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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks all for your Love and enthusiasm towards this FF. Your Love is one of the reason I even didn't think of stop writing this. Thanks for reading it with so much anticipation.
P.S.- sorry I update usually late. There are some time problem with me so it takes time. I will try to update more frequently.😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

UPDATE 9


Next morning Kria woke up with a very refreshing feel as she forgot all the events from night. The moment she stepped on floor, her paining ankle reminded her that last night she cried and Rey dropped her home.

Her day again started with lots of question. She went to washroom and stood in front of mirror. Instead of her face, all she can see a lot of questions on her face. Kria knows now that Reyansh matters to her. She feels offended when someone taunts her about him. She knows that she wants to be with him.

Still giving it a name of love is early for her. She felt agony when she remembered that entire Sharon incident. Kria busted suddenly. She shouted on herself"Kria Ghai that's what your self-respect is!!!" Why you were quiet when that Sharon insulted you!! Why you left the place crying!!! Kria was feeling angry on her actions.

Reyansh drove back to his apartment in morning after spending full night on seashore. He was tired as he hasn't slept. He directly opened a cupboard. He brought out some pictures from it. Three kids were smiling to camera. He smiled and caressed the picture. Then second picture, Rey in his teen age with a beautiful girl holding a trophy. Then another pic, Vicky and That girl were showing tongue out to camera. Rey laughed and a tear drop slide down from his eye core. Rey put all the pictures back to cupboard and leaned on his bed seeking some sleep. But sleep was not there. Some random scenes were there in his eyes. A teenage girl of about 15 years was dancing Ballet in her white frock. He is asking Rey to join but all this scene disappeared as Rey went to deep sleep.

Vicky went to Kria's college. Kria was in library. She saw Vicky coming. She was amazed. Vicky talked to her for half an hour and Kria's expression can tell that it was something serious. Kria was shocked with Vicky's interpretation. Vicky was inviting her to Amma's place as he wants her to meet Amma. Kria asked him "but why??" Why you want me to meet Reyansh's surrogate mother??? Kria was portraying as she has nothing connected to Rey. Kria was right on her part as why would a girl would want to meet a boy's mother!!! It's little too much!! Vicky made a firm face and said looking in her eyes, "Look Kria!! You feel for him and I can know it as your eyes are telling. And moreover that Rey's eyes and behavior said tons last night. The way he confronted Sharon last night for the behavior she did with you!! Now it was time for Kria to get a shock. She interrupted Vicky and asked "what?? Rey confronted her??? Vicky said yeah!! He did.

Vicky said "look Kria!! I know you are too confused with your new feelings towards Rey. That's why I want you to meet Amma as she will help you too in knowing exactly why Rey is so indifferent towards you.

Kria is in deep thinking. She said that she needs time to think. Vicky said "fair enough you take your time."

Vicky in evening gave a visit to Rey. Rey was asleep till now. Vicky behaved so natural and teased him about his spoilt habits these days. Rey said na re!! I just overslept!! Rey asked him to wait and went for a shower. Vicky was here today to judge something. Vicky made a good coffee for them. Rey went out from shower and hugged Vicky for that relaxing coffee.

Vicky was seeing TV and he deliberately switched on a dance channel where some good couple dance was coming. Rey looked at Vicky as he wants him to change the channel. Vicky behaved ignorant. He said "wow man!! Look at the lifts and technique. This couple is good. They are reminding me of you and Avni. He said her name with so much intensity. Rey looked at him with agony and took remote control from him and off the TV. He was restless. He was not able to sit and reached balcony. Vicky felt the heat as he knew he has reminded him of something strong. Vicky came to him and stood quietly. Rey's Bugatti was parked in open parking. Rey pointed his finger towards his bugatti and said that's what my destiny is!! Vicky asked what??? Rey said things which were past are not define Reyansh anymore. That bugatti and racing is my life now. Avni and dance is gone now. Vicky was like shocked as Rey never talked that much about life and things after her departure.

Vicky changed the topic to avoid this disturbed feel from Rey's face. He said Rey mere bhai!! Kria was thanking you for dropping her home last night as she has hurt ankle. Rey looked at him with a different expression as some soothing thing is being just talked of. He asked how is she now?? Vicky dramatically said don't know!! I haven't met her. Neha conveyed her thanks to me!!

Rey's all disturbed look and thinking process, Kria's name broke all that. Her name took him out of that big maze of past. Vicky's work was done. He knows now what he wanted to know. He left Rey's place.

Kria on the other hand was thinking about one valid reason she should visit Rey's Amma. She was thinking that she should go there as Vicky was saying Amma can tell her reason about indifferent behavior of Rey and Kria wants to know that reason. She called Vicky and told him that she wants to meet Amma. Vicky was happy with her yes and he told her to be ready tomorrow.

Next morning Vicky, Neha and Kria were on their way to Amma's place. Kria was nervous as she herself wondering that why she is nervous!!

Neha was excited to meet Amma as she has heard a lot about Amma from Vicky. Amma's house was away from city's noise. It's a green place with lots of greenery. It was beautiful and serene. Vicky stopped car in front of house and shouted "something is cooking"!! Yay!!! I so love Amma!! Something yummy is definitely cooking. Aroma is saying it!! Neha asked Vicky does she know we are coming??? Vicky said yeah!! She knows.

