEVE HER
LOVED THE BOLD STEP TAKEN BY HER TO INITIATE THEIR LOVE MAKING AND THE POSITIVE REACTION FROM HIM BY GIVING HER THE CHOICE

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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ...
waiting for dere
SR 😳 😳 😳 😳 den
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome...
awww went with him to be with him..
luved it...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago

STRUPANDO,
FANTABULOUSLY,
FANTASTICAL UPDATE...
uff uff uff hot hot hot update...
what truth & dare...hatts off anii...

Go ahead..

But now after giving it a second thought this idea didn't seemed to be that appealing

What will she ask him for "truth"..???

He is always ready to speak truth and tell how evil he was

What will she ask him for "dare"..???

He is always so already for it..

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Dare..!

Then show it.. An instant reply came shocking her to the core..

What..????????? She exclaimed in horror..

Yes then show it.. Make me feel the exactly the same way that you feel when I touch you..

She gulped down her saliva to ease her throat and looked at him.. He was right it was always him who initiated physical love and it was always him who made her go through that blissful numbness..

She loved him but she never made him feel special in that way..

Am I right..? Am I making him suffer more by keeping him away from myself..??

I never expressed that I also want him in every way like he wants me.. Both physically as well as emotionally..


very well written anii...

i jst loved the way geet took initiative & cared for maan's feelings,& loved him boldly & made him feel special for the ist time...so sweet of her...

this is what love all abt...love is care...

& see what happened ...

maan also changed...

It was something I never felt before..

You made me feel something new..

Like.. he paused..

Like being loved..?

Like being desired..?

No..

Like being Alive..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

First time I felt I am still alive..

bueatifully written anii...
loved geet's dare to the core...
she changed devil wd her one sweet dare...

May be I have to give him myself unconditionally emotionally as well as physically,to change him..!!! Oh God.. Why it has to be so difficult..??

But loving someone was never easy..

May be my selfless love is the only thing that can change him. Or maybe it's already changing him..

yes geet u r thinking absolutely ri8...

true love can do miracles...

waiting for ur twist axiously anii...as u r twist queen & u alwz come up wd brilliant twists.which bueatifies & enhance ur story more.

super duper hit update...

jst loving both of them...

& above all love u more for such brillian update...

bole to EK DM FAAADOOO


congrats for new thread sweety...


@ranji
loved ur ideas
hehehe yaar anii dont embarrass me...
what would i be & what would b my ideas...😆😆
u,u urself have genious mind & creativity darling...
bt luv u for making me feel special...



sneha as alwz brilliant lines sweety...

ek dm ROCKING...

Edited by ranjeeta1410 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Mind blowing update di..
Actually I hadnt wanted Geet to give in..But you explained the whole thing so well that it felt so right for them.I loved this part so much.The slight change in Maan's behaviour.
continue soon..
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Posted: 13 years ago
i love dis new twist yes geet need to give herself to maan completely and selflessly if she really wants him to change
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update Annie
loved it
so maan and geet were playing truth and dare
and they both got there answer if she loves him unconditionally he is changing
awesome going track
flaw like this it will be a bang of ff
thanx for pm
continue soon

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