Kria reached to door and she opened it as it wasn't locked. A polite voice came aa jao beta!! No need to afraid. An old lady from kitchen with apron on came out!! Kria smiled and wished Namastey!! She hugged her unexpectedly and asked them to sit down. Vicky hugged Amma like a kid and gave a lot of kisses. Amma with an irritated face asked him to stop nautanki!! Vicky said so mama!! What's cooking!!! Amma pulled his cheek and said tu kabhi nahi sudhrega!! Still thinking about food!! She said go in kitchen!! There are mirchi ke pakode!! Your favorites!! Vicky ran towards Kitchen and Neha followed him as Neha was thinking Vicky is behaving so immature. Poor Neha thought this will give wrong expression to Amma. But Amma knew Vicky since he was a kid!! He's like a child to her.

Now Kria and Amma were alone in hall!! Amma sat besides Kria and asked her so you are Kria!! Kria smiled and nodded head in consent!! Amma noticed that Kria is uncomfortable so they talked stuff like families and likings. Kria was speaking a lot about her favorite things like a kid. Amma took her to lawn behind the house. There was a lobby from where they passed. A glass window can tell that there's a beautiful room. Kria slowed down and was looking at the room. And then she stopped completely. Her eyes were jammed on a wall full of pictures. She recognized Rey and Vicky in their childhood pics. Amma noticed her face and asked do you want to see those from near??? Kria felt embarrassed as peeping in others' room is not etiquette. Amma added its Rey's room. She opened the room door and went in. Kria followed her. It was dusty. Amma with her apron started cleaning a picture of Rey smiling. Amma added how dirty this room is now. It's locked from years now. Kria with am amazed reaction asked from years??? Why Rey doesn't stay here. Amma smiled and said nope he stay sometimes but not in this room. Kria added but why?? This room is so beautiful. Amma touched her face with affection and said Yaadein beta!! They don't leave you and your beautiful things.

Vicky called Amma!!!! Amma left the room. Kria was all alone in that room now. She saw that picture wall with a lot of pictures on it. She saw in every picture whether it's a childhood picture or later ones, a girl is with Rey and in some pics with Vicky too. Kria was very curious. He saw some pics of dancing Rey. In one picture Rey with no shirt was dancing like a street dancer in a face off. Kria loved the passionate look on his face. In that Pic, Rey was of 18 or around. She was so amazed to see these pictures. In one picture, Rey was holding that girl in a dancing position. Kria made a face as she is jealous. Then all of sudden she thought Rey and dance, what is relation between these two??? Reyansh is a racer not dancer. She was on her own train of questions.

Amma joined her silently. Kria noticed her presence quite late. Kria said "oh aap kab aaye?? Amma laughed and said when you were caressing Rey's picture. Kria blushed. Amma said open your mouth and put a mirchi pakora in her mouth. Kria was like so happy with her gesture. She said Thanks Amma!! Then rectified Aunty!! Amma said nope!! Amma was better.

Kria wanted to ask her about Rey's dance and that girl but how!!! She saw some big trophies and reached them and asked Amma Rey won that much awards in racing!! Amma said nope!!! They are not from racing!! They are his prizes of winning a number of dance championships. This was perfect moment to ask Amma about Rey's dance. She asked Amma Rey used to dance?? How come??? He is a hard core racer. Amma laughed and said racer toh wo ab hai. My baby Rey is dancer first. Kria with a more curious face asked really???? Amma said yeah!! Really!! I am an old women but I can say that I haven't seen that magical and charismatic dancer in my life. He used to live for it. He and Avni were dancing stars. Amma stopped in between. As she said something wrong. Kria counter questioned AVNI???? Amma said nothing. She said Khana thanda ho raha hai!! I made Pulao for you as you loved it!! Kria knew now that Amma doesn't want to talk about Avni!! Amma left!! Kria was also leaving the room!! But her feet stopped again. A small diary was there. Kria took it as she wants to know about all this. She put it in her bag. All of them giggled during lunch!! Vicky was really happy at Amma's home and he almost forgot about why he is here??? Kria was all busy in her thoughts. She was trying to figure all these things which she came to know.

Vicky and Amma talked for a long time after lunch alone. Kria and Neha were in garden. Amma was looking at Kria from window with a smile. They all left in evening after this wonderful day with Amma.

This small meeting of Amma and Kria revealed Avni's firm presence in memories of Rey and family. Kria knows now Rey used to dance but why he doesn't dance now. Where's Avni???

For knowing all this..keep reading…😉

I hope you liked this part…😳

Love ya all…🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awww...Adi dii..I'm so happy that you updated this one...!!!
Its so real!!! The way you express it..I feel like I'm there in this story as one among them..!!!
In short..I could feel the story..!! Haha...New experience..aaj tak kisi ne bhi kisi bhi writer se nahi kaha hoga..!!! Way to go Adi dii...!!!! You're great..!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
i didnt like this part...i actually luved it...its wonderful n amma's character is really nice...n dude this mystery of avni is making me more curious to read further...plzzz try n u update the next part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
its awesome part...loved it very much
new twist of AVNI in the story is really very interesting and i am very curious to know who is she and why rey left dance
continue soon waiting eagerly for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago


n thank u for continuing it unlike others



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Posted: 13 years ago
Thnx fr cntinuing ur ff...luv u fr dat...:)
Wat an update mahn...it ws jst awesome...:D
Lyk kriya nw m also curious 2 knw who dis avni is n y rey does nt dance nymore...plz update soon...othrwise m gonna die f curiosity...;)
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Posted: 13 years ago
beautiful update :D and thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
AWESOME update...
Now i'm really excited to know about Avni.
Please next update jaldi karna
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Posted: 13 years ago
Rey is a dancer too... Ye to hona hi tha,,,, thankgod vicky realised feelings of both otherwise D3 me to rey ko tang hi karta rehta hai... Loved the interaction of kriya nd amma,,, I wish she could have told her about avni,,,, bt ur twist is even better- diary se pata chalega,,, obviously rey ki direct dil se feelings pata chalengi . . . . . . Good job yar!!!

